Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04

From: Elwyn Davies <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 28 Aug 2017 12:24:28 -0700

Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2017-08-28
IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31

Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03.  The new version
is ready with one introduced nit.  Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat
overlong.

Nit:
s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs
brief explanation.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: