Subject: [pcp] Comments For WGLC (draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02.txt)

From: "Moustafa, Hassnaa" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2014 21:15:55 +0000

Hi,

There are few editorial comments on draft (draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02) as follows:
1.	The term IP address family used in the draft needs more text clarification (to say for example IPv4 or IPv6 or maybe other points that the authors have in mind).
2.	The IP addresses used in the diagram (in the example of Section 5) is not very consistent with the IP addresses mentioned in the text that explains the diagram.

Regards,
Hassnaa

-----Original Message-----
From: pcp [mailto:[email-masked]] On Behalf Of Dave Thaler
Sent: Friday, February 07, 2014 6:35 PM
To: [email-masked]
Subject: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02.txt comments due by FEB 21

This email initiates a two-week Working Group Last Call on
draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02 to conclude on Friday, February 21st.
Please send comments to the list.

As a reminder, when responding to a WGLC, what we chairs are looking for is a statement about document quality (not really about whether the mechanism should move forward).  That is, state whether you think the document is ready as is, or if not, what issues you see.

Thanks,
-Dave

> -----Original Message-----
> From: pcp [mailto:[email-masked]] On Behalf Of Prashanth Patil
> (praspati)
> Sent: Monday, January 6, 2014 8:52 AM
> To: [email-masked]
> Subject: Re: [pcp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02.txt
> 
> Folks,
> Revised PCP server selection draft has been published. The update 
> addresses comments received from Dave Thaler and the ones at IETF 88.
> 
> -Prashanth
> 
> 
> On 1/6/14 10:19 PM, "[email-masked]" 
> <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
> 
> >
> >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> >directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Port Control Protocol Working Group 
> >of the IETF.
> >
> >        Title           : PCP Server Selection
> >        Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
> >                          Reinaldo Penno
> >                          Dan Wing
> >                          Prashanth Patil
> >                          Tirumaleswar Reddy
> >	Filename        : draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02.txt
> >	Pages           : 11
> >	Date            : 2014-01-06
> >
> >Abstract:
> >   Multiple IP addresses may be configured on a PCP client in some
> >   deployment contexts such as multi-homing.  This document specifies
> >   the behavior to be followed by the PCP client to contact its PCP
> >   server(s) when one or several PCP server IP addresses are configured.
> >
> >   This document updates RFC6887.
> >
> >
> >
> >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection/
> >
> >There's also a htmlized version available at:
> >http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02
> >
> >A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02
> >
> >
> >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
> >submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at 
> >tools.ietf.org.
> >
> >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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