Subject: [Pals] AD comments on MPLS-TP dual homing documents

From: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 6 Jan 2017 21:32:25 +0000

Hi WG,

I've been doing my review of the MPLS-TP dual homing documents. I've sent my edits directly to the Authors:
 - mostly clarification/English smoothing comments on both documents.
- added references and alignment of terms with previous MPLS-TP documents.
- asked to move the state diagram from the Informational to PS so the reader doesn't need to constantly cross-reference.
- needs enhancement of the security section.
- on both documents, the number of authors on the front page exceeds the guidelines, need to reduce.

Once the Authors update, we'll be ready to progress.

Thanks,
Deborah