Subject: Re: [DNSOP] [IANA #1129407] Last Call: <draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08.txt> (C-DNS: A DNS Packet Capture Format) to Proposed Standard

From: Sara Dickinson <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 12 Dec 2018 13:23:45 +0000

Hi All,

We’ve done another update to the draft to add a new section on IANA requirements. Hopefully this addresses all the questions on this topic - please review and let us know.

*** SINCE THIS SECTION WAS ABSENT IN THE -08 DOCUMENT ORIGINALLY REVIEWED BY IANA WE REQUEST RE-REVIEW OF THE -10 DOCUMENT ***

We made one other minor change - we realised there was still a reference to a SVG image of a graph in the appendix, we’ve replaced this with a table of the data values. 

We think we have now addresses all the issues from the IESG review - please let us know if we missed anything.

Best regards

Sara. 

> On 12 Dec 2018, at 13:15, [email-masked] wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : C-DNS: A DNS Packet Capture Format
>        Authors         : John Dickinson
>                          Jim Hague
>                          Sara Dickinson
>                          Terry Manderson
>                          John Bond
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-10.txt
> 	Pages           : 77
> 	Date            : 2018-12-12
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes a data representation for collections of DNS
>   messages.  The format is designed for efficient storage and
>   transmission of large packet captures of DNS traffic; it attempts to
>   minimize the size of such packet capture files but retain the full
>   DNS message contents along with the most useful transport metadata.
>   It is intended to assist with the development of DNS traffic
>   monitoring applications.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-10
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-10
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-10
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> 
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> On 13 Nov 2018, at 22:35, Amanda Baber via RT <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> (BEGIN IANA COMMENTS)
> 
> IESG/Authors/WG Chairs:
> 
> The IANA Functions Operator has reviewed draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments:
> 
> We understand that this document doesn't require any registry actions. 
> 
> While it's often helpful for a document's IANA Considerations section to remain in place upon publication even if there are no actions, if the authors strongly prefer to remove it, we do not object.
> 
> If this assessment is not accurate, please respond as soon as possible.
> 
> Thank you,
> 
> Amanda Baber
> Lead IANA Services Specialist
> 
> (END IANA COMMENTS)
> 
> On Tue Oct 30 13:10:21 2018, [email-masked] wrote:
>> 
>> The IESG has received a request from the Domain Name System Operations
>> WG
>> (dnsop) to consider the following document: - 'C-DNS: A DNS Packet
>> Capture
>> Format'
>>  <draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08.txt> as Proposed Standard
>> 
>> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
>> final
>> comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
>> [email-masked] mailing lists by 2018-11-13. Exceptionally, comments may
>> be
>> sent to [email-masked] instead. In either case, please retain the
>> beginning of
>> the Subject line to allow automated sorting.
>> 
>> Abstract
>> 
>> 
>> This document describes a data representation for collections of DNS
>> messages.  The format is designed for efficient storage and
>> transmission of large packet captures of DNS traffic; it attempts to
>> minimize the size of such packet capture files but retain the full
>> DNS message contents along with the most useful transport metadata.
>> It is intended to assist with the development of DNS traffic
>> monitoring applications.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> The file can be obtained via
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format/
>> 
>> IESG discussion can be tracked via
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-
>> format/ballot/
>> 
>> The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:
>> 
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2909/
>