Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-07.txt

From: "t.petch" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 27 Nov 2019 12:31:55 -0000

I like the Normative References in this version; I would like a few
more!

s.1 YANG - could do with a reference here, either 1.1 or both 1.0 and
1.0

s.1.3
    | te-types | ietf-te-types         | [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te]      |

Um, no should be
draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-types
the YANG module gets this right

Bearing in mind that the YANG module will exist outside any RFC, I would
like references in the YANG module for
VN
vn-disjointness (I see no mention of this in RFC8453)
vnap (perhaps a reference RFC8453 s.6)
ltp (I see no ltp in RFC8453)
connectivity-matrix-id  (perhaps reference  TE-topo)
vn-id

The YANG module needs a copyright statement

     identity vn-compute-state-computatione-failed {
suggest
     identity vn-compute-state-computation-failed {

YANG is sometimes Yang and yang - I suggest YANG where it appears in the
text (which is what YANG Guidelines does)

Tom Petch

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>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
Signaling WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : A Yang Data Model for VN Operation
>         Authors         : Young Lee
>                           Dhruv Dhody
>                           Daniele Ceccarelli
>                           Igor Bryskin
>                           Bin Yeong Yoon
> Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-07.txt
> Pages           : 54
> Date            : 2019-10-31
>
> Abstract:
>    This document provides a YANG data model generally applicable to
any
>    mode of Virtual Network (VN) operation.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/
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