Subject: [Nfvrg] draft-irtf-nfvrg-nfv-policy-arch-03 - more comments and suggestions

From: Andrew Veitch <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 3 May 2016 20:43:25 +0000

Sorry, yet another comment.

On page 5, in the top paragraph, is the text:

"Therefore, policies should not be written in terms of policy enforcement technologies."

I would be interested to be clear on the difference between a specific action (as mentioned in section 2) in a policy, and referencing specific enforcement technologies in a policy.  My interpretation was that they would be the same thing.  If there can be one, then why not the other?

Also, the next sentence is jumbled, I think.  Perhaps through a rough edit.  I am not sure exactly how to fix it. I think some text could b missing.

"Policies should be translated at the subsystems using the appropriate policy provides a few examples where the policy "a given customer must be given platinum treatment" is translated to appropriate configurations at the respective subsystems."

Thanks

Andy

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