Subject: RE: draft-ietf-ipr-technology-rights-00.txt

From: "Lars-Erik Jonsson (EAB)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 8 Nov 2002 15:29:16 +0100

Hi,

One comment on section 4 of the "IPR-tech" document:

  The initial text above (A), is that supposed to cover
  (A), (B), and (C)? I think it now says that all three
  notices should be included in all ID's, while the texts
  in (B) and (C) are more restrictive. To me, that seems
  to be a contradiction.

  Maybe the text 
       "The following notices should be included in all
       submissions for publication as an Internet Draft"
  is supposed to belong to (A).

Cheers,
/L-E 
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