Subject: changes to the copyright ("submission") document

From: Steve Bellovin <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 04 Nov 2002 14:29:07 -0500

issue: when must an author grant the right to produce derivative works?
resolution: added 3rd pp in sec 5.3

issue: "known to the contributer"
resolution: created a definition (sec 4.8) by moving text from sec 5.2

issue: "personally and reasonably known to the contributor" for trademarke
resolution: modified sec 2.4(e)

issue: contributors's company - but we are individuals
resolution: add "or sponsored by" to 2.3(b),
        add "or residence" to sec 2.4(d)

issue: use of trademarks by implementors
resolution: added 2nd pp of sec 5.4

issue: use of "Portions Copyright" is confusing
resolution: remove "Portions" since the rest of the copyright notice
        states that authors retain rights

issue: copyright in extracted MIBs 
resolution: change to text agreed to in IESG/lawyer discussion

issue: incomplete sentence in sec 7(b)
resolution: complete sentence

issue: additional copyright notices in RFCs
resolution: added 2nd pp to sec 3

issue: limitation to mark representation in 2.3(c)
resolution: remove restriction

plus some minor wording changes to clarify the text

issue: missing security considerations section
resolution: added a security considerations section from rfc 2418

		--Steve Bellovin, http://www.research.att.com/~smb (me)
		http://www.wilyhacker.com ("Firewalls" book)

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