Subject: [pcp] Comments on draft-ietf-pcp-nat64-prefix64-02

From: Dave Thaler <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 1 Jun 2013 00:34:04 +0000

Looks pretty good.  My marked up copy is at
http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-pcp-nat64-prefix64-02.pdf
(or for those who can use .docx:
http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-pcp-nat64-prefix64-02.docx).

Summary:

1)      Text appears contradictory as to whether remembering which server a Pref64

was from is required or just a SHOULD. My preference is to change the SHOULD

to a MUST, and then the rest of the text is fine.

2)      Add reference to draft-ietf-behave-nat64-discovery-heuristic and explain what

cases this handles that the simple heuristic cannot.

3)      Steal a few phrases from draft-ietf-behave-nat64-discovery-heuristic that are

applicable here too.

4)      Various grammatical corrections/suggestions.

-Dave