Subject: [mpls] WG LC comments draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-04

From: Gregory Mirsky <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 13 Oct 2011 18:57:41 -0400

Dear Authors and et.al,
I had problem with the following text in the document.
*       p.7 "In order transport the packets of sender only branch to the root of the LSP a MP2MP is created.This will cause the sender only branches to receive each others packets." I can not offer alternative to the text.
*       the very next sentence seems too long and might benefit from re-structuring and/or re-phrasing "These packets will be dropped and not forwarded, if that affect is undesireable some other means of transport has to be established to forward packets to the root of the tree, like a Multi-Point to Point LSP for example." Perhaps breaking in two sentences will help "These packets will be dropped and not forwarded. If that is not desireable then some other means of transport has to be established to forward packets to the root of the tree, like a Multi-Point to Point LSP for example."

        Regards,
                Greg