Subject: [sacm] [draft-ietf-sacm-information-model] Section 4.1 - Identifying Attributes (#17)

From: Jim Schaad <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 08 Jul 2015 20:47:51 -0700

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The title of this section is ambiguous.  Are we talking about endpoint identification attributes or are we talking about how attributes are identified.  I suggest renaming the section to be "Endpoint Identification Attributes".

The first sentence would read better as

This group of attributes are designed to let a consumer identify an endpoint.  The identification of endpoints serves two purposes:

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