Subject: [Ntp] Some typos in NTS4NTP-14

From: Martin Langer <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2018 11:58:17 +0200

Hello,

I have read the draft and it looks good. However, I have discovered some 
small typos:

Page 8:
[...]
Record Type Number: A 15-bit integer in network byte order. The
semantics of record types 0-6 are specified in this memo.
[...]

It should be 0-7

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Page 15:
[...]
Nonce length: Two octets in network byte order, ....
[...]

It should be 'Nonce Length:'

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Page 16:
[...]
Additional Padding: Clients which use a nonce length shorter than
the maximum allowed by the negotiated AEAD algorithm may be
required to include additional zero-padding.
[...]

Is 'maximum' correct or is meant 'minimum'?

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Page 17:
[...]
The purpose of the Additional Padding field is to ensure that servers
can always choose a nonce whose length is adequate to ensure its
uniqueness, even if the client chooses a shorter one, and still
ensure that the overall length of the server’s response packet. does
not exceed the length of the request.
[...]

the dot in the penultimate line (... packet. does ...)

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Page 19:

in figure 5: the bottom line (Client) is shorter.

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Page 27:

in the last line:

[...]
The Network Time Security Warning Codes Registry SHALL initally be
empty except for the reserved range, i.e.:
[...]

initally  --> initially

best regards,
Martin

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