Subject: RE: Last Call: <draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-rmpr-optimization-00.txt> (Routing MPR Optimization for the Optimized Link State Routing Protocol version 2 (OLSRv2)) to Proposed Standard

From: "Adrian Farrel" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 21 Jan 2014 17:32:13 -0000

A few minor last call comments coming from my AD review.
The authors have already discussed these and know what to fix at the end of last
call.

Adrian

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I think MPR could usefully be expanded in the document title, in the
Abstract, and on first use in the body.  Then you won't need to expand 
it in Section 3.

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It seems odd that Section 4 has a bullet numbered "1." but no other
numbered bullets.

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I think Section 4 uses the notation of 18.2 of [OLSRv2] not 18.3. At 
least, that is where d1() etc. are defined for revision -19 of that 
document.