Subject: RE: [Sipping] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-sipping-conference-package-11.txt

From: "Orit Levin" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2005 12:29:43 -0700

Thanks a lot, Jari.
I will fix these in the authors' 48 hours if the rest goes OK.

Orit. 

> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:[email-masked]] On Behalf Of Jari Urpalainen
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> Subject: Re: [Sipping] I-D 
> ACTION:draft-ietf-sipping-conference-package-11.txt
> 
> On Mon, 2005-06-06 at 15:47 -0400, ext 
> [email-masked] wrote: 
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line 
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> > This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation 
> Proposal Investigation Working Group of the IETF.
> > 
> > 	Title		: A Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) 
> Event Package 
> > 			  for Conference State
> > 	Author(s)	: J. Rosenberg, et al.
> > 	Filename	: draft-ietf-sipping-conference-package-11.txt
> > 	Pages		: 48
> > 	Date		: 2005-6-6
> > 	
> > This document defines a conference event package for the Session
> >    Initiation Protocol (SIP) Events framework, along with a 
> data format
> >    used in notifications for this package.  The conference package
> >    allows users to subscribe to a conference URI.  Notifications are
> >    sent about changes in the membership of this conference and
> >    optionally about changes in the state of additional conference
> >    components.
> > 
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> > age-11.txt
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> Some minor comments concerning examples and XML schemas,
> There's not any xml-prolog declaration in examples (<?xml 
> ..). Secondly
> namespace declarations are missing from example instance documents
> (xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:conference-info") and thus 
> instance docs
> don't validate.
> 
> In XML schemas there are attribute extensions <xs:anyAttribute
> namespace="##other"/>. Considering the fact that attributes are
> unqualified in the schema this declaration seems somewhat odd (or
> unusual). Also default value for processContents is strict. Therefore,
> changing these to <xs:anyAttribute processContents="lax"/> 
> would imo be
> more reasonable.
> 
> Thanks,
> Jari
> 
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