Subject: Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11.txt

From: Alejandro D'Egidio <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 3 Dec 2018 11:47:39 -0300 (ART)

Hello Jordi,
I hope you are doing well.
I've read all the document and think the it's great!
Just a simple note (not technical) regarding this:

It is not relevant who provides the IPv6 Transition CE Router.  In
   most of the cases is the service provider, and in fact is
   responsible, typically, of provisioning/managing at least the WAN
   side.  However, commonly the user has access to configure the LAN
   interfaces, firewall, DMZ, and many other features.  However, in many
   cases, the user must supply or may replace the IPv6 Transition CE
   Router.  This underscores the importance of the IPv6 Transition CE
   Routers supporting the same requirements defined in this document.

Maybe the first "However"can be replaced by "In addition" or simply starting with Commonly...
But, it's not important in comparison with all this work.

Regards,
Alejandro

----- Mensaje original -----
De: "JORDI PALET MARTINEZ" <jordi.palet=[email-masked]>
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Enviados: Viernes, 30 de Noviembre 2018 19:28:09
Asunto: Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11.txt

Hi all,

The new version of this document has been updated only to apply editorial edits as requested by our AD.

Regards,
Jordi

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Asunto: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11.txt

    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations WG of the IETF.
    
            Title           : Requirements for IPv6 Customer Edge Routers to Support IPv4 Connectivity as-a-Service
            Authors         : Jordi Palet Martinez
                              Hans M.-H. Liu
                              Masanobu Kawashima
    	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11.txt
    	Pages           : 22
    	Date            : 2018-11-30
    
    Abstract:
       This document specifies the IPv4 service continuity requirements for
       an IPv6 Customer Edge (CE) router, either provided by the service
       provider or through the retail market.
    
       Specifically, this document extends the "Basic Requirements for IPv6
       Customer Edge Routers" in order to allow the provisioning of IPv6
       transition services for the support of "IPv4 as-a-Service" (IPv4aaS)
       by means of new transition mechanisms.  The document only covers
       transition technologies for delivering IPv4 in IPv6-only access
       networks, commonly called "IPv4 as-a-Service" (IPv4aaS).  This is
       necessary because there aren't sufficient IPv4 addresses available
       for every possible customer/device.  However, devices or applications
       in the customer LANs may be IPv4-only or IPv6-only and still need to
       communicate with IPv4-only services at the Internet.

    The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas/
    
    There are also htmlized versions available at:
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11
    
    A diff from the previous version is available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11

    Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
    until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
    
    Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
    ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
    
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