Subject: [IPsec] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7296 (6779)

From: RFC Errata System <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 8 Dec 2021 09:49:58 -0800 (PST)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7296,
"Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6779

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: warren.wang <[email-masked]>

Section: 1.1.1

Original Text
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Each endpoint would announce the set of addresses
   "behind" it, and packets would be sent in tunnel mode where the inner
   IP header would contain the IP addresses of the actual endpoints.

Corrected Text
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Each tunnel endpoint would announce the set of addresses
   "behind" it, and packets would be sent in tunnel mode where the inner
   IP header would contain the IP addresses of the actual endpoints.

Notes
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"Each tunnel endpoint" will make it easy to understand.

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RFC7296 (draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-04)
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Title               : Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)
Publication Date    : October 2014
Author(s)           : C. Kaufman, P. Hoffman, Y. Nir, P. Eronen, T. Kivinen
Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
Source              : IP Security Maintenance and Extensions
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG