Subject: [manet] DLEP-17 commants part 7 (and last)

From: "Dearlove, Christopher (UK)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 7 Dec 2015 14:49:35 +0000

Appendices

Appendix A. What is the alternative if starting with an assumed address/port?

Appendix A Peer Discovery. I wasn't initially clear on why the first Peer Discovery arrow had a different termination. No explicit comment on right as to PD not received.

Appendix A has the MAY stop in an odd place after Peer Offer received. I can't see how to produce a really nice flow without three PDs. (First says sent, second says may send again, may give up, but not doing so here, third is received, produces offer. Maybe someone can do better than me.)

Appendix B.1, TCP connect and then what? TCP acknowledgement at least?

Appendix B.2, is TCP close discussed in report? (is it just assumed?)

Appendices B.1/B.2 TCP connect starts at single bar to no bar, TCP close is from double bar to double bar. Notation seems inconsistent. (And elsewhere double bar is used for failure.)

Appendix B.5. Will the modem send a Session Termination Response after receiving a TCP shutdown?

Appendix B.8 (and elsewhere) "as above". Reference.

Appendix C.1 shows we have both Destination Up and Destination Update. Could be confusing (especially if abbreviating).

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