Subject: Comments on draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-22

From: Bjoern Hoehrmann <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 18 Mar 2013 14:46:21 +0100

Hi,

  http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-22 in section
4.4 the example

     HTTP/1.1 416 Range Not Satisfiable
     Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2012 15:41:54 GMT
     Content-Range: bytes */47022

has a malformed Date header, 20 Jan 2012 was a Friday, not a Monday, and
that does not seem explained in the surrounding prose.

In appendix A, "Author/Change controller" should be two fields per BCP
13.

regards,
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