Subject: Re: [Anima] Significant nits in draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-24

From: Brian E Carpenter <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 24 Jun 2020 14:48:03 +1200

Certified: both these examples are now correct in the -25 draft.

Thanks
   Brian

On 28-Apr-20 13:44, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Thanks to Michael Richardson, we have found some important nits in the GRASP examples in the ACP draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the examples need to be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting levels within the flood message, and the naming
> of constants.
> 
> The draft is already in "Revised I-D Needed" so this can easily be fixed in the next draft.
> 
> In Figure 3:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>         [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000,
>             ["SRV.est", 4, 255 ],
>             [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', TCP, 443]
>         ]
> 
> NEW:
> 
>         [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000,
>            [["SRV.est", 4, 255 ],
>             [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 443]]
>         ]
> 
> 
> In Figure 5:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>         [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000,
>             ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ],
>             [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 15000]
>             ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ],
>             [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 17000]
>         ]
> 
> NEW:
> 
>         [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000,
>            [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ],
>             [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 15000]],
>            [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ],
>             [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 17000]]
>         ]
> 
> Regards
>    Brian
>