Subject: [Sip] Very minor nits on section 22 Security Considerations in bis-07

From: "Hisham Khartabil" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 15 Feb 2002 19:37:05 +0200

These are very minor nits, but I'm sending them anyway to complete my
review.

Line numbers refer to the pdf version.

Section 22
- line 4203: "is" should be "are".

Section 22.3.2.3
- I thought we were still talking about Alice until Carol's name was
mentioned. Perhaps Carol should be introduced :)

Regards,
Hisham Khartabil

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