Subject: Re: [mile] xmpp-grid-01 review

From: "Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 12 Nov 2016 16:57:39 +0000

Thanks for the feedback Chris.

What could help improve your overall understanding?  If you are attending the sessions live, we can chat so that I can further improve the draft to make it clearer….

Thanks again,
Nancy

From: mile <[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>> on behalf of Chris Inacio <[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>>
Date: Tuesday, October 18, 2016 at 8:39 PM
To: "[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>" <[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>>
Subject: [mile] xmpp-grid-01 review

I read the diffs from xmpp-grid–00 to xmpp-grid–01 and don’t have any particular issues with the changes.

I have nits in that while comprehensive, I don’t think the amount of detail in the publish/subscribe message examples added to the document particularly enhance my understanding of the operation overall. And there are lots of fiddly unexplained details in the message. BUT, the messages really don’t hurt my understanding of the operation, so this is a nit.

Adding the XEP–0060 reference is appropriate.

--
Chris Inacio
[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>