Subject: [http-auth] Peter Yee's Review of draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06

From: Yoav Nir <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 16:28:51 +0300

Hi.

Peter has reviewed the document, mostly for language (think of it as an early gen-art review).

The result is linked here, both as a Word document with markup and as well as a couple of exported formats.

Yoav

Word format: https://www.dropbox.com/s/xe1oj59vbrrppal/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.docx?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/xe1oj59vbrrppal/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.docx?dl=0>
PDF export: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ueayvfiltghc58s/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.pdf?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/ueayvfiltghc58s/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.pdf?dl=0>
HTML export: https://www.dropbox.com/s/mygpd01f2kd9147/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.html?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/mygpd01f2kd9147/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.html?dl=0>

(apologies for the DropBox prompts to create an account. I did not want to attach 1.5 MB worth of attachments to this message)