Subject: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-genarea-milestones-tool-05

From: Ben Campbell <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 20 Sep 2011 16:16:42 -0500

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-genarea-milestones-tool-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-09-29
IETF LC End Date: 2011-09-21

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- Abstract:

The abstract should mention that this updates 6292.

-- section 3, last paragraph, last sentence: "A WG chair also needs to be able to delete one or more existing milestones."

That sentence seems redundant with the last sentence of the previous paragraph

-- section 4, last paragraph: "After this tool is launched, the IETF Secretariat will no longer need to post a change to the database: the tool will do this without intervention by the Secretariat."

Except in the aforementioned case of the secretariat doing this to fix a problem or in an emergency.