Subject: [Anima] FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-01.txt

From: "Michael Behringer (mbehring)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 21 Mar 2016 18:14:26 +0000

Here is the new version of the reference draft, with contributions from some co-authors. 

Specifically: 
- naming section re-done by Bing. 
- re-ordered section 4 and made some editorial changes
- generally, always point to the relevant WG document, to have all the pieces linked together. 
- entered text for section 6, which should be sufficient (mainly pointers)
- some changes to intent section
- some shortening of sections 8 and 9 still to be done. 

I think the linkage between the reference doc and the other docs is getting quite solid. 

Feedback welcome. 

Michael

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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-01.txt
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> Name:		draft-ietf-anima-reference-model
> Revision:	01
> Title:		A Reference Model for Autonomic Networking
> Document date:	2016-03-21
> Group:		anima
> Pages:		23
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-anima-reference-
> model-01.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-reference-
> model/
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> 01
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> model-01
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> Abstract:
>    This document describes a reference model for Autonomic Networking.
>    The goal is to define how the various elements in an autonomic
>    context work together, to describe their interfaces and relations.
>    While the document is written as generally as possible, the initial
>    solutions are limited to the chartered scope of the WG.
> 
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