Subject: Re: [IPFIX] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5655 (1990)

From: Brian Trammell <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 6 Jan 2010 13:25:49 +0100

Completely agreed on the typographical error here (s/much/must/). I suppose the which/that change is acceptable as well.

On Dec 28, 2009, at 7:45 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:

> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5655,
> "Specification of the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) File Format".
> 
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> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5655&eid=1990
> 
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> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <[email-masked]>
> 
> Section: 12, pg.42
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>                                                 [...].  However, aside
>   from merely applying CMS for signatures, there are several security
> |  issues which much be considered in certain circumstances; these are
>   covered in the subsections below.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>                                                 [...].  However, aside
>   from merely applying CMS for signatures, there are several security
> |  issues that must be considered in certain circumstances; these are
>   covered in the subsections below.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Rationale: broken grammar;  s/which much/that must/ .
> 
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> RFC5655 (draft-ietf-ipfix-file-05)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Specification of the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) File Format
> Publication Date    : October 2009
> Author(s)           : B. Trammell, E. Boschi, L. Mark, T. Zseby, A. Wagner
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : IP Flow Information Export
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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