Subject: RE: [Speermint] Minor comments ondraft-meyer-speermint-reqs-and-terminology-00.t xt

From: "Livingood, Jason" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 10 Jul 2006 09:15:00 -0400

That draft has been superceded by this one (and the old one is dead):

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-speermint-terminology-00.
txt

We split the requirements out of the draft you referenced and moved it
to a new doc:

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-speermint-requirements-00
.txt

Please review these docs and advise if your comments have been addressed
or still remain.

Jason 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Drage, Keith (Keith) [mailto:[email-masked]] 
> Sent: Monday, July 10, 2006 8:29 AM
> To: [email-masked]
> Cc: [email-masked]
> Subject: [Speermint] Minor comments 
> ondraft-meyer-speermint-reqs-and-terminology-00.t xt
> 
> In doing a quick read of this document, I noted a couple of things.
> 
> 1)	Usage of term "E.164 number". Recommendation E.164 
> defines the term "public telecommunication number". In most 
> of the cases it does not look like this needs to be 
> categorised as an "international public telecommunication 
> number", but at least to do ENUM lookup I understood it needed to be.
> 
> 2)	In the references, you are referencing the 1991 version 
> of E.164. Current in force version is February 1995, but in 
> general this seems to be a prime case for an undated 
> reference (i.e. latest version applies).
> 
> 3)	Introduction, 3rd para has a residual reference to 
> "VOIPEER", as does section 2, 1st para, and figure 1, and the 
> para immediately following it, and section 4.4, section 5.4. 
> Not sure whether section 7 should change or not.
> 
> regards
> 
> Keith
> 
> Keith Drage
> Lucent Technologies
> [email-masked]
> tel: +44 1793 776249
> 
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