Subject: http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ldapbis-protocol-25.txt

From: "Jim Sermersheim" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 21 Jul 2004 16:01:18 -0600

I'm not sure why the ID ACTION message hasn't come across for this yet,
or why the link at http://ietf.org/html.charters/ldapbis-charter.html
hasn't been updated.

But anyway, here is the update summary:

Substantive:

- None

Editorial:

- Moved "Operation and LDAP Exchange Relationship" up to section 3.1
- Changed occurances of 'outstanding' to 'unfinished'
- Minor cleanup to 4.1.11 in the combination of controls section
- Minor cleanup of the definition of "Authorization" in 4.2
- Clarified when protocolError is used for extended operationsin A.2
and 4.12
- Fixed typo in 4.14.3
- Clarified that each octed *and each bit* is significant in 5
- In A.2, clarified that protocolError applies to non-well-formed
messages
- Moved the ellipses in protocolOp to before intermediateResponse
- Added IPR Disclosure Acknowledgement, 
- Updated IPR Notice, Copyright Notice, and Disclaimer

Jim