Subject: [TLS] WGLC has concluded for draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption

From: Joseph Salowey <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 18 Nov 2018 16:02:22 -0800

Several comments were received for draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption.  The
chairs will work with the authors to address the comments and revise the
draft to submit it to the IESG.

The working group has consensus to work on the document, however comments
against this consensus will be noted in the document shepherd's writeup.

Summary of comments to be evaluated for document changes:

- Update references
- 3.6 fix text referring to multiplexed server
- 3.8.1 ALPN encryption may be separate from esni
- 3.9 clarify purpose of section
- 4 addition work may need to be cited
- discuss CT and not differentiating certs
- may need to updated discussion of http fronting
- 2.2 reference SAN
- (section 2.3 and 3.6) esni causing privacy and security trade-offs in
other areas
- editorial comments raised

Thanks,

Chairs