Subject: RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-pkix-sonof3039-03.txt

From: "Stefan Santesson" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 22 Jan 2004 04:12:52 -0000

Thanks Jim,

These editorial issues will be fixed

/Stefan
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jim Schaad [mailto:[email-masked]]
> Sent: den 21 januari 2004 19:25
> To: Stefan Santesson; 'Tim Polk'; 'Nystrom, Magnus'
> Cc: [email-masked]
> Subject: RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-pkix-sonof3039-03.txt
> 
> Comments on this draft.
> 
> 
> 1.  Section 2, para 2:
>  	The text "where the certificate meet some qualification
> requirements" should be changed to either "certificates meet" or
> "certificate meets"  (grammer)
> 
> 2.  You need to update your example certificate, the DOB is no longer
> formed correctly.
> 
> 3.  I suggest not including a nameRegistrationAuthority in the example
> certificate to illistrate how a certificate complient to this document
> is created.
> 
> jim
> 
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> > Subject: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-pkix-sonof3039-03.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
> > Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the
> > Public-Key Infrastructure (X.509) Working Group of the IETF.
> >
> > 	Title		: Internet X.509 Public Key
> > Infrastructure: Qualified Certificates Profile
> > 	Author(s)	: S. Santesson, M. Nystrom
> > 	Filename	: draft-ietf-pkix-sonof3039-03.txt
> > 	Pages		: 35
> > 	Date		: 2004-1-20
> >
> > This document forms a certificate profile, based on RFC 3280, for
> >    identity certificates issued to natural persons.
> >
> >    The profile defines specific conventions for certificates that
are
> >    qualified within a defined legal framework, named Qualified
> >    Certificates. The profile does however not define any legal
> >    requirements for such Qualified Certificates.
> >
> >    The goal of this document is to define a certificate profile that
> >    supports issuance of Qualified Certificates independent of local
> >    legal requirements.  The profile is however not limited to
> > Qualified
> >    Certificates and further profiling may facilitate specific local
> >    needs.
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