Subject: [Detnet] DetNet Use Case Draft 02

From: "Grossman, Ethan A." <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 10 Feb 2016 21:15:28 +0000

Hi Folks,

I have submitted version 02 of the Use Case draft for your review. The only changes since version 01 which I posted yesterday is that I have edited the "Industrial M2M" section to bring it into our agreed-upon format. Today I will edit the Building Automation Systems section, and continue on through the next sections over the next few days, so if anyone has any input based on how the M2M section turned out, and whether the format still seems to make sense, today (or ASAP) would be a very good day for me to hear that input.  I will post an updated version after I complete each section to provide additional opportunities for feedback.

@Use Case Authors - I will send you a "preview" of the edited version to give you a chance to provide feedback before I publish the edited section (as I have done with the Industrial M2M section, which already incorporates feedback from the authors). However, I do need to get essentially all of this work done this week so if I don't hear anything back from you within 24 hours of when I send you a preview I will assume it is ok to publish the draft in its current state (of course feedback can be assimilated later also, once the draft has been published).

Thanks again for your time spent doing such reviews, I know everyone is busy.
Best,
Ethan.