Subject: [CCAMP] Document shepherd write-up re draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-06.txt

From: Dieter Beller <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 7 Oct 2016 13:15:51 +0200

Hi authors of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-06.txt,

as part of my document shepherd review, I have the following editorial
comments:

The Abstract should be enhanced. It is fairly short. Some text from the
Abstract of RFC7698 could be used. The Abstract should explicitly mention
ITU-T Recommendation G.694.1 (see abstract of RFC7698).

The last paragraph of the Introduction should contain a reference to RFC4203.
It shall also state that this document defines extensions to RFC7580.

Corrections are required in lines 120, 247, and 509.

For your convenience, you can find the necessary corrections and my
comments in the attached file

(revision tracking is on).

As stated above, this is all editorial and the technical content is
unchanged.

Thanks,

Dieter