Subject: RE: [Disman] Section 4.1.7 of draft-ietf-disman-alarm-mib-15.txt

From: "Sharon Chisholm" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 7 Oct 2003 14:42:56 -0400

Hi

The following is the proposed resolution to Randy-42. Assuming no objection,
this item will be considered closed conditional on the proposed edit being
done.

In section 4.1.7, replace 

"   named alarm lists.  A middle manager could, create an alarmListName"

With

"   named alarm lists.  A middle manager could create an alarmListName"

Sharon
-----Original Message-----
From: Randy Presuhn [mailto:[email-masked]] 
Sent: Wednesday, October 01, 2003 7:27 PM
To: Disman (E-mail)
Subject: [Disman] Section 4.1.7 of draft-ietf-disman-alarm-mib-15.txt

Hi -

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> 42) 4.1.7: "therefore," -> ""
...

There's a superfluous comma left over in this line on page 14:  named alarm
lists.  A middle manager could, create an alarmListName

Randy

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From: "Sharon Chisholm" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 7 Oct 2003 14:42:56 -0400

Hi

With

Sharon
-----Original Message-----
From: Randy Presuhn [mailto:[email-masked]] 
Sent: Wednesday, October 01, 2003 7:27 PM
To: Disman (E-mail)
Subject: [Disman] Section 4.1.7 of draft-ietf-disman-alarm-mib-15.txt

Hi -

<[email-masked]>

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Randy