Subject: draft-ietf-marid-protocol-00.txt

From: Tony Finch <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 25 Jul 2004 03:24:54 +0100

Some trivial comments:

There's some poor phrasing in the second paragraph of the introduction.
The third paragraph is redundant.

Section 2 should explain how SPF TXT records coexist with existing TXT
records. Section 3.4.1 suggests that they cannot coexist.

Tony.
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