Subject: [Detnet] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on charter-ietf-detnet-00-00: (with COMMENT)

From: "Alissa Cooper" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 01 Sep 2015 21:18:30 -0700

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-detnet-00-00: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Either there is a word missing here or there is an extraneous "that":

As part of the overall
architecture work, the working group will document which deployment
environments and types of topologies that are within (or outside) the
scope of the DetNet architecture.