Subject: Commit in docs/usefor (usepro.xml)

From: [email-masked]
Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2008 17:40:26 -0700 (PDT)

Date: Sunday, September 21, 2008 @ 17:40:25
  Author: eagle
Revision: 5042

Clarifications to the Path Header Field Example.  Explain that barbaz
verified the <path-identity> of the previous hop and change the
terminology to be consistent about referring to <path-diagnostic>.

Modified:
  docs/usefor/usepro.xml

Modified: docs/usefor/usepro.xml
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--- docs/usefor/usepro.xml	2008-09-22 00:18:17 UTC (rev 5041)
+++ docs/usefor/usepro.xml	2008-09-22 00:40:25 UTC (rev 5042)
@@ -455,7 +455,10 @@
           "not-for-mail is a common &lt;tail-entry>.</t>
 
           <t>The article was relayed to the relaying agent known, at least
-          to old.site.example, as "barbaz".</t>
+          to old.site.example, as "barbaz".  That relaying agent confirmed
+          to its satisfaction that "baz.isp.example" was an expected
+          &lt;path-identity> for the source of the article and therefore
+          used &lt;diag-match> ("!") for its &lt;path-diagnostic>.</t>
 
           <t>barbaz relayed it to old.site.example, which does not support
           &lt;diag-keyword> and therefore used the old "!" delimiter.
@@ -464,7 +467,7 @@
 
           <t>old.site.example relayed it to a news server using the
           &lt;path-identity> of bar.isp.example and claiming (by using the
-          "!!" path delimiter) to have verified that it came from
+          "!" &lt;path-diagnostic>) to have verified that it came from
           old.site.example.</t>
 
           <t>bar.isp.example relayed it to foo-news which, not being