Subject: [ipcdn] FW: [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC5098 (1348)

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Date: Tue, 11 May 2010 12:24:59 +0200

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Subject: [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC5098 (1348)

The following errata report has been held for document update for
RFC5098, "Signaling MIB for PacketCable and IPCablecom Multimedia
Terminal Adapters (MTAs)". 

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5098&eid=1348

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Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Technical

Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <[email-masked]> Date Reported: 2008-03-04 Held
by: Dan Romascanu (IESG)

Section: 5, pg.20

Original Text
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  pktcSigCapabilityVendorExt      OBJECT-TYPE

     ...

     DESCRIPTION

        " The vendor extension allows vendors to provide a list of

          additional capabilities.

          The syntax for this MIB object in ABNF ([RFC5234]) is

          specified to be zero or more occurrences of vendor

          extensions, as follows:

           pktcSigCapabilityVendorExt  = *(vendor-extension)

|          vendor-extension = (ext symbol alphanum) DQUOTE ; DQUOTE

|          ext      = DQUOTE %x58 DQUOTE

|          symbol   = (DQUOTE %x2D DQUOTE)/(DQUOTE %x2D DQUOTE)

           alphanum = 1*6(ALPHA/DIGIT)

         "

Corrected Text
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  pktcSigCapabilityVendorExt      OBJECT-TYPE

     ...

     DESCRIPTION

        " The vendor extension allows vendors to provide a list of

          additional capabilities.

          The syntax for this MIB object in ABNF ([RFC5234]) is

          specified to be zero or more occurrences of vendor

          extensions, as follows:

           pktcSigCapabilityVendorExt  = *(vendor-extension)

|          vendor-extension = ext symbol alphanum ";" 

|          ext      = %x58               ; uppercase only X

|          symbol   = %x2B / %x2D        ; + or -

           alphanum = 1*6(ALPHA/DIGIT)

         "

Notes
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Symptom: ABNF grossly nonsensical:

         ABNF comment  '; DQUOTE'  perhaps intended as non-comment;

         all DQUOTEs apparently should be removed;

         two identical alternatives for symbol do not make sense.

Correction is based on earlier draft versions, applying the

corrections necessary to obtain valid ABNF, yet specifying

what probably was intended.

Alternatively, the following line might be substituted above:

|          symbol   = "+" / "-"

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RFC5098 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-signaling-15)
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Title               : Signaling MIB for PacketCable and IPCablecom
Multimedia Terminal Adapters (MTAs)
Publication Date    : February 2008
Author(s)           : G. Beacham, S. Kumar, S. Channabasappa
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG