Subject: [DNSOP] latest revisions of AS112 drafts -- editorials

From: Alfred Hönes <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 6 Oct 2009 21:02:29 +0200 (MESZ)

I'd like to mention the remaining few minor editorials I found
still present in the re-posted AS112 drafts.

[[ No new draft version(s) needed; that can be fixed by the
   RFC-Editor or during AUTH48 ! ]]

a) First paragraph of 'Abstract' of both drafts:
   Please use common spelling in the prose:  "RFC1918" --> "RFC 1918"

b) help-help draft, Section 2, 2nd paragraph:
   Please   s/to be be/to be/

Kind regards,
  Alfred.