Subject: [mile] xmpp-grid-01 review

From: Chris Inacio <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 19 Oct 2016 04:39:27 +0000

I read the diffs from xmpp-grid–00 to xmpp-grid–01 and don’t have any particular issues with the changes.

I have nits in that while comprehensive, I don’t think the amount of detail in the publish/subscribe message examples added to the document particularly enhance my understanding of the operation overall. And there are lots of fiddly unexplained details in the message. BUT, the messages really don’t hurt my understanding of the operation, so this is a nit.

Adding the XEP–0060 reference is appropriate.

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Chris Inacio
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