Subject: Re: [CCAMP] New Version Notification for draft-malis-ccamp-rfc5787bis-01

From: Acee Lindem <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 23 Sep 2010 09:49:12 -0400

Most of the changes in the this revision are an attempt to make the document easier to understand for people unfamiliar with ITU ASON terminology. This is in response to comments from Julien Meuric and others at the IETF 78 CCAMP meeting. 
    
        - Section 2 now contains text better explaining the hierarchical relationship between RAs. Much of this is taken from RFC 4258. 
        - Section 3 has been rewritten with the description of an OSPF router advertising on behalf multiple ASON transport nodes simplified. The subscripted variables (Ri, Pi, and Li) have been removed in favor of this simplified terminology.
        - Section 5 includes solely editorial changes. Some of the longer sentences have been split and some ambiguous language has been clarified. 
        - Section 6 has been rewritten to reflect the simplified terminology introduced in section 3. Additionally, we have clarified when the rules for inclusion of the new section 6 Sub-TLVs. We also removed the restriction on when these new Sub-TLVs may be specified. 
        - Section 7 includes some changes to reflect the new section 3 terminology, as well as, a couple editorial changes. 

Lyndon Ong will coordinate review of this revision with the ITU Q.12/15 SG at their Shanghai meeting. 

Thanks,
Acee

On Sep 22, 2010, at 5:44 AM, IETF I-D Submission Tool wrote:

> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-malis-ccamp-rfc5787bis-01.txt has been successfully submitted by Andrew Malis and posted to the IETF repository.
> 
> Filename:	 draft-malis-ccamp-rfc5787bis
> Revision:	 01
> Title:		 Updates to ASON Routing for OSPFv2 Protocols (RFC 5787bis)
> Creation_date:	 2010-09-22
> WG ID:		 Independent Submission
> Number_of_pages: 20
> 
> Abstract:
> The ITU-T has defined an architecture and requirements for operating
> an Automatically Switched Optical Network (ASON).
> 
> The Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS) protocol suite
> is designed to provide a control plane for a range of network
> technologies including optical networks such as time division
> multiplexing (TDM) networks including SONET/SDH and Optical Transport
> Networks (OTNs), and lambda switching optical networks.
> 
> The requirements for GMPLS routing to satisfy the requirements of
> ASON routing, and an evaluation of existing GMPLS routing protocols
> are provided in other documents.  This document defines extensions to
> the OSPFv2 Link State Routing Protocol to meet the requirements for
> routing in an ASON.
> 
> Note that this work is scoped to the requirements and evaluation
> expressed in RFC 4258 and RFC 4652 and the ITU-T Recommendations
> current when those documents were written.  Future extensions of
> revisions of this work may be necessary if the ITU-T Recommendations
> are revised or if new requirements are introduced into a revision of
> RFC 4258.
> 
> 
> 
> The IETF Secretariat.
> 
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