Subject: [Doh] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on charter-ietf-doh-00-04: (with COMMENT)

From: Alvaro Retana <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 14 Sep 2017 05:54:47 -0700

Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-doh-00-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just a couple of nits:

(1) s/data may used/data may be used

(2) Given that the milestones reflect the intended date for completion, I don't
think it is necessary to also include the date in the charter text.