Subject: FW: Editorial comment on draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-03.txt

From: "Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 2 Apr 2003 00:30:57 -0500

Hi,

Attached is an editorial comment that has been sent recently to the authors.

Regards,
Kam

-----Original Message-----
From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:[email-masked]]
Sent: Friday, March 28, 2003 10:53 AM
To: Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam); [email-masked]; Thomas D. Nadeau
Subject: Re: Editorial comment on draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-03.txt

Quite right.
Thanks for reading.
Adrian
----- Original Message -----
From: "Thomas D. Nadeau" <[email-masked]>
To: "Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam)" <[email-masked]>; <[email-masked]>;
<[email-masked]>
Sent: Friday, March 28, 2003 10:13 AM
Subject: Re: Editorial comment on draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-03.txt

>
>          Will do.
>
>          --tom
>
> >As Version 03 of the Overview document now explicitly introduces the
> >MPLS-LDP-GENERIC-MIB, MPLS-LDP-ATM-MIB, and MPLS-LDP-FRAME-RELAY-MIB
> >modules in sections 4.5, 4.6, and 4.7 respectively, it will be helpful to
> >have a sentence in these sections to state that the modules are defined in
> >the [LDPMIB] document, e.g., a sentence like
> >"This MIB module is defined in MPLS LDP MIB [LDPMIB]."
> >
> >Regards,
> >Kam
>
>
> http://www.elsevier-international.com/catalogue/title.cfm?ISBN=155860751X
>
>