Subject: [Jmap] draft-ietf-jmap-blob-05 Review

From: Ken Murchison <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 1 Nov 2021 08:58:14 -0400

Overall, this look good.

General comment: probably should fully expand "spec" to "specification" 
throughout

Specific nits:

- Abstract: "defined endpoint" -> "defined endpoints"

- Section 4.1.1: I think the Blob/set{create} response elements should 
be in list format rather than packed together in a single paragraph.

- Section 4.1.3: It is not clear to me whether Blob/set{destroy} is a 
valid method.

- Section 4.1.3: Since the examples are for Blob/set{create}, I think 
they either belong in Section 4.1.1 or in a new 4.1.4.

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Kenneth Murchison
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