Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Updated Shepherd Writeup for draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

From: Roman Danyliw <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 10 Jan 2022 19:39:37 +0000

Hi Linda!

Thanks for the revision to the shepherd report.  Additional comments inline ...

From: Linda Dunbar <[email-masked]>
Sent: Thursday, December 2, 2021 11:07 AM
To: Roman Danyliw <[email-masked]>; [email-masked]
Subject: Updated Shepherd Writeup for draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

Roman,

The Shepherd Writeup has been updated to reflect the changes and progress made through IETF LC.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model/shepherdwriteup/

The YANG module in this document does reference RFC 8805. Therefore, added the following sentence to Question 15:

Yes, the YANG model described in the document has reference to RFC8805 which is an Informational RFC.

[Roman] Thanks for adding it to the write-up.  While RFC8805 is a DOWNREF, this won't be a problem as it was explicitly called out in the IETF Last Call.

The IANA Expert replied "Looks Good" for the IANA Review three days ago. Who to contact for changing the IANA Experts States to "Expert Reviews OK"?

[Roman] The feedback from the experts appears to now be in the system. I see it as reading "Expert Review OK".

Regards,
Roman

Thank you very much,

Linda Dunbar