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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP Payload Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)
        Authors         : Sébastien Lugan
                          Antonin Descampe
                          Corentin Damman
                          Thomas Richter
                          Tim Bruylants
	Filename        : draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-10.txt
	Pages           : 28
	Date            : 2021-05-01

Abstract:
   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
   video.  JPEG XS is a low-latency, lightweight image coding system.
   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
   resolutions and frame rates, while offering visually lossless
   quality, reduced power consumption, and end-to-end latency confined
   to a fraction of a frame.


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP Payload Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)
        Authors         : Sébastien Lugan
                          Antonin Descampe
                          Corentin Damman
                          Thomas Richter
                          Tim Bruylants
	Filename        : draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-11.txt
	Pages           : 28
	Date            : 2021-05-01

Abstract:
   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
   video.  JPEG XS is a low-latency, lightweight image coding system.
   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
   resolutions and frame rates, while offering visually lossless
   quality, reduced power consumption, and end-to-end latency confined
   to a fraction of a frame.


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        Title           : RTP-mixer formatting of multi-party Real-time text
        Author          : Gunnar Hellstrom
	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-16.txt
	Pages           : 46
	Date            : 2021-05-01

Abstract:
   Enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text mixing are provided in this
   document, suitable for a centralized conference model that enables
   source identification and rapidly interleaved transmission of text
   from different sources.  The intended use is for real-time text
   mixers and participant endpoints capable of providing an efficient
   presentation or other treatment of a multi-party real-time text
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   CSRC list in the RTP packet for source identification.  The method
   makes use of the same "text/t140" and "text/red" formats as for two-
   party sessions.

   Solutions using multiple RTP streams in the same RTP session are
   briefly mentioned, as they could have some benefits over the RTP-
   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

   A capability exchange is specified so that it can be verified that a
   mixer and a participant can handle the multi-party coded real-time
   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an SDP media attribute "rtt-mixer".

   The document updates RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation".

   A specification of how a mixer can format text for the case when the
   endpoint is not multi-party aware is also provided.


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Hi there, here's my AD Review of this document.

Per the shepherd writeup, I have requested a review by the SDP Directorate.

First: In the shepherd writeup, please correct the spelling of my name.
:-)  Also, while we're in there, question (12) asks what reviews were done,
but the answer simply says that the document contains a media type
registration, which doesn't really answer the question.  Were any of the
media type review resources asked for feedback on this?  Later on the
shepherd says he reviewed it, but it doesn't say what official reviews may
have been undertaken.  As you can see later on, there's a good chunk of the
registration missing.

In Section 2, please update the BCP 14 text to use the new form (see RFC
8174, which must also be added as a normative reference).

Also in Section 2, the term "SOC Marker", though defined here, is not used
below here.  Section 3.2 references the EOC Marker; should it reference
both?

In Section 4, we encounter "SSRC" for the first time.  A definition for it
would be helpful, or a reference.

In Section 4.2, "As per specified" can just be "As specified".
Alternatively, "As per RFC 3550, ..."  While I'm thinking about it, all
these double references (e.g., "RFC 3550 [RFC3550]") throughout the
document could be cleaned up.

The diagrams in Section 4.4 show (eventually) how the EOC marker fits into
this, but not the SOC marker.  Should they?

Section 4.5 uses a SHOULD.  SHOULD leaves the implementer with a choice, so
it's a good idea to include guidance about when one might legitimately do
something other than what the SHOULD says to do.  Or, if there isn't any,
maybe this ought to be a SHALL?

In Section 6.1, it's clear what a receiver would do with some of the
optional parameters when they are absent (i.e., defaults are clear), but
not in all cases.  What can a receiver safely assume about "depth",
"width", or "height", for example, when not specified?

Also on 6.1, this media type registration is missing required fields,
including "Interoperability Considerations", "Published Specification",
"Applications that use this media type", "Fragment identifier
considerations", "Additional information" (which has four sub-fields",
"Contact information", "Intended Usage", "Restrictions On Usage", "Author",
and "Change Controller".  Please see RFC 6838.  Further, it would probably
be a good idea to mention either in the registration or in the Security
Considerations of this document that the payload being registered does not
(or does) contain code that is executable.  The media type reviewers prefer
people to be explicit on this point.

-MSK

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r><br></div><div>Per the shepherd writeup, I have requested a review by the=
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please correct the spelling of my name.=C2=A0 :-)=C2=A0 Also, while we&#39;=
re in there, question (12) asks what reviews were done, but the answer simp=
ly says that the document contains a media type registration, which doesn&#=
39;t really answer the question.=C2=A0 Were any of the media type review re=
sources asked for feedback on this?=C2=A0 Later on the shepherd says he rev=
iewed it, but it doesn&#39;t say what official reviews may have been undert=
aken.=C2=A0 As you can see later on, there&#39;s a good chunk of the regist=
ration missing.<br></div><div><br></div><div>In Section 2, please update th=
e BCP 14 text to use the new form (see RFC 8174, which must also be added a=
s a normative reference).</div><div><br></div><div>Also in Section 2, the t=
erm &quot;SOC Marker&quot;, though defined here, is not used below here.=C2=
=A0 Section 3.2 references the EOC Marker; should it reference both?</div><=
div><br></div><div>In Section 4, we encounter &quot;SSRC&quot; for the firs=
t time.=C2=A0 A definition for it would be helpful, or a reference.</div><d=
iv><br></div><div>In Section 4.2, &quot;As per specified&quot; can just be =
&quot;As specified&quot;.=C2=A0 Alternatively, &quot;As per RFC 3550, ...&q=
uot;=C2=A0 While I&#39;m thinking about it, all these double references (e.=
g., &quot;RFC 3550 [RFC3550]&quot;) throughout the document could be cleane=
d up.</div><div><br></div><div>The diagrams in Section 4.4 show (eventually=
) how the EOC marker fits into this, but not the SOC marker.=C2=A0 Should t=
hey?</div><div><br></div><div>Section 4.5 uses a SHOULD.=C2=A0 SHOULD leave=
s the implementer with a choice, so it&#39;s a good idea to include guidanc=
e about when one might legitimately do something other than what the SHOULD=
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LL?<br></div><div><br></div><div>In Section 6.1, it&#39;s clear what a rece=
iver would do with some of the optional parameters when they are absent (i.=
e., defaults are clear), but not in all cases.=C2=A0 What can a receiver sa=
fely assume about &quot;depth&quot;, &quot;width&quot;, or &quot;height&quo=
t;, for example, when not specified?</div><div><br></div><div>Also on 6.1, =
this media type registration is missing required fields, including &quot;In=
teroperability Considerations&quot;, &quot;Published Specification&quot;, &=
quot;Applications that use this media type&quot;, &quot;Fragment identifier=
 considerations&quot;, &quot;Additional information&quot; (which has four s=
ub-fields&quot;, &quot;Contact information&quot;, &quot;Intended Usage&quot=
;, &quot;Restrictions On Usage&quot;, &quot;Author&quot;, and &quot;Change =
Controller&quot;.=C2=A0 Please see RFC 6838.=C2=A0 Further, it would probab=
ly be a good idea to mention either in the registration or in the Security =
Considerations of this document that the payload being registered does not =
(or does) contain code that is executable.=C2=A0 The media type reviewers p=
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP Payload Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)
        Authors         : Sébastien Lugan
                          Antonin Descampe
                          Corentin Damman
                          Thomas Richter
                          Tim Bruylants
	Filename        : draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12.txt
	Pages           : 29
	Date            : 2021-05-03

Abstract:
   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
   video.  JPEG XS is a low-latency, lightweight image coding system.
   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
   resolutions and frame rates, while offering visually lossless
   quality, reduced power consumption, and end-to-end latency confined
   to a fraction of a frame.


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On Mon, May 3, 2021 at 7:57 AM Tim Bruylants <TBR@intopix.com> wrote:

> > Also in Section 2, the term "SOC Marker", though defined here, is not
> used below here.  Section 3.2 references the EOC Marker; should it
> reference both?
>
>
>
>   1) The term "SOC marker" is used in section 2 under "JPEG XS codestream
> header".
>
>   2) We clarified section 3.2, referencing "SOC marker".
>

Right, it was referenced in the Glossary that defines it, but not
elsewhere.  That seemed strange.


> > In Section 4.2, "As per specified" can just be "As specified".
> Alternatively, "As per RFC 3550, ..."  While I'm thinking about it, all
> these double references (e.g., "RFC 3550 [RFC3550]") throughout the
> document could be cleaned up.
>
>
>
>   We have cleaned up the "double references" throughout the text.
>

Thanks.  The RFC Editor would probably have done the same, but now your
AUTH48 might come a little sooner.

> The diagrams in Section 4.4 show (eventually) how the EOC marker fits
> into this, but not the SOC marker.  Should they?
>
>
>
>   We clarified that the SOC marker is part of the JPEG XS codestream
> header. The latter is clearly mentioned in the diagrams. Explicitly
> mentioning SOC in the diagrams would clutter the layout, and would probably
> require to explicitly add the other markers in the codestream header as
> well.
>

Fair enough.  In my layperson's reading of the work, it was odd that the
"end" marker was somehow worth mentioning explicitly but the "start" marker
was being taken for granted.


>
> > In Section 6.1, it's clear what a receiver would do with some of the
> optional parameters when they are absent (i.e., defaults are clear), but
> not in all cases.  What can a receiver safely assume about "depth",
> "width", or "height", for example, when not specified?
>
>
>
>   We thought this was clarified by section 6.2.1. Nevertheless, we added a
> short paragraph in section 6 (now section 7).
>
>
This could also be because I'm unfamiliar with the base work.  It might be
useful to mention in the registration that optional parameters are in fact
overrides to metadata within the payload, since I think that's what you're
telling me here.  But that's not a blocker for starting Last Call.

> Also on 6.1, this media type registration is missing required fields,
> including "Interoperability Considerations", "Published Specification",
> "Applications that use this media type", "Fragment identifier
> considerations", "Additional information" (which has four sub-fields",
> "Contact information", "Intended Usage", "Restrictions On Usage", "Author",
> and "Change Controller".  Please see RFC 6838.  Further, it would probably
> be a good idea to mention either in the registration or in the Security
> Considerations of this document that the payload being registered does not
> (or does) contain code that is executable.  The media type reviewers prefer
> people to be explicit on this point.
>
>
>
>   We have reworked the media type registration section to follow RFC 6838
> and RFC 4855.
>
>
>
>   We added the notion that the payload format and the JPEG XS encoding do
> NOT contain executable code (to the Security Considerations section).
>

Great, thanks!  I'll prepare the Last Call request now.

-MSK

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr">On Mon, May 3, 2021 at 7:57 AM Tim Bruyla=
nts &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:TBR@intopix.com">TBR@intopix.com</a>&gt; wrote:<b=
r></div><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding=
-left:1ex">





<div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;" lang=3D"EN-US">
<div class=3D"gmail-m_-1535328673646689632WordSection1">&gt; Also in Sectio=
n 2, the term &quot;SOC Marker&quot;, though defined here, is not used belo=
w here.=C2=A0 Section 3.2 references the EOC Marker; should it reference bo=
th?
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 1) The term &quot;SOC marker&quot; is used in=
 section 2 under &quot;JPEG XS codestream header&quot;.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 2) We clarified section 3.2, referencing &quo=
t;SOC marker&quot;.</p></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Right, =
it was referenced in the Glossary that defines it, but not elsewhere.=C2=A0=
 That seemed strange.</div><div> =C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quo=
te" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204=
);padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;" lang=3D"EN-US=
"><div class=3D"gmail-m_-1535328673646689632WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&gt; In Section 4.2, &quot;As per specified&quot; ca=
n just be &quot;As specified&quot;.=C2=A0 Alternatively, &quot;As per RFC 3=
550, ...&quot;=C2=A0 While I&#39;m thinking about it, all these double refe=
rences (e.g., &quot;RFC 3550 [RFC3550]&quot;) throughout the document could=
 be cleaned up.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 We have cleaned up the &quot;double reference=
s&quot; throughout the text.</p></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><di=
v>Thanks.=C2=A0 The RFC Editor would probably have done the same, but now y=
our AUTH48 might come a little sooner.</div><div> <br></div><blockquote cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;=
" lang=3D"EN-US"><div class=3D"gmail-m_-1535328673646689632WordSection1"><p=
 class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&gt; The diagrams in Section 4.4 show (eventually) h=
ow the EOC marker fits into this, but not the SOC marker.=C2=A0 Should they=
?
</p><p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0</p><p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 We clari=
fied that the SOC marker is part of the JPEG XS codestream header. The latt=
er is clearly mentioned in the diagrams. Explicitly mentioning SOC in the d=
iagrams would clutter the layout, and would probably require to explicitly =
add
 the other markers in the codestream header as well.</p></div></div></block=
quote><div><br></div><div>Fair enough.=C2=A0 In my layperson&#39;s reading =
of the work, it was odd that the &quot;end&quot; marker was somehow worth m=
entioning explicitly but the &quot;start&quot; marker was being taken for g=
ranted.</div><div> <br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"mar=
gin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1=
ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;" lang=3D"EN-US"><div class=3D"=
gmail-m_-1535328673646689632WordSection1"><p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u><u>=
</u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&gt; In Section 6.1, it&#39;s clear what a receiver =
would do with some of the optional parameters when they are absent (i.e., d=
efaults are clear), but not in all cases.=C2=A0 What can a receiver safely =
assume about &quot;depth&quot;, &quot;width&quot;, or &quot;height&quot;, f=
or
 example, when not specified?<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 We thought this was clarified by section 6.2.=
1. Nevertheless, we added a short paragraph in section 6 (now section 7).<u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u></p></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><=
div>This could also be because I&#39;m unfamiliar with the base work.=C2=A0=
 It might be useful to mention in the registration that optional parameters=
 are in fact overrides to metadata within the payload, since I think that&#=
39;s what you&#39;re telling me here.=C2=A0 But that&#39;s not a blocker fo=
r starting Last Call.<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_q=
uote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,2=
04);padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;" lang=3D"EN-=
US"><div class=3D"gmail-m_-1535328673646689632WordSection1"><p class=3D"Mso=
Normal">&gt; Also on 6.1, this media type registration is missing required =
fields, including &quot;Interoperability Considerations&quot;, &quot;Publis=
hed Specification&quot;, &quot;Applications that use this media type&quot;,=
 &quot;Fragment identifier considerations&quot;, &quot;Additional informati=
on&quot;
 (which has four sub-fields&quot;, &quot;Contact information&quot;, &quot;I=
ntended Usage&quot;, &quot;Restrictions On Usage&quot;, &quot;Author&quot;,=
 and &quot;Change Controller&quot;.=C2=A0 Please see RFC 6838.=C2=A0 Furthe=
r, it would probably be a good idea to mention either in the registration o=
r in the Security Considerations
 of this document that the payload being registered does not (or does) cont=
ain code that is executable.=C2=A0 The media type reviewers prefer people t=
o be explicit on this point.
</p><p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 We have reworked the media type registration =
section to follow RFC 6838 and RFC 4855.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 We added the notion that the payload format a=
nd the JPEG XS encoding do NOT contain executable code (to the Security Con=
siderations section).<u></u><u></u></p>
</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Great, thanks!=C2=A0 I&#39;ll =
prepare the Last Call request now.</div><div><br></div><div>-MSK<br></div><=
/div></div>

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The IESG has received a request from the Audio/Video Transport Core
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Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)'
  <draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12.txt> as Proposed Standard

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Abstract


   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
   video.  JPEG XS is a low-latency, lightweight image coding system.
   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
   resolutions and frame rates, while offering visually lossless
   quality, reduced power consumption, and end-to-end latency confined
   to a fraction of a frame.




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Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Issues

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2021-05-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time text
mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. It has
some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready with
issues]

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Page 7, 1st block, 13th sentence: what constitutes a “reasonable effort”? It
might be best to drop this sentence.

Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence, “300 ms”: would it make sense to append
“period” or “timeout” after this value?

Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: in regards to “only part”,
how is this calculated?

Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: The placing of all
available redundant levels in the packet is presumably subject to a maximum
packet size or the “CPS” limit, if there are obnoxious levels of redundancy
specified?

Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: “SHALL prefer” seems odd.
It doesn’t say that the marking will actually be done. It’s just preferred. If
you’re not going to require the marking in that sentence, then perhaps change
“SHALL” to “SHOULD”.

Page 19, section 3.20, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: I don’t find the “something
specific” particularly enlightening. Like what? An identifier for the method?

Page 27, section 4.2.2, 4th paragraph: can you elaborate on these “Integrity
considerations”? Otherwise, it’s difficult to comply with the SHALL in any
meaningful way.

Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: any reason for the change from “T.140” in
the previous and following paragraphs to “t140” in this one?

Page 33, 6th paragraph: how is disappearance determined?

Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence before creating a new sentence
(see nits, below): I’m having troubles tying the adjective “secure” to each of
the nouns in the sentence. It works for “signaling” and perhaps “media”, but
for “authentication”, one sort of assumes that authentication mechanism is
secure and helping to provide the security. Perhaps you could reword that
sentence?

Nits/editorial comments:

General:
Change “multi-party” to “multiparty” throughout the document. While we are a
bit inconsistent about that particular hyphenation within the IETF, all major
dictionaries I sampled spell this as a single, non-hyphenated word.

Append a comma after each instance of “e.g.”.

Change “multiparty aware” to “multiparty-aware” throughout the document except
in two cases where you “multiparty awareness”, which should be left alone.
These are located in section 4.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence and section 6.1,
2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence.

Change “fall-back” to “fallback” in a few places in the document. Both uses are
found in the document.

Change “RTP-mixer based” to “RTP-mixer-based” throughout the document.

Change “multiparty capable” to “multiparty-capable” throughout the document.

Delete periods at the end of section/subsection titles, e.g., section 6.2.

Specific:

Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: I’d rewrite it in the active voice as: “This
document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text mixing suitable for
a centralized conference model that enables source identification and rapidly
interleaved transmission of text from different sources.”

Page 1, Abstract, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert a hyphen between
“multiparty” and “coded”.

Page 5, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: I think I would change “in” to “at”.

Page 5, 7th paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete “any”. Change “way” to “ways”.

Page 6, section 1.1, 2nd paragraph: insert “are” before “as”.

Page 6, section 1.1, “WebRTC” term: change “web based” to “web-based”. Insert
“real-time” before “communication”.

Page 6, “DTLS-SRTP” term: delete “stands for security”. Insert “is a DTLS
extension for use with SRTP/SRTCP” before “specified”.

Page 6, “multiparty-aware” term: change “stands for” to “describes”. Append a
comma after “real-time” before “separated”. Append a comma after “source”.

Page 6, “multiparty-unaware”: change “stands for” to “describes”.

Pages 7 and 8: delete the period after each of the non-indented lines, e.g., at
the end of “Multiple RTP streams, one per participant.”

Page 7, 1st block, 4th sentence: change “end to end” to “end-to-end”.

Page 7, 1st block, 11th sentence: append a comma after “participant”. Delete
the following “and”. Insert “with” before “no”.

Page 7, 1st block, 14th sentence: change “implementation” to “implementations”
and delete “technologies” unless you really want the problem is in regards to
technologies and not particular implementations.

Page 7, 1st block 15th sentence: change “made” to “led to”. Insert “being”
before “only”.

Page 7, 2nd block, 1st sentence: insert “a” before “shorter”. Insert “the”
before source”. Insert “the” before “CSRC”. Append field after “CSRC”.

Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence: insert “a” before the quoted “text/t140”.

Page 7, 2nd block, 3rd sentence: delete the whole sentence.

Page 7, 2nd block, 6th sentence: move “with” before “receivers”. Insert “having
the” before “default”.

Page 8, 1st partial block, 2nd full sentence: insert “it” before “corresponds”.

Page 8, 1st full block, 6th sentence: change “be varying” to “vary”.

Page 8, 1st full block, 9th sentence: change “while” to “When”.

Page 9, section 1.3, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: change “calltaker” to “call
taker”. Change “observing” to “to observe”.

Page 11, section 2.4, 3rd paragraph: append a comma after “CSRC-list”.

Page 12, section 3.1, 4th paragraph: change “From other aspects” to “In other
regards”.

Page 13, section 3.4, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert a hyphen between “10”
and “second”.

Page 13, section 3.4, 1st paragraph, 4th sentence: delete “a” before “good”.

Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “SHALL be” before
“sent”. Insert “the” before “end”.

Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: Append a period at the end
of the sentence.

Page 13, section 3.4, 3rd paragraph: change “in” to “as”.

Page 13, section 3.6: insert a hyphen between “locally” and “produced”. Append
“text” after “produced”.

Page 14, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete the comma after “T140blocks”.

Page 14, section 3.10, 1st paragraph after the bullet points, 1st sentence:
insert “the” before “time”.

Page 15, section 3.11, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after “switch”. Change
“poulated” to “populated”.

Page 15, section 3.12, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “next”.

Page 15, section 3.12, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “next”.

Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “number” to “level”.

Page 16, section 3.14, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: delete an extraneous space
after “(“.

Page 16, section 3.14, 1st paragraph, last sentence: insert “self-sourced”
before “data”. Delete “that it is source of itself”.

Page 16, section 3.16, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after
“CNAME”.

Page 17, section 3.17.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “The receiver
SHALL monitor”. Change “The” to “the”. Delete “SHALL be monitored”.

Page 17, section 3.17.2, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a comma after
“case”. Insert “the receiver SHALL create” before “a t140block”. Delete “SHALL
be created”. I’m suggesting but not certain that you might want to change “and
assigned” to “associated with”.

Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: change “if” to “whether”
if you are amenable to that wording.

Page 18, 2nd paragraph: delete an extraneous blank line before this paragraph.

Page 18, section 3.18, 1st sentence: insert a hyphen between “10” and “second”.

Page 19, section 3.19, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “session”. Insert
“the” before “media”.

Page 19, section 3.19, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “media”. Consider
deleting “security by”.

Page 19, section 3.19, 5th sentence: change “is” to “are”.

Page 20, section 3.21, 4th sentence: append a period after “etc”.

Page 21, 1st partial paragraph, 1st full sentence: insert “a” before “dropped”.

Page 21, 1st full paragraph, 1st sentence: delete an extraneous space after
“(“. Where the word “area” occurs, would that make more sense as “buffer” or
“queue”?

Page 21, 1st full paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “initial” before the first
“text”.

Page 22, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “in” to “due to”.

Page 22, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “packets” before “103”. Delete the
comma after “103”.

Page 22, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: there appears to be an adverb missing
before “the”. Perhaps “during”?

Page 22, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “21040” to “21060”.

Page 22, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: change “needs” to “need”.

Page 22, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “21150” to “21160”.

Page 23, section 4, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete “and”.

Page 23, section 4, 3rd paragraph: consider changing “of” before “the text” to
“conveyed in”.

Page 24, 1st full paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert “a” before “replacement”.

Page 24, 1st full paragraph, 4th sentence: change “just” to “the same”.

Page 26, section 4.2, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert a hyphen between
“best” and “effort”.

Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after
“simulated”.

Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 4th sentence: change “is depending” to
“depends”.

Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 5th sentence: change “switch” to
“switching”. Append a comma after “can”. Append a comma after “example”.

Page 26, section 4.2.1, 3rd sentence: append a comma after “keep-alive”.

Page 27, 5th bullet point: insert “the” before “next”. Change “if even” to
“even if”. Insert “a” between “for” and “word delimiter”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, 1st paragraph: insert “the” before “UTF-8”. Change
“transform” to “transformation”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, “BEL”: change the comma after “session” to a period.
Capitalize “provides”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, “NEW LINE”, 3rd sentence: insert “the” before “display”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, “CR LF”, 1st sentence: delete the comma after
“supported”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, “CR LF”, 3rd sentence: insert “the” before “display”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, “INT ESC”, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “mode”.

Page 28, section 4.2.4, “SGR”, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “rendition”.

Page 29, 1st partial sentence: insert a hyphen between “256” and “bytes”. Then
change “bytes” to “byte”.

Page 29, “BOM”, 1st sentence: insert “it” before “SHALL”.

Page 29, “Missing text mark”, 1st sentence: change the comma after “apostrophe
‘” to a period. Insert “It” before “marks”. Insert “the” before “place”. Insert
“the” before “stream”.

Page 29, “SGR”, 1st sentence: delete the comma after “(SGR)”. Insert “the”
before “status”.

Page 29, “SGR”, 2nd sentence: change “originated” to “originating”.

Page 29, BS, last sentence: change “not” to “be”.

Page 32, section 6.1, title: drop the “e.g.” in the subsection title.

Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, parenthetical: perhaps you want “i.e.,”
instead of “e.g.” here given that further down you put “TTYS” in another
parenthetical as though it weren’t just an example but the only exemplar of
this type of device under discussion.

Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: delete “make”. Change
“adaptions” to “adapt”. Delete “for” before “the functional”. Delete “(TTY)”.

Page 32, section 6.1, 3rd paragraph: delete “(TTYs)”.

Page 33, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “a” before “two-way”.

Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “NAME”.

Page 33, section 7: insert a hyphen between “multiparty” and “mixing” in this
one instance of that term. Other uses of the term in the document should not be
hyphenated.

Page 34, section 8, 1st paragraph: I like the sound of the sentence better if
you swap “valid” and “also”. That’s just me. 

Page 34, section 8, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert a space between
“second” and “(“CPS”)”.

Page 34, section 8, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert “an” before “RTP”.
Regarding “excess”: in excess of what?

Page 35, section 11, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “pack”.

Page 35, section 11, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “CNAME”.

Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: I suggest inserting
“emitting” before “a continuous”. Change the comma after “flow of text” to a
period. Delete the following “or”. Change the rest of that sentence to read
something like: “They may also send text that appears to originate from other
participants.” I rewrote that because the malicious participants don’t
themselves masquerade as text, although that might be a mildly amusing
Halloween costume.

Page 35, section 11, 4th paragraph: delete one of “section” or “Section”. You
capitalize that term interchangeably, so it’s your choice.

Page 35, section 12.1 (when discussing -14 only): change “Cucherawy” to
“Kucherawy” unless we’re talking about someone else. Yeah, I know these will
all be deleted upon publication, but it caught my eye. I have not reviewed the
remainder of the change history entries.




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Reviewer: Rich Salz
Review result: Ready

This review is for the benefit of the Security AD's. Nobody else should read
this. Or, if you read it, treat it as any other last call review :)

I know very little about WebRTC, AVT, etc.

I thought Section 1.2, summary of the alternatives, was great. I wish more
documents did this kind of thing. And similar for all of section 2. The details
in Section 3 about how to comply seem very clear. If I were implementing this,
I could use easily use this as a checklist and test suite. Section 3.19 is the
most important one for transport security. Not knowing the operating
environments, it seems reasonable.

The security considerations seems a little scant, given the opportunity for
privacy concerns of participants and for intruders to disrupt calls. Is it
common that the mixer is a trusted entity? A statement on that either way would
be useful.




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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2021-05-06
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-17
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Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns:

Section 7.2.1:  Does the SHALL related to [SMPTE-ST2110-10] only apply
when TP=2110TPNL or TP=2110TPW?  Please reword to be clear when this
SHALL statement applies.


Minor Concerns:

Section 3.3:  I do not have [ISO21122-2], and obviously an implementer
will need that document.  Can a bit more be said about "the profile"
and "the level and sublevel used" without making this document too
big?  I am able to get a feel for the other things listed here from
their names.

Section 3.4:  Can you please provide some explanation of the "frat
field"?


Nits:

Section 3.2:  I do not understand the the last sentence?  Is it the
same as: It represents sample values of a single image, without any
interpretation relative to a colour space.

Section 5: s/of ST 2110-21 do not /of [SMPTE-ST2110-21] do not /




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Thank you for the thorough review. Please see comments inline.

I will split the answers, and start here with answers and change 
proposals for the minor issues:

Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
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>
> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time text
> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. It has
> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready with
> issues]
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Page 7, 1st block, 13th sentence: what constitutes a “reasonable effort”? It
> might be best to drop this sentence.

[GH] This reason is important for the desicion on technology selection.

I suggest a change from:

"For best deployment opportunity, it should be possible to upgrade 
existing endpoint solutions to be multi-party aware with a reasonable 
effort."

to

"For best deployment opportunity, it should be feasible to upgrade 
existing endpoint solutions to become multiparty-aware."

>
> Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence, “300 ms”: would it make sense to append
> “period” or “timeout” after this value?

[GH] I suggest to change from "every 300 ms." to "with 300 ms intervals."

>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: in regards to “only part”,
> how is this calculated?

[GH] I suggest to change from "If the "CPS" value is reached, longer 
transmission intervals SHALL be applied and only part of the text queued 
for transmission sent at end of each transmission interval, until the 
transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value again."

to

"If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be 
applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission sent at end 
of each transmission interval that can be allowed without exceeding the 
"CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value 
again. Division of text for partial transmission MUST then be made at 
T140block borders. "

>
> Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: The placing of all
> available redundant levels in the packet is presumably subject to a maximum
> packet size or the “CPS” limit, if there are obnoxious levels of redundancy
> specified?

[GH] Thanks, a good observation. It is already covered in section 3.10, 
but it could be more emphasized there. In 3.12 we are only dealing with 
the redundancy, which must be possible to send and is not included in 
the "CPS" value.

I suggest that the following part of 3.10 is improved from:

"Redundant text SHALL also be included.  See Section 3.12"

to;
"Redundant text SHALL also be included, and the assessment of how much 
new text can be included within the maximum packet size MUST take into 
account that the redundancy has priority to be transmitted in its 
entirety.  See Section 3.12."

>
> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: “SHALL prefer” seems odd.
> It doesn’t say that the marking will actually be done. It’s just preferred. If
> you’re not going to require the marking in that sentence, then perhaps change
> “SHALL” to “SHOULD”.
[GH] Agreed. Done as proposed.
>
> Page 19, section 3.20, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: I don’t find the “something
> specific” particularly enlightening. Like what? An identifier for the method?

[GH] Proposed to be changed from:

" In that case, the
    SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method, and
    an answer acknowledging the use of that method would accept it by
    something specific included in the SDP."

to:

"In that case, the
    SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method, 
e.g. an SDP attribute or another media format. An answer selecting the 
use of that method would accept it by
    a corresponding acknowledgement included in the SDP."

>
> Page 27, section 4.2.2, 4th paragraph: can you elaborate on these “Integrity
> considerations”? Otherwise, it’s difficult to comply with the SHALL in any
> meaningful way.

[GH] The sentence was inserted after discussions with emergency service 
providers, who had an example that it would be valuable to have a 
detailed personalized label of an emergency service agent shown to other 
agents while a less personal label should be used when sent to the 
calling users in emergency.

The security aspects on the label are quite similar to the security 
aspects on the <display-text> elements specified in RFC 4575. Its 
security aspects are specified in 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4575#section-8

You are right that that example contains mainly SHOULD and RECOMMENDED 
and no SHALL.

I suggest changing:

"Integrity considerations SHALL be taken when composing the label."

to:

"Information available to the mixer for composing the label may contain 
sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in sessions 
not securely authenticated and protected. Integrity considerations 
regarding how much personal information is included in the label SHOULD 
therefore be taken when composing the label."

>
> Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: any reason for the change from “T.140” in
> the previous and following paragraphs to “t140” in this one?
[GH] No, they should be "T.140 data channels" for all cases in that 
paragraph.
I have changed.
>
> Page 33, 6th paragraph: how is disappearance determined?
[GH]The disappearance may be signaled by the SIP conference system RFC 
4353, RFC 4575 etc. as a conference notification if that system is used, 
or simply by removal of the text media in an RTP session modification. 
There may also be a malfunction detected by keep-alive transactions not 
being maintained. I suggest to not detail how it disappears.
>
> Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence before creating a new sentence
> (see nits, below): I’m having troubles tying the adjective “secure” to each of
> the nouns in the sentence. It works for “signaling” and perhaps “media”, but
> for “authentication”, one sort of assumes that authentication mechanism is
> secure and helping to provide the security. Perhaps you could reword that
> sentence?

[GH] I propose to change the sentence from:

"Counteractions should be to require
    secure signaling, media and authentication, and to provide higher
    level conference functions e.g. for blocking and expelling
    participants."

to:

"Counteractions should be to require authentication, secure session 
signaling and secure media. Higher level conference functions should 
also be used e.g., for blocking and expelling participants who caused 
security concerns."


Thanks,

Gunnar Hellstrom

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP Payload Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)
        Authors         : Sébastien Lugan
                          Antonin Descampe
                          Corentin Damman
                          Thomas Richter
                          Tim Bruylants
	Filename        : draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13.txt
	Pages           : 30
	Date            : 2021-05-07

Abstract:
   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
   video.  JPEG XS is a low-latency, lightweight image coding system.
   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
   resolutions and frame rates, while offering visually lossless
   quality, reduced power consumption, and end-to-end latency confined
   to a fraction of a frame.


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Dear Russ,

Thank you for the review and the comments. Please find the following answer=
s to your comments below. I have modified the draft and uploaded a -13 vers=
ion.


> Major Concerns:
> Section 7.2.1:  Does the SHALL related to [SMPTE-ST2110-10] only apply wh=
en TP=3D2110TPNL or TP=3D2110TPW?  Please reword to be clear when this SHAL=
L statement applies.

The short answer is yes, the SHALL only applies when using the RTP specific=
ation in combination with SMPTE ST 2110. But, we chose to remove the SHALL =
sentence about ST 2110. Originally it was trying to say that in the case of=
 using this RTP Payload under a SMPTE ST 2110 system, that the SDP descript=
ion must then also follow the rules of STMPTE ST 2110-10. But, it is eviden=
t that when implementing another standard, the one must follow that standar=
d. It is a concern of a ST 2110 implementer. For this specification it chan=
ges nothing specifically (ST 2110-10 mandates some specific SDP fields and =
values, but this is allowed by the memo). We specifically made these change=
s to allow the RTP payload to be used also outside of a ST 2110 ecosystem.

> Minor Concerns:
> Section 3.3:  I do not have [ISO21122-2], and obviously an implementer wi=
ll need that document.  Can a bit more be said about "the profile" and "the=
 level and sublevel used" without making this document too big?  I am able =
to get a feel for the other things listed here from their names.

We reworked this section to clarify better the concepts of the profile and =
level/sublevel fields, without duplicating content from ISO21122-2.

> Section 3.4:  Can you please provide some explanation of the "frat field"=
?

We reformulated the text a bit and added an explicit reference for the frat=
 field to ISO21122-3 where it is defined.

> Nits:
> Section 3.2:  I do not understand the the last sentence?  Is it the same =
as: It represents sample values of a single image, without any interpretati=
on relative to a colour space.

Yes, that is correct. We changed the sentence to use your suggested wording=
.

> Section 5: s/of ST 2110-21 do not /of [SMPTE-ST2110-21] do not /

We have updated the reference.



I hope this addresses all concerns. If not, please let us know.

Best regards,
Tim Bruylants.


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Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review =
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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2021-05-06
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-17
IESG Telechat date: Unknown


Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns:

Section 7.2.1:  Does the SHALL related to [SMPTE-ST2110-10] only apply when=
 TP=3D2110TPNL or TP=3D2110TPW?  Please reword to be clear when this SHALL =
statement applies.


Minor Concerns:

Section 3.3:  I do not have [ISO21122-2], and obviously an implementer will=
 need that document.  Can a bit more be said about "the profile"
and "the level and sublevel used" without making this document too big?  I =
am able to get a feel for the other things listed here from their names.

Section 3.4:  Can you please provide some explanation of the "frat field"?


Nits:

Section 3.2:  I do not understand the the last sentence?  Is it the same as=
: It represents sample values of a single image, without any interpretation=
 relative to a colour space.

Section 5: s/of ST 2110-21 do not /of [SMPTE-ST2110-21] do not /



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Tim:

> Thank you for the review and the comments. Please find the following =
answers to your comments below. I have modified the draft and uploaded a =
-13 version.
>=20
>=20
>> Major Concerns:
>> Section 7.2.1:  Does the SHALL related to [SMPTE-ST2110-10] only =
apply when TP=3D2110TPNL or TP=3D2110TPW?  Please reword to be clear =
when this SHALL statement applies.
>=20
> The short answer is yes, the SHALL only applies when using the RTP =
specification in combination with SMPTE ST 2110. But, we chose to remove =
the SHALL sentence about ST 2110. Originally it was trying to say that =
in the case of using this RTP Payload under a SMPTE ST 2110 system, that =
the SDP description must then also follow the rules of STMPTE ST =
2110-10. But, it is evident that when implementing another standard, the =
one must follow that standard. It is a concern of a ST 2110 implementer. =
For this specification it changes nothing specifically (ST 2110-10 =
mandates some specific SDP fields and values, but this is allowed by the =
memo). We specifically made these changes to allow the RTP payload to be =
used also outside of a ST 2110 ecosystem.

That resolves my concern; thanks.

>> Minor Concerns:
>> Section 3.3:  I do not have [ISO21122-2], and obviously an =
implementer will need that document.  Can a bit more be said about "the =
profile" and "the level and sublevel used" without making this document =
too big?  I am able to get a feel for the other things listed here from =
their names.
>=20
> We reworked this section to clarify better the concepts of the profile =
and level/sublevel fields, without duplicating content from ISO21122-2.

This helps; thanks.

>> Section 3.4:  Can you please provide some explanation of the "frat =
field"?
>=20
> We reformulated the text a bit and added an explicit reference for the =
frat field to ISO21122-3 where it is defined.

Thanks for adding that context.

>> Nits:
>> Section 3.2:  I do not understand the the last sentence?  Is it the =
same as: It represents sample values of a single image, without any =
interpretation relative to a colour space.
>=20
> Yes, that is correct. We changed the sentence to use your suggested =
wording.

That is more clear to me; thanks.

>> Section 5: s/of ST 2110-21 do not /of [SMPTE-ST2110-21] do not /
>=20
> We have updated the reference.

Thanks.

Russ


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Rich,

Thanks for the review.

I am composing a new version because of the Gen-ART review, and want to 
propose changes to satisfy your comments.

You ask if it is common to have the mixers being trusted.

In the expected first implementation environments for this draft, it is. 
That is in emergency service networks. Also in personal communication 
services it is.

The first implementation environments are also expected to use the SIP 
centralized conference model (RFC 4353 etc.) where all media are 
expected to be mixed centrally. Thus the security aspects would be 
similar for audio, video and real-time text.

I have tried to elaborate a bit more on this in a modified security 
considerations section, currently looking like this and being ready for 
submission together with the changes because of the Gen-ART review. 
Would this satisfy your concerns?

--------Proposed security concerns--------------------

11.  Security Considerations

    The RTP-mixer model requires the mixer to be allowed to decrypt,
    pack, and encrypt secured text from the conference participants.
    Therefore the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in
    confidentiality and integrity.  This situation is similar to the
    situation for handling audio and video media in centralized mixers.

    The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
    reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
    notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
    already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], and may be restricted for
    privacy reasons.  The receiving user will then get a more symbolic
    label for the source.

    Participants with malicious intentions may appear and e.g., disturb
    the multiparty session by emitting a continuous flow of text.  They
    may also send text that appears to originate from other participants.
    Counteractions should be to require secure signaling, media and
    authentication, and to provide higher level conference functions
    e.g., for blocking, muting, and expelling participants.

    Further security considerations specific for this application are
    specified in Section 3.19.
----------------------------------------------------------

Regards

Gunnar

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Den 2021-05-06 kl. 16:36, skrev Rich Salz via Datatracker:
> Reviewer: Rich Salz
> Review result: Ready
>
> This review is for the benefit of the Security AD's. Nobody else should read
> this. Or, if you read it, treat it as any other last call review :)
>
> I know very little about WebRTC, AVT, etc.
>
> I thought Section 1.2, summary of the alternatives, was great. I wish more
> documents did this kind of thing. And similar for all of section 2. The details
> in Section 3 about how to comply seem very clear. If I were implementing this,
> I could use easily use this as a checklist and test suite. Section 3.19 is the
> most important one for transport security. Not knowing the operating
> environments, it seems reasonable.
>
> The security considerations seems a little scant, given the opportunity for
> privacy concerns of participants and for intruders to disrupt calls. Is it
> common that the mixer is a trusted entity? A statement on that either way would
> be useful.
>
>
>
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    <p>Rich,</p>
    <p>Thanks for the review.<br>
    </p>
    <p>I am composing a new version because of the Gen-ART review, and
      want to propose changes to satisfy your comments. <br>
    </p>
    <p>You ask if it is common to have the mixers being trusted. <br>
    </p>
    <p>In the expected first implementation environments for this draft,
      it is. That is in emergency service networks. Also in personal
      communication services it is.</p>
    <p>The first implementation environments are also expected to use
      the SIP centralized conference model (RFC 4353 etc.) where all
      media are expected to be mixed centrally. Thus the security
      aspects would be similar for audio, video and real-time text. <br>
    </p>
    <p>I have tried to elaborate a bit more on this in a modified
      security considerations section, currently looking like this and
      being ready for submission together with the changes because of
      the Gen-ART review. Would this satisfy your concerns?</p>
    <p>--------Proposed security concerns--------------------</p>
    <pre style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; overflow-wrap: break-word; white-space: pre-wrap;">11.  Security Considerations

   The RTP-mixer model requires the mixer to be allowed to decrypt,
   pack, and encrypt secured text from the conference participants.
   Therefore the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in
   confidentiality and integrity.  This situation is similar to the
   situation for handling audio and video media in centralized mixers.

   The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
   reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
   notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
   already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], and may be restricted for
   privacy reasons.  The receiving user will then get a more symbolic
   label for the source.

   Participants with malicious intentions may appear and e.g., disturb
   the multiparty session by emitting a continuous flow of text.  They
   may also send text that appears to originate from other participants.
   Counteractions should be to require secure signaling, media and
   authentication, and to provide higher level conference functions
   e.g., for blocking, muting, and expelling participants.

   Further security considerations specific for this application are
   specified in Section 3.19.
----------------------------------------------------------

Regards

</pre>
    <p>Gunnar</p>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-06 kl. 16:36, skrev Rich
      Salz via Datatracker:<br>
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      cite="mid:162031178943.8783.4063437681950995450@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Reviewer: Rich Salz
Review result: Ready

This review is for the benefit of the Security AD's. Nobody else should read
this. Or, if you read it, treat it as any other last call review :)

I know very little about WebRTC, AVT, etc.

I thought Section 1.2, summary of the alternatives, was great. I wish more
documents did this kind of thing. And similar for all of section 2. The details
in Section 3 about how to comply seem very clear. If I were implementing this,
I could use easily use this as a checklist and test suite. Section 3.19 is the
most important one for transport security. Not knowing the operating
environments, it seems reasonable.

The security considerations seems a little scant, given the opportunity for
privacy concerns of participants and for intruders to disrupt calls. Is it
common that the mixer is a trusted entity? A statement on that either way would
be useful.



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Thanks.

I have added this sentence to section 3.19

" Further general security considerations are covered in
    Section 11."

Regards

Gunnar Hellstrom

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GHAccess

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Den 2021-05-07 kl. 18:13, skrev Salz, Rich:
>
> Thanks for the explanation and update. Your updated draft addresses my 
> concerns.  Perhaps 3.9 should have a forward link to Sec 11
>
> *From: *Gunnar Hellström <gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se>
> *Date: *Friday, May 7, 2021 at 11:45 AM
> *To: *Rich Salz <rsalz@akamai.com>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
> *Cc: *"last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, 
> "draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix.all@ietf.org" 
> <draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix.all@ietf.org>, "avt@ietf.org" 
> <avt@ietf.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [AVTCORE] Secdir last call review of 
> draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-16
>
> Rich,
>
> Thanks for the review.
>
> I am composing a new version because of the Gen-ART review, and want 
> to propose changes to satisfy your comments.
>
> You ask if it is common to have the mixers being trusted.
>
> In the expected first implementation environments for this draft, it 
> is. That is in emergency service networks. Also in personal 
> communication services it is.
>
> The first implementation environments are also expected to use the SIP 
> centralized conference model (RFC 4353 etc.) where all media are 
> expected to be mixed centrally. Thus the security aspects would be 
> similar for audio, video and real-time text.
>
> I have tried to elaborate a bit more on this in a modified security 
> considerations section, currently looking like this and being ready 
> for submission together with the changes because of the Gen-ART 
> review. Would this satisfy your concerns?
>
> --------Proposed security concerns--------------------
>
> 11.  Security Considerations
>    The RTP-mixer model requires the mixer to be allowed to decrypt,
>    pack, and encrypt secured text from the conference participants.
>    Therefore the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in
>    confidentiality and integrity.  This situation is similar to the
>    situation for handling audio and video media in centralized mixers.
>    The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
>    reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
>    notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
>    already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], and may be restricted for
>    privacy reasons.  The receiving user will then get a more symbolic
>    label for the source.
>    Participants with malicious intentions may appear and e.g., disturb
>    the multiparty session by emitting a continuous flow of text.  They
>    may also send text that appears to originate from other participants.
>    Counteractions should be to require secure signaling, media and
>    authentication, and to provide higher level conference functions
>    e.g., for blocking, muting, and expelling participants.
>    Further security considerations specific for this application are
>    specified in Section 3.19.
> ----------------------------------------------------------
> Regards
>
> Gunnar
>
> -- 
> Gunnar Hellström
> GHAccess
> gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se  <mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se>
>
> Den 2021-05-06 kl. 16:36, skrev Rich Salz via Datatracker:
>
>     Reviewer: Rich Salz
>
>     Review result: Ready
>
>     This review is for the benefit of the Security AD's. Nobody else should read
>
>     this. Or, if you read it, treat it as any other last call review :)
>
>     I know very little about WebRTC, AVT, etc.
>
>     I thought Section 1.2, summary of the alternatives, was great. I wish more
>
>     documents did this kind of thing. And similar for all of section 2. The details
>
>     in Section 3 about how to comply seem very clear. If I were implementing this,
>
>     I could use easily use this as a checklist and test suite. Section 3.19 is the
>
>     most important one for transport security. Not knowing the operating
>
>     environments, it seems reasonable.
>
>     The security considerations seems a little scant, given the opportunity for
>
>     privacy concerns of participants and for intruders to disrupt calls. Is it
>
>     common that the mixer is a trusted entity? A statement on that either way would
>
>     be useful.
>
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>
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> Gunnar Hellström
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    <p>Thanks.</p>
    <p>I have added this sentence to section 3.19</p>
    <p>" Further general security considerations are covered in<br>
         Section 11."</p>
    <p>Regards</p>
    <p>Gunnar Hellstrom</p>
    <pre>-- </pre>
    <pre>Gunnar Hellström</pre>
    <pre>GHAccess</pre>
    <pre><a href="mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a></pre>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-07 kl. 18:13, skrev Salz,
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        <p class="MsoNormal">Thanks for the explanation and update. 
          Your updated draft addresses my concerns.  Perhaps 3.9 should
          have a forward link to Sec 11<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span
              style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Gunnar Hellström
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se">&lt;gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se&gt;</a><br>
              <b>Date: </b>Friday, May 7, 2021 at 11:45 AM<br>
              <b>To: </b>Rich Salz <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:rsalz@akamai.com">&lt;rsalz@akamai.com&gt;</a>,
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:secdir@ietf.org">"secdir@ietf.org"</a> <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:secdir@ietf.org">&lt;secdir@ietf.org&gt;</a><br>
              <b>Cc: </b><a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:last-call@ietf.org">"last-call@ietf.org"</a>
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:last-call@ietf.org">&lt;last-call@ietf.org&gt;</a>,
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix.all@ietf.org">"draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix.all@ietf.org"</a>
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix.all@ietf.org">&lt;draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix.all@ietf.org&gt;</a>,
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:avt@ietf.org">"avt@ietf.org"</a> <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:avt@ietf.org">&lt;avt@ietf.org&gt;</a><br>
              <b>Subject: </b>Re: [AVTCORE] Secdir last call review of
              draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-16<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        </div>
        <div>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
        </div>
        <p>Rich,<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>Thanks for the review.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>I am composing a new version because of the Gen-ART review,
          and want to propose changes to satisfy your comments.
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>You ask if it is common to have the mixers being trusted. <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>In the expected first implementation environments for this
          draft, it is. That is in emergency service networks. Also in
          personal communication services it is.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>The first implementation environments are also expected to
          use the SIP centralized conference model (RFC 4353 etc.) where
          all media are expected to be mixed centrally. Thus the
          security aspects would be similar for audio, video and
          real-time text.
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>I have tried to elaborate a bit more on this in a modified
          security considerations section, currently looking like this
          and being ready for submission together with the changes
          because of the Gen-ART review. Would this satisfy your
          concerns?<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p>--------Proposed security concerns--------------------<o:p></o:p></p>
        <pre style="font-variant-ligatures: normal;font-variant-caps: normal;orphans: 2;text-align:start;widows: 2;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;text-decoration-thickness: initial;text-decoration-style: initial;text-decoration-color: initial;overflow-wrap: break-word;white-space:pre-wrap;word-spacing:0px"><span style="color:black">11.  Security Considerations<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   The RTP-mixer model requires the mixer to be allowed to decrypt,<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   pack, and encrypt secured text from the conference participants.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   Therefore the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   confidentiality and integrity.  This situation is similar to the<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   situation for handling audio and video media in centralized mixers.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], and may be restricted for<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   privacy reasons.  The receiving user will then get a more symbolic<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   label for the source.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   Participants with malicious intentions may appear and e.g., disturb<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   the multiparty session by emitting a continuous flow of text.  They<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   may also send text that appears to originate from other participants.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   Counteractions should be to require secure signaling, media and<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   authentication, and to provide higher level conference functions<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   e.g., for blocking, muting, and expelling participants.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   Further security considerations specific for this application are<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">   specified in Section 3.19.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">----------------------------------------------------------<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
        <pre><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></pre>
        <p>Gunnar<o:p></o:p></p>
        <pre>-- <o:p></o:p></pre>
        <pre>Gunnar Hellström<o:p></o:p></pre>
        <pre>GHAccess<o:p></o:p></pre>
        <pre><a href="mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se" moz-do-not-send="true">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
        <div>
          <p class="MsoNormal">Den 2021-05-06 kl. 16:36, skrev Rich Salz
            via Datatracker:<o:p></o:p></p>
        </div>
        <blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
          <pre>Reviewer: Rich Salz<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>Review result: Ready<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre>This review is for the benefit of the Security AD's. Nobody else should read<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>this. Or, if you read it, treat it as any other last call review :)<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre>I know very little about WebRTC, AVT, etc.<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre>I thought Section 1.2, summary of the alternatives, was great. I wish more<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>documents did this kind of thing. And similar for all of section 2. The details<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>in Section 3 about how to comply seem very clear. If I were implementing this,<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>I could use easily use this as a checklist and test suite. Section 3.19 is the<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>most important one for transport security. Not knowing the operating<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>environments, it seems reasonable.<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre>The security considerations seems a little scant, given the opportunity for<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>privacy concerns of participants and for intruders to disrupt calls. Is it<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>common that the mixer is a trusted entity? A statement on that either way would<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>be useful.<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
          <pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre>Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance<o:p></o:p></pre>
          <pre><a href="mailto:avt@ietf.org" moz-do-not-send="true">avt@ietf.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
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        <pre>-- <o:p></o:p></pre>
        <pre>Gunnar Hellström<o:p></o:p></pre>
        <pre>GHAccess<o:p></o:p></pre>
        <pre><a href="mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se" moz-do-not-send="true">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
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Hi - sorry for not responding sooner.  Responses inline.

Do you want me to publish a version -13 with the changes mentioned here? =
 In the meantime my changes are in the GitHub repo at =
https://github.com/juberti/draughts/tree/master/vp9 =
<https://github.com/juberti/draughts/tree/master/vp9>.

> On Apr 19, 2021, at 6:32 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com> =
wrote:
>=20
> This is my review of draft-ietf-payload-vp9-12.
>=20
> Video codecs are not exactly my strong suit, so finding technical =
errors wasn't an expected part of my mission here.  I'm going on faith =
that this is all technically correct, and just looking for editorial or =
procedural things.
>=20
> -MSK
>=20
> --
>=20
> Shepherd writeup:
>=20
> * We should probably explain why a document coming out of AVTCORE =
bears a name that doesn't start with "draft-ietf-avtcore-...".  The =
shepherd writeup should mention this.  Or if you don't want to do that, =
please let me know what the history is there so I can include it in a =
note to the IESG.

Either in the writeup or in the note is fine, but the history is that =
the Payload Working Group was merged back into the AVTCore group in =
September 2019, whereas this draft was first adopted as a WG item of the =
Payload group in 2015.  (Yes, we=E2=80=99ve been very slow about =
finishing this draft.)

> * The writeup identifies draft-ietf-avtext-lrr as a downward =
reference, but that document is in the queue already for Proposed =
Standard status, and this one is going for the same, so I don't believe =
this is a downward reference (once both are published).
>  <>
> General nits:
>=20
> * Referring to an I-D as a "memo" is a little outdated.  Suggest =
"document" or "specification" instead.

Ok.

>=20
> Section 1:
>=20
> * Should this document obsolete VP8 (RFC 6386)?

No, VP8 and VP9 are two different codecs, and they=E2=80=99re both =
expected to remain in active use.

> Section 3:
>=20
> * The Editor's Note seems like it should've been resolved by now.  If =
no suggestion for improved terminology arrives by the end of IESG =
Evaluation, should that paragraph be removed?

I=E2=80=99ve kept the clarification (that =E2=80=9CPicture Group=E2=80=9D =
and =E2=80=9CGroup of Pictures=E2=80=9D are different), but removed the =
request for better terminology.

> Section 4.1:
>=20
> * For "Timestamp", did you mean to say "alternately" (i.e., every =
other one; alternating) or "alternatively" (i.e., presenting a different =
choice)?

=E2=80=9CAlternatively=E2=80=9D; changed.

> Section 4.2:
>=20
> * First sentence, "The" shouldn't be capitalized.

Ok.

>=20
> * The use of CONDITIONALLY RECOMMENDED or CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED is =
puzzling because one of them is a BCP 14 word and one isn't, but both =
look like they're supposed to be.  This might be better described in the =
prose for each of these fields, and just use the BCP 14 words here (or =
omit them entirely).

I=E2=80=99ve made =E2=80=9CConditionally=E2=80=9D only initially =
capitalized, and clarified the description of the fields to have =
capitalized BCP 14 words.

> * The description of PID refers to a "maximum ID", but that's not =
specified anywhere.  Is it simply the largest PID that will fit in the =
available bits, or is there some other maximum to be observed?

The maximum that will fit in the available bits; I=E2=80=99ve clarified.

>=20
> * For the "D:" bullet, I think "MUST be set to one if current spatial =
layer SID frame depends on spatial layer SID-1 frame of the same =
picture. MUST only be set to zero if current spatial layer SID frame =
does not depend on spatial layer SID-1 frame of the same picture." can =
be reduced to "MUST be set to one if and only if the current spatial =
layer SID frame depends on spatial layer SID-1 frame of the same =
picture."

Good improvement.

>=20
> Section 6.1:
>=20
> * Does the media type's subtype name have to be "VP9", in specifically =
that case?

No, media subtype names aren=E2=80=99t case-sensitive.  Do you think it =
would be clearer to write it in lower-case here?

> * Per RFC 6838, please change Required Parameters to "N/A" instead of =
"None".

Ok.

> * I think it's unusual for the BCP 14 text to appear in a media type =
registration (specifically, the Optional Parameters).  You might =
consider moving that discussion to some other prose section, and in the =
media type registration just list the supported parameters and their =
syntaxes.

I=E2=80=99ve reorganized this section; I think it generally flows better =
now.

Thank you for your comments!

=E2=80=94=20
Jonathan Lennox
jonathan.lennox@8x8.com


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<html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; =
charset=3Dutf-8"></head><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; =
-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=3D"">Hi =
- sorry for not responding sooner. &nbsp;Responses inline.<div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Do you want me to =
publish a version -13 with the changes mentioned here? &nbsp;In the =
meantime my changes are in the GitHub repo at&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://github.com/juberti/draughts/tree/master/vp9" =
class=3D"">https://github.com/juberti/draughts/tree/master/vp9</a>.<br =
class=3D""><div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">On Apr 19, 2021, at 6:32 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:superuser@gmail.com" class=3D"">superuser@gmail.com</a>&gt;=
 wrote:</div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">This is my review of =
draft-ietf-payload-vp9-12.<br class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Video codecs are not exactly my strong =
suit, so finding technical errors wasn't an expected part of my mission =
here.&nbsp; I'm going on faith that this is all technically correct, and =
just looking for editorial or procedural things.</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">-MSK</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">--</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Shepherd writeup:<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* We should probably explain why a =
document coming out of AVTCORE bears a name that doesn't start with =
"draft-ietf-avtcore-...".&nbsp; The shepherd writeup should mention =
this.&nbsp; Or if you don't want to do that, please let me know what the =
history is there so I can include it in a note to the IESG.<br =
class=3D""></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Either in the writeup or in the note is fine, but =
the history is that the Payload Working Group was merged back into the =
AVTCore group in September 2019, whereas this draft was first adopted as =
a WG item of the Payload group in 2015. &nbsp;(Yes, we=E2=80=99ve been =
very slow about finishing this draft.)</div><br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">* The writeup identifies draft-ietf-avtext-lrr as a downward =
reference, but that document is in the queue already for Proposed =
Standard status, and this one is going for the same, so I don't believe =
this is a downward reference (once both are published).<pre =
class=3D"gmail-newpage"><a name=3D"ref-I-D.ietf-avtext-lrr" =
id=3D"gmail-ref-I-D.ietf-avtext-lrr" class=3D""></a></pre></div><div =
class=3D"">General nits:<br class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">* Referring to an I-D as a "memo" is a little outdated.&nbsp; =
Suggest "document" or "specification" =
instead.</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div>Ok.</div><div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D""><br=
 class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Section 1:</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* Should this document obsolete VP8 =
(RFC 6386)?</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>No, VP8 and VP9 are two different codecs, and =
they=E2=80=99re both expected to remain in active use.</div><br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">Section 3:<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* The Editor's Note seems like it =
should've been resolved by now.&nbsp; If no suggestion for improved =
terminology arrives by the end of IESG Evaluation, should that paragraph =
be removed?</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>I=E2=80=99ve kept the clarification (that =
=E2=80=9CPicture Group=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9CGroup of Pictures=E2=80=9D =
are different), but removed the request for better terminology.</div><br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">Section 4.1:<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* For "Timestamp", did you mean to say =
"alternately" (i.e., every other one; alternating) or "alternatively" =
(i.e., presenting a different =
choice)?</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>=E2=80=9CAlternatively=E2=80=9D; changed.</div><br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">Section 4.2:</div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* First sentence, "The" =
shouldn't be capitalized.</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Ok.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D""><br=
 class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* The use of CONDITIONALLY RECOMMENDED =
or CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED is puzzling because one of them is a BCP 14 =
word and one isn't, but both look like they're supposed to be.&nbsp; =
This might be better described in the prose for each of these fields, =
and just use the BCP 14 words here (or omit them =
entirely).</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>I=E2=80=99ve made =E2=80=9CConditionally=E2=80=9D =
only initially capitalized, and clarified the description of the fields =
to have capitalized BCP 14 words.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">* The description of PID refers to a "maximum ID", but that's =
not specified anywhere.&nbsp; Is it simply the largest PID that will fit =
in the available bits, or is there some other maximum to be observed?<br =
class=3D""></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>The maximum that will fit in the available bits; =
I=E2=80=99ve clarified.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D""><br=
 class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* For the "D:" bullet, I think "MUST =
be set to one if current spatial layer SID frame depends on spatial =
layer SID-1 frame of the same picture.  MUST only be set to zero if =
current spatial layer SID frame does not depend on spatial layer SID-1 =
frame of the same picture." can be reduced to "MUST be set to one if and =
only if the current spatial layer SID frame depends on spatial layer =
SID-1 frame of the same picture."</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Good improvement.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Section 6.1:<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">* Does the media type's =
subtype name have to be "VP9", in specifically that =
case?</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>No, =
media subtype names aren=E2=80=99t case-sensitive. &nbsp;Do you think it =
would be clearer to write it in lower-case here?</div><br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">* Per RFC 6838, please change =
Required Parameters to "N/A" instead of =
"None".</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div>Ok.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">* I think it's unusual for the BCP 14 text to appear in a =
media type registration (specifically, the Optional Parameters).&nbsp; =
You might consider moving that discussion to some other prose section, =
and in the media type registration just list the supported parameters =
and their syntaxes.</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>I=E2=80=99ve reorganized this section; I think it =
generally flows better now.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div>Thank =
you for your comments!</div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>=E2=80=94&nbsp;</div><div>Jonathan =
Lennox</div><div><a href=3D"mailto:jonathan.lennox@8x8.com" =
class=3D"">jonathan.lennox@8x8.com</a></div><div><br =
class=3D""></div></div></div></body></html>=

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Continuing with comments and edit proposals from "Nits/editorial 
comments:" below.

Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: 2021-05-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time text
> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. It has
> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready with
> issues]
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues:
[GH] Covered in a recent response.
>
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> General:
> Change “multi-party” to “multiparty” throughout the document. While we are a
> bit inconsistent about that particular hyphenation within the IETF, all major
> dictionaries I sampled spell this as a single, non-hyphenated word.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Append a comma after each instance of “e.g.”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Change “multiparty aware” to “multiparty-aware” throughout the document except
> in two cases where you “multiparty awareness”, which should be left alone.
> These are located in section 4.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence and section 6.1,
> 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Change “fall-back” to “fallback” in a few places in the document. Both uses are
> found in the document.
[GH] Accepted and done.
> Change “RTP-mixer based” to “RTP-mixer-based” throughout the document.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Change “multiparty capable” to “multiparty-capable” throughout the document.
[GH] I suggest to change to "multiparty-aware" instead for consistency.
>
> Delete periods at the end of section/subsection titles, e.g., section 6.2.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Specific:
>
> Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: I’d rewrite it in the active voice as: “This
> document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text mixing suitable for
> a centralized conference model that enables source identification and rapidly
> interleaved transmission of text from different sources.”
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 1, Abstract, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert a hyphen between
> “multiparty” and “coded”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 5, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: I think I would change “in” to “at”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 5, 7th paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete “any”. Change “way” to “ways”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 6, section 1.1, 2nd paragraph: insert “are” before “as”.
[GH] Recently changed to just "are defined in" by proposal in another 
review. I suggest to keep that.
>
> Page 6, section 1.1, “WebRTC” term: change “web based” to “web-based”. Insert
> “real-time” before “communication”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 6, “DTLS-SRTP” term: delete “stands for security”. Insert “is a DTLS
> extension for use with SRTP/SRTCP” before “specified”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 6, “multiparty-aware” term: change “stands for” to “describes”. Append a
> comma after “real-time” before “separated”. Append a comma after “source”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 6, “multiparty-unaware”: change “stands for” to “describes”.
[GH] Accepted and done.Your use of hyphen in "multiparty-unaware" made 
me understand that that term also should be hyphenated all through the 
document. Done.
>
> Pages 7 and 8: delete the period after each of the non-indented lines, e.g., at
> the end of “Multiple RTP streams, one per participant.”
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 7, 1st block, 4th sentence: change “end to end” to “end-to-end”.
[GH] Accepted and done. Done also in one more location in 3.19 inserted 
in version -16.
>
> Page 7, 1st block, 11th sentence: append a comma after “participant”. Delete
> the following “and”. Insert “with” before “no”.
[GH] Accepted and done.
>
> Page 7, 1st block, 14th sentence: change “implementation” to “implementations”
> and delete “technologies” unless you really want the problem is in regards to
> technologies and not particular implementations.
[GH] Accepted and done, it looks better this way even if the problem may 
be common in certain implementation technologies.
>
> Page 7, 1st block 15th sentence: change “made” to “led to”. Insert “being”
> before “only”.
[GH] Accepted and done. From here all comments are accepted and done as 
proposed except where a specific answer is provided.
>
> Page 7, 2nd block, 1st sentence: insert “a” before “shorter”. Insert “the”
> before source”. Insert “the” before “CSRC”. Append field after “CSRC”.
>
> Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence: insert “a” before the quoted “text/t140”.
>
> Page 7, 2nd block, 3rd sentence: delete the whole sentence.
>
> Page 7, 2nd block, 6th sentence: move “with” before “receivers”. Insert “having
> the” before “default”.
>
> Page 8, 1st partial block, 2nd full sentence: insert “it” before “corresponds”.
>
> Page 8, 1st full block, 6th sentence: change “be varying” to “vary”.
>
> Page 8, 1st full block, 9th sentence: change “while” to “When”.
>
> Page 9, section 1.3, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: change “calltaker” to “call
> taker”. Change “observing” to “to observe”.
>
> Page 11, section 2.4, 3rd paragraph: append a comma after “CSRC-list”.
>
> Page 12, section 3.1, 4th paragraph: change “From other aspects” to “In other
> regards”.
>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert a hyphen between “10”
> and “second”.
>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 1st paragraph, 4th sentence: delete “a” before “good”.
>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “SHALL be” before
> “sent”. Insert “the” before “end”.
>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: Append a period at the end
> of the sentence.
>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 3rd paragraph: change “in” to “as”.
>
> Page 13, section 3.6: insert a hyphen between “locally” and “produced”. Append
> “text” after “produced”.
>
> Page 14, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete the comma after “T140blocks”.
>
> Page 14, section 3.10, 1st paragraph after the bullet points, 1st sentence:
> insert “the” before “time”.
>
> Page 15, section 3.11, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after “switch”. Change
> “poulated” to “populated”.
>
> Page 15, section 3.12, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “next”.
>
> Page 15, section 3.12, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “next”.
>
> Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “number” to “level”.
>
> Page 16, section 3.14, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: delete an extraneous space
> after “(“.
>
> Page 16, section 3.14, 1st paragraph, last sentence: insert “self-sourced”
> before “data”. Delete “that it is source of itself”.
>
> Page 16, section 3.16, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after
> “CNAME”.
>
> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “The receiver
> SHALL monitor”. Change “The” to “the”. Delete “SHALL be monitored”.
>
> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a comma after
> “case”. Insert “the receiver SHALL create” before “a t140block”. Delete “SHALL
> be created”. I’m suggesting but not certain that you might want to change “and
> assigned” to “associated with”.

[GH] Accepted and done, but also "accociated" is changed to "associate 
it" and "inserted" to "insert it" to match the grammar in the beginning 
of the sentence.

>
> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: change “if” to “whether”
> if you are amenable to that wording.
>
> Page 18, 2nd paragraph: delete an extraneous blank line before this paragraph.
>
> Page 18, section 3.18, 1st sentence: insert a hyphen between “10” and “second”.
>
> Page 19, section 3.19, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “session”. Insert
> “the” before “media”.
>
> Page 19, section 3.19, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “media”. Consider
> deleting “security by”.
>
> Page 19, section 3.19, 5th sentence: change “is” to “are”.
>
> Page 20, section 3.21, 4th sentence: append a period after “etc”.
>
> Page 21, 1st partial paragraph, 1st full sentence: insert “a” before “dropped”.
>
> Page 21, 1st full paragraph, 1st sentence: delete an extraneous space after
> “(“. Where the word “area” occurs, would that make more sense as “buffer” or
> “queue”?
[GH] Accepted and done. "area" changed to "buffer" only for this 
occurrance.
>
> Page 21, 1st full paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “initial” before the first
> “text”.
>
> Page 22, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “in” to “due to”.
>
> Page 22, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “packets” before “103”. Delete the
> comma after “103”.
>
> Page 22, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: there appears to be an adverb missing
> before “the”. Perhaps “during”?
[GH] Accepted and done. "during" used.
>
> Page 22, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “21040” to “21060”.
>
> Page 22, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: change “needs” to “need”.
>
> Page 22, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “21150” to “21160”.
>
> Page 23, section 4, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete “and”.
>
> Page 23, section 4, 3rd paragraph: consider changing “of” before “the text” to
> “conveyed in”.
>
> Page 24, 1st full paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert “a” before “replacement”.
>
> Page 24, 1st full paragraph, 4th sentence: change “just” to “the same”.
>
> Page 26, section 4.2, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert a hyphen between
> “best” and “effort”.
>
> Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after
> “simulated”.
>
> Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 4th sentence: change “is depending” to
> “depends”.
>
> Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 5th sentence: change “switch” to
> “switching”. Append a comma after “can”. Append a comma after “example”.
>
> Page 26, section 4.2.1, 3rd sentence: append a comma after “keep-alive”.
>
> Page 27, 5th bullet point: insert “the” before “next”. Change “if even” to
> “even if”. Insert “a” between “for” and “word delimiter”.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, 1st paragraph: insert “the” before “UTF-8”. Change
> “transform” to “transformation”.
[GH] "Encoding" used instead. It seems commonly used.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, “BEL”: change the comma after “session” to a period.
> Capitalize “provides”.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, “NEW LINE”, 3rd sentence: insert “the” before “display”.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, “CR LF”, 1st sentence: delete the comma after
> “supported”.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, “CR LF”, 3rd sentence: insert “the” before “display”.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, “INT ESC”, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “mode”.
>
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, “SGR”, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “rendition”.
>
> Page 29, 1st partial sentence: insert a hyphen between “256” and “bytes”. Then
> change “bytes” to “byte”.
>
> Page 29, “BOM”, 1st sentence: insert “it” before “SHALL”.

[GH] Accepted, but part of the first statement is separated out to a 
sentence of its own: "  It SHALL be deleted from incoming streams."

>
> Page 29, “Missing text mark”, 1st sentence: change the comma after “apostrophe
> ‘” to a period. Insert “It” before “marks”. Insert “the” before “place”. Insert
> “the” before “stream”.
>
> Page 29, “SGR”, 1st sentence: delete the comma after “(SGR)”. Insert “the”
> before “status”.
>
> Page 29, “SGR”, 2nd sentence: change “originated” to “originating”.
>
> Page 29, BS, last sentence: change “not” to “be”.
>
> Page 32, section 6.1, title: drop the “e.g.” in the subsection title.
[GH] Not done. Many countries have their own terms for textphones. In 
USA and a few other countries (Canada, Australia) they are called TTY. 
That term is not understood in other countries. "Textphone" may not be 
understood in USA. Therefore I prefer having both the general term and 
the (e.g., TTYs) in the heading.
>
> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, parenthetical: perhaps you want “i.e.,”
> instead of “e.g.” here given that further down you put “TTYS” in another
> parenthetical as though it weren’t just an example but the only exemplar of
> this type of device under discussion.

[GH] No. I did not mean "i.e.,". "TTY" is just one example with specific 
technology.

So, I suggest to keep this sentence:    "One case that may occur is a 
gateway to PSTN for communication with textphones (e.g., TTYs)."  While 
in the other places where (TTY) was mentioned it is deleted with its 
parenthesis.

>
> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: delete “make”. Change
> “adaptions” to “adapt”. Delete “for” before “the functional”. Delete “(TTY)”.

[GH] I also needed to insert "to" before "adapt" to make:

"This solution makes it possible to adapt
    to the functional limitations of the textphone."

>
> Page 32, section 6.1, 3rd paragraph: delete “(TTYs)”.
>
> Page 33, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “a” before “two-way”.
>
> Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “NAME”.
>
> Page 33, section 7: insert a hyphen between “multiparty” and “mixing” in this
> one instance of that term. Other uses of the term in the document should not be
> hyphenated.
>
> Page 34, section 8, 1st paragraph: I like the sound of the sentence better if
> you swap “valid” and “also”. That’s just me. 
[GH] Accepted so that you will like to read it again.
>
> Page 34, section 8, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert a space between
> “second” and “(“CPS”)”.
>
> Page 34, section 8, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert “an” before “RTP”.
> Regarding “excess”: in excess of what?
>
> Page 35, section 11, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “pack”.
>
> Page 35, section 11, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “CNAME”.
>
> Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: I suggest inserting
> “emitting” before “a continuous”. Change the comma after “flow of text” to a
> period. Delete the following “or”. Change the rest of that sentence to read
> something like: “They may also send text that appears to originate from other
> participants.” I rewrote that because the malicious participants don’t
> themselves masquerade as text, although that might be a mildly amusing
> Halloween costume.
>
> Page 35, section 11, 4th paragraph: delete one of “section” or “Section”. You
> capitalize that term interchangeably, so it’s your choice.
>
> Page 35, section 12.1 (when discussing -14 only): change “Cucherawy” to
> “Kucherawy” unless we’re talking about someone else. Yeah, I know these will
> all be deleted upon publication, but it caught my eye. I have not reviewed the
> remainder of the change history entries.
>
>
Thanks again for the thorough review. I have next version ready, also 
including changed caused by security comments and discussed in other mail.

Do you want me to submit the new version.


Regards

Gunnar

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Gunnar Hellström
GHAccess
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se


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Hi Jonathan,

On Fri, May 7, 2021 at 11:31 AM Jonathan Lennox <jonathan.lennox@8x8.com>
wrote:

> Do you want me to publish a version -13 with the changes mentioned here?
> In the meantime my changes are in the GitHub repo at
> https://github.com/juberti/draughts/tree/master/vp9.
>

Yes, please.


>
> Shepherd writeup:
>
> * We should probably explain why a document coming out of AVTCORE bears a
> name that doesn't start with "draft-ietf-avtcore-...".  The shepherd
> writeup should mention this.  Or if you don't want to do that, please let
> me know what the history is there so I can include it in a note to the IE=
SG.
>
>
> Either in the writeup or in the note is fine, but the history is that the
> Payload Working Group was merged back into the AVTCore group in September
> 2019, whereas this draft was first adopted as a WG item of the Payload
> group in 2015.  (Yes, we=E2=80=99ve been very slow about finishing this d=
raft.)
>

Ah, thanks for that.  I'll do it in the note.  The merger predates the time
of most people on the current IESG, so I'm just hoping to head off any
questions during IESG Evaluation.

No, VP8 and VP9 are two different codecs, and they=E2=80=99re both expected=
 to
> remain in active use.
>

OK, just checking.


>
> * The use of CONDITIONALLY RECOMMENDED or CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED is
> puzzling because one of them is a BCP 14 word and one isn't, but both loo=
k
> like they're supposed to be.  This might be better described in the prose
> for each of these fields, and just use the BCP 14 words here (or omit the=
m
> entirely).
>
>
> I=E2=80=99ve made =E2=80=9CConditionally=E2=80=9D only initially capitali=
zed, and clarified the
> description of the fields to have capitalized BCP 14 words.
>

OK, that at least looks less strange.  Fair compromise.


> Section 6.1:
>
> * Does the media type's subtype name have to be "VP9", in specifically
> that case?
>
>
> No, media subtype names aren=E2=80=99t case-sensitive.  Do you think it w=
ould be
> clearer to write it in lower-case here?
>

Not necessarily.  Again, just checking; there have been media type
applications I've processed in the past that came in in all-caps because
the applicant didn't know they're case-insensitive.

When the new version appears, I'll send it for Last Call.

-MSK

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr">Hi Jonathan,</div><div dir=3D"ltr"><br></=
div><div dir=3D"ltr">On Fri, May 7, 2021 at 11:31 AM Jonathan Lennox &lt;<a=
 href=3D"mailto:jonathan.lennox@8x8.com">jonathan.lennox@8x8.com</a>&gt; wr=
ote:<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);pa=
dding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;">Do you want me to=
 publish a version -13 with the changes mentioned here?=C2=A0 In the meanti=
me my changes are in the GitHub repo at=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://github.com/=
juberti/draughts/tree/master/vp9" target=3D"_blank">https://github.com/jube=
rti/draughts/tree/master/vp9</a>.<br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div=
>Yes, please.</div><div> <br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding=
-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-word;"><div><div><br><blockqu=
ote type=3D"cite"><br><div><div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Shepherd writeup:<br><br><=
/div><div>* We should probably explain why a document coming out of AVTCORE=
 bears a name that doesn&#39;t start with &quot;draft-ietf-avtcore-...&quot=
;.=C2=A0 The shepherd writeup should mention this.=C2=A0 Or if you don&#39;=
t want to do that, please let me know what the history is there so I can in=
clude it in a note to the IESG.<br></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br>=
</div><div>Either in the writeup or in the note is fine, but the history is=
 that the Payload Working Group was merged back into the AVTCore group in S=
eptember 2019, whereas this draft was first adopted as a WG item of the Pay=
load group in 2015. =C2=A0(Yes, we=E2=80=99ve been very slow about finishin=
g this draft.)</div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ah, =
thanks for that.=C2=A0 I&#39;ll do it in the note.=C2=A0 The merger predate=
s the time of most people on the current IESG, so I&#39;m just hoping to he=
ad off any questions during IESG Evaluation.<br></div><div> <br></div><bloc=
kquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:=
1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: b=
reak-word;"><div><div>No, VP8 and VP9 are two different codecs, and they=E2=
=80=99re both expected to remain in active use.</div></div></div></blockquo=
te><div><br></div><div>OK, just checking.</div><div> <br></div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px sol=
id rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-wrap: break-wo=
rd;"><div><div><br><blockquote type=3D"cite"><div><div dir=3D"ltr"><div><br=
></div><div>* The use of CONDITIONALLY RECOMMENDED or CONDITIONALLY REQUIRE=
D is puzzling because one of them is a BCP 14 word and one isn&#39;t, but b=
oth look like they&#39;re supposed to be.=C2=A0 This might be better descri=
bed in the prose for each of these fields, and just use the BCP 14 words he=
re (or omit them entirely).</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><d=
iv>I=E2=80=99ve made =E2=80=9CConditionally=E2=80=9D only initially capital=
ized, and clarified the description of the fields to have capitalized BCP 1=
4 words.</div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>OK, that a=
t least looks less strange.=C2=A0 Fair compromise.<br></div><div> <br></div=
><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border=
-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"overflow-w=
rap: break-word;"><div><div><br><blockquote type=3D"cite"><div><div dir=3D"=
ltr"><div>Section 6.1:<br><br></div><div>* Does the media type&#39;s subtyp=
e name have to be &quot;VP9&quot;, in specifically that case?</div></div></=
div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>No, media subtype names aren=E2=80=99t=
 case-sensitive.=C2=A0 Do you think it would be clearer to write it in lowe=
r-case here?</div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Not ne=
cessarily.=C2=A0 Again, just checking; there have been media type applicati=
ons I&#39;ve processed in the past that came in in all-caps because the app=
licant didn&#39;t know they&#39;re case-insensitive.</div><div><br></div><d=
iv>When the new version appears, I&#39;ll send it for Last Call.</div><div>=
<br> </div><div>-MSK<br></div></div></div>

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP Payload Format for VP9 Video
        Authors         : Justin Uberti
                          Stefan Holmer
                          Magnus Flodman
                          Danny Hong
                          Jonathan Lennox
	Filename        : draft-ietf-payload-vp9-13.txt
	Pages           : 25
	Date            : 2021-05-07

Abstract:
   This specification describes an RTP payload format for the VP9 video
   codec.  The payload format has wide applicability, as it supports
   applications from low bit-rate peer-to-peer usage, to high bit-rate
   video conferences.  It includes provisions for temporal and spatial
   scalability.


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Thanks for the quick response, Gunnar. I've prefaced my replies below =
with [PEY].

		-Peter

-----Original Message-----
From: Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m [mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se]=20
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To: Peter Yee; gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: Genart last call review of =
draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14

Thank you for the thorough review. Please see comments inline.

I will split the answers, and start here with answers and change=20
proposals for the minor issues:

Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: 2021-05-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time =
text
> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. =
It has
> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready =
with
> issues]
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Page 7, 1st block, 13th sentence: what constitutes a =
=E2=80=9Creasonable effort=E2=80=9D? It
> might be best to drop this sentence.

[GH] This reason is important for the desicion on technology selection.

I suggest a change from:

"For best deployment opportunity, it should be possible to upgrade=20
existing endpoint solutions to be multi-party aware with a reasonable=20
effort."

to

"For best deployment opportunity, it should be feasible to upgrade=20
existing endpoint solutions to become multiparty-aware."

[PEY] I'm fine with that.

>
> Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence, =E2=80=9C300 ms=E2=80=9D: would it =
make sense to append
> =E2=80=9Cperiod=E2=80=9D or =E2=80=9Ctimeout=E2=80=9D after this =
value?

[GH] I suggest to change from "every 300 ms." to "with 300 ms =
intervals."

[PEY] Works for me.

>
> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: in regards to =
=E2=80=9Conly part=E2=80=9D,
> how is this calculated?

[GH] I suggest to change from "If the "CPS" value is reached, longer=20
transmission intervals SHALL be applied and only part of the text queued =

for transmission sent at end of each transmission interval, until the=20
transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value again."

to

"If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be=20
applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission sent at end =

of each transmission interval that can be allowed without exceeding the=20
"CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value=20
again. Division of text for partial transmission MUST then be made at=20
T140block borders. "

[PEY] That's clearer. I'd insert "the" before "end".

>
> Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: The placing of all
> available redundant levels in the packet is presumably subject to a =
maximum
> packet size or the =E2=80=9CCPS=E2=80=9D limit, if there are obnoxious =
levels of redundancy
> specified?

[GH] Thanks, a good observation. It is already covered in section 3.10,=20
but it could be more emphasized there. In 3.12 we are only dealing with=20
the redundancy, which must be possible to send and is not included in=20
the "CPS" value.

I suggest that the following part of 3.10 is improved from:

"Redundant text SHALL also be included.  See Section 3.12"

to;
"Redundant text SHALL also be included, and the assessment of how much=20
new text can be included within the maximum packet size MUST take into=20
account that the redundancy has priority to be transmitted in its=20
entirety.  See Section 3.12."

[PEY] That works.

>
> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: =E2=80=9CSHALL =
prefer=E2=80=9D seems odd.
> It doesn=E2=80=99t say that the marking will actually be done. =
It=E2=80=99s just preferred. If
> you=E2=80=99re not going to require the marking in that sentence, then =
perhaps change
> =E2=80=9CSHALL=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9CSHOULD=E2=80=9D.
[GH] Agreed. Done as proposed.
>
> Page 19, section 3.20, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: I don=E2=80=99t =
find the =E2=80=9Csomething
> specific=E2=80=9D particularly enlightening. Like what? An identifier =
for the method?

[GH] Proposed to be changed from:

" In that case, the
    SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method, =
and
    an answer acknowledging the use of that method would accept it by
    something specific included in the SDP."

to:

"In that case, the
    SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method,=20
e.g. an SDP attribute or another media format. An answer selecting the=20
use of that method would accept it by
    a corresponding acknowledgement included in the SDP."

[PEY] That helps. With a comma after the "e.g.". ;-)

>
> Page 27, section 4.2.2, 4th paragraph: can you elaborate on these =
=E2=80=9CIntegrity
> considerations=E2=80=9D? Otherwise, it=E2=80=99s difficult to comply =
with the SHALL in any
> meaningful way.

[GH] The sentence was inserted after discussions with emergency service=20
providers, who had an example that it would be valuable to have a=20
detailed personalized label of an emergency service agent shown to other =

agents while a less personal label should be used when sent to the=20
calling users in emergency.

The security aspects on the label are quite similar to the security=20
aspects on the <display-text> elements specified in RFC 4575. Its=20
security aspects are specified in=20
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4575#section-8

You are right that that example contains mainly SHOULD and RECOMMENDED=20
and no SHALL.

I suggest changing:

"Integrity considerations SHALL be taken when composing the label."

to:

"Information available to the mixer for composing the label may contain=20
sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in sessions=20
not securely authenticated and protected. Integrity considerations=20
regarding how much personal information is included in the label SHOULD=20
therefore be taken when composing the label."

[PEY] That's much clearer.

>
> Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: any reason for the change from =
=E2=80=9CT.140=E2=80=9D in
> the previous and following paragraphs to =E2=80=9Ct140=E2=80=9D in =
this one?
[GH] No, they should be "T.140 data channels" for all cases in that=20
paragraph.
I have changed.
>
> Page 33, 6th paragraph: how is disappearance determined?
[GH]The disappearance may be signaled by the SIP conference system RFC=20
4353, RFC 4575 etc. as a conference notification if that system is used, =

or simply by removal of the text media in an RTP session modification.=20
There may also be a malfunction detected by keep-alive transactions not=20
being maintained. I suggest to not detail how it disappears.

[PEY] Okay by me if that's well understood in this ecosystem. The verb =
disappearance just made it sound somewhat mysterious as opposed to =
something that can be signaled.
>
> Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence before creating a new =
sentence
> (see nits, below): I=E2=80=99m having troubles tying the adjective =
=E2=80=9Csecure=E2=80=9D to each of
> the nouns in the sentence. It works for =E2=80=9Csignaling=E2=80=9D =
and perhaps =E2=80=9Cmedia=E2=80=9D, but
> for =E2=80=9Cauthentication=E2=80=9D, one sort of assumes that =
authentication mechanism is
> secure and helping to provide the security. Perhaps you could reword =
that
> sentence?

[GH] I propose to change the sentence from:

"Counteractions should be to require
    secure signaling, media and authentication, and to provide higher
    level conference functions e.g. for blocking and expelling
    participants."

to:

"Counteractions should be to require authentication, secure session=20
signaling and secure media. Higher level conference functions should=20
also be used e.g., for blocking and expelling participants who caused=20
security concerns."

[PEY] Yes, I like that. Along with my usual nit about an Oxford comma =
after "signaling". And a hyphen between "Higher" and "layer". Sorry, =
that's just how my eyes/brain work. ;-)


Thanks,

Gunnar Hellstrom

--=20
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This version incorporates the changes from A-D review, discussed on this =
list.

> On May 7, 2021, at 2:54 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>=20
>=20
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts =
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core =
Maintenance WG of the IETF.
>=20
>        Title           : RTP Payload Format for VP9 Video
>        Authors         : Justin Uberti
>                          Stefan Holmer
>                          Magnus Flodman
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Responses prefixed with [PEY] below.

		Kind regards,
		-Peter

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Continuing with comments and edit proposals from "Nits/editorial=20
comments:" below.

Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review result: Ready with Issues

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: 2021-05-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time =
text
> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. =
It has
> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready =
with
> issues]

> Nits/editorial comments:

> Change =E2=80=9Cmultiparty capable=E2=80=9D to =
=E2=80=9Cmultiparty-capable=E2=80=9D throughout the document.
[GH] I suggest to change to "multiparty-aware" instead for consistency.

[PEY] Fine by me.

> Page 6, section 1.1, 2nd paragraph: insert =E2=80=9Care=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9Cas=E2=80=9D.
[GH] Recently changed to just "are defined in" by proposal in another=20
review. I suggest to keep that.

[PEY] Agreed.=20

> Page 6, =E2=80=9Cmultiparty-unaware=E2=80=9D: change =E2=80=9Cstands =
for=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cdescribes=E2=80=9D.
[GH] Accepted and done.Your use of hyphen in "multiparty-unaware" made=20
me understand that that term also should be hyphenated all through the=20
document. Done.

[PEY] Yes, I failed to include that hyphenation in the general nits =
although I marked all of them in my review copy.

> Page 29, =E2=80=9CBOM=E2=80=9D, 1st sentence: insert =
=E2=80=9Cit=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9CSHALL=E2=80=9D.

[GH] Accepted, but part of the first statement is separated out to a=20
sentence of its own: "  It SHALL be deleted from incoming streams."

[PEY] That's fine. I didn't fuss so much over sentence structure for the =
definitions.

> Page 32, section 6.1, title: drop the =E2=80=9Ce.g.=E2=80=9D in the =
subsection title.
[GH] Not done. Many countries have their own terms for textphones. In=20
USA and a few other countries (Canada, Australia) they are called TTY.=20
That term is not understood in other countries. "Textphone" may not be=20
understood in USA. Therefore I prefer having both the general term and=20
the (e.g., TTYs) in the heading.

[PEY] With that understanding, I'm fine leaving an examples or two in =
the body text. As a matter of style, I don't think examples should =
appear in the title, but I won't argue the point. It's only style. :-)

> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, parenthetical: perhaps you want =
=E2=80=9Ci.e.,=E2=80=9D
> instead of =E2=80=9Ce.g.=E2=80=9D here given that further down you put =
=E2=80=9CTTYS=E2=80=9D in another
> parenthetical as though it weren=E2=80=99t just an example but the =
only exemplar of
> this type of device under discussion.

[GH] No. I did not mean "i.e.,". "TTY" is just one example with specific =

technology.

So, I suggest to keep this sentence:    "One case that may occur is a=20
gateway to PSTN for communication with textphones (e.g., TTYs)."  While=20
in the other places where (TTY) was mentioned it is deleted with its=20
parenthesis.

[PEY] Okay.

> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: delete =
=E2=80=9Cmake=E2=80=9D. Change
> =E2=80=9Cadaptions=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cadapt=E2=80=9D. Delete =
=E2=80=9Cfor=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cthe functional=E2=80=9D. Delete =
=E2=80=9C(TTY)=E2=80=9D.

[GH] I also needed to insert "to" before "adapt" to make:

"This solution makes it possible to adapt
    to the functional limitations of the textphone."

[PEY] I'm fine with the that sentence.

Thanks again for the thorough review. I have next version ready, also=20
including changed caused by security comments and discussed in other =
mail.

Do you want me to submit the new version.

[PEY] If you have no further changes pending from other reviews, it =
probably makes sense to submit a new version with everything =
incorporated. I admit that I didn't thoroughly check the diffs between =
-14 and -16 to see if any of my proposed changes clashed.


Regards

Gunnar

--=20
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Peter,

I have made the extra few adjustments you proposed.

For the use of "disappeared", I agree that it is an unusual term in this 
context.

I checked RFC 4575, and there it is said that users "depart" or 
"disconnect" from a conference. "Disconnect" feels most familiar, so I 
propose to change the sentence to:

"When a participant on the RTP side is disconnected from the multiparty 
session, the corresponding T.140 data channel(s) SHOULD be closed."

Thanks,

Gunnar

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Den 2021-05-07 kl. 20:55, skrev Peter Yee:
> Thanks for the quick response, Gunnar. I've prefaced my replies below with [PEY].
>
> 		-Peter
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gunnar Hellström [mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se]
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> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
>
> Thank you for the thorough review. Please see comments inline.
>
> I will split the answers, and start here with answers and change
> proposals for the minor issues:
>
> Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
>> Reviewer: Peter Yee
>> Review result: Ready with Issues
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>>
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>>
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
>> Reviewer: Peter Yee
>> Review Date: 2021-05-05
>> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>>
>> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time text
>> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. It has
>> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready with
>> issues]
>>
>> Major issues: None
>>
>> Minor issues:
>>
>> Page 7, 1st block, 13th sentence: what constitutes a “reasonable effort”? It
>> might be best to drop this sentence.
> [GH] This reason is important for the desicion on technology selection.
>
> I suggest a change from:
>
> "For best deployment opportunity, it should be possible to upgrade
> existing endpoint solutions to be multi-party aware with a reasonable
> effort."
>
> to
>
> "For best deployment opportunity, it should be feasible to upgrade
> existing endpoint solutions to become multiparty-aware."
>
> [PEY] I'm fine with that.
>
>> Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence, “300 ms”: would it make sense to append
>> “period” or “timeout” after this value?
> [GH] I suggest to change from "every 300 ms." to "with 300 ms intervals."
>
> [PEY] Works for me.
>
>> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: in regards to “only part”,
>> how is this calculated?
> [GH] I suggest to change from "If the "CPS" value is reached, longer
> transmission intervals SHALL be applied and only part of the text queued
> for transmission sent at end of each transmission interval, until the
> transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value again."
>
> to
>
> "If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be
> applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission sent at end
> of each transmission interval that can be allowed without exceeding the
> "CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value
> again. Division of text for partial transmission MUST then be made at
> T140block borders. "
>
> [PEY] That's clearer. I'd insert "the" before "end".
>
>> Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: The placing of all
>> available redundant levels in the packet is presumably subject to a maximum
>> packet size or the “CPS” limit, if there are obnoxious levels of redundancy
>> specified?
> [GH] Thanks, a good observation. It is already covered in section 3.10,
> but it could be more emphasized there. In 3.12 we are only dealing with
> the redundancy, which must be possible to send and is not included in
> the "CPS" value.
>
> I suggest that the following part of 3.10 is improved from:
>
> "Redundant text SHALL also be included.  See Section 3.12"
>
> to;
> "Redundant text SHALL also be included, and the assessment of how much
> new text can be included within the maximum packet size MUST take into
> account that the redundancy has priority to be transmitted in its
> entirety.  See Section 3.12."
>
> [PEY] That works.
>
>> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: “SHALL prefer” seems odd.
>> It doesn’t say that the marking will actually be done. It’s just preferred. If
>> you’re not going to require the marking in that sentence, then perhaps change
>> “SHALL” to “SHOULD”.
> [GH] Agreed. Done as proposed.
>> Page 19, section 3.20, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: I don’t find the “something
>> specific” particularly enlightening. Like what? An identifier for the method?
> [GH] Proposed to be changed from:
>
> " In that case, the
>      SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method, and
>      an answer acknowledging the use of that method would accept it by
>      something specific included in the SDP."
>
> to:
>
> "In that case, the
>      SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method,
> e.g. an SDP attribute or another media format. An answer selecting the
> use of that method would accept it by
>      a corresponding acknowledgement included in the SDP."
>
> [PEY] That helps. With a comma after the "e.g.". ;-)
>
>> Page 27, section 4.2.2, 4th paragraph: can you elaborate on these “Integrity
>> considerations”? Otherwise, it’s difficult to comply with the SHALL in any
>> meaningful way.
> [GH] The sentence was inserted after discussions with emergency service
> providers, who had an example that it would be valuable to have a
> detailed personalized label of an emergency service agent shown to other
> agents while a less personal label should be used when sent to the
> calling users in emergency.
>
> The security aspects on the label are quite similar to the security
> aspects on the <display-text> elements specified in RFC 4575. Its
> security aspects are specified in
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4575#section-8
>
> You are right that that example contains mainly SHOULD and RECOMMENDED
> and no SHALL.
>
> I suggest changing:
>
> "Integrity considerations SHALL be taken when composing the label."
>
> to:
>
> "Information available to the mixer for composing the label may contain
> sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in sessions
> not securely authenticated and protected. Integrity considerations
> regarding how much personal information is included in the label SHOULD
> therefore be taken when composing the label."
>
> [PEY] That's much clearer.
>
>> Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: any reason for the change from “T.140” in
>> the previous and following paragraphs to “t140” in this one?
> [GH] No, they should be "T.140 data channels" for all cases in that
> paragraph.
> I have changed.
>> Page 33, 6th paragraph: how is disappearance determined?
> [GH]The disappearance may be signaled by the SIP conference system RFC
> 4353, RFC 4575 etc. as a conference notification if that system is used,
> or simply by removal of the text media in an RTP session modification.
> There may also be a malfunction detected by keep-alive transactions not
> being maintained. I suggest to not detail how it disappears.
>
> [PEY] Okay by me if that's well understood in this ecosystem. The verb disappearance just made it sound somewhat mysterious as opposed to something that can be signaled.
>> Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence before creating a new sentence
>> (see nits, below): I’m having troubles tying the adjective “secure” to each of
>> the nouns in the sentence. It works for “signaling” and perhaps “media”, but
>> for “authentication”, one sort of assumes that authentication mechanism is
>> secure and helping to provide the security. Perhaps you could reword that
>> sentence?
> [GH] I propose to change the sentence from:
>
> "Counteractions should be to require
>      secure signaling, media and authentication, and to provide higher
>      level conference functions e.g. for blocking and expelling
>      participants."
>
> to:
>
> "Counteractions should be to require authentication, secure session
> signaling and secure media. Higher level conference functions should
> also be used e.g., for blocking and expelling participants who caused
> security concerns."
>
> [PEY] Yes, I like that. Along with my usual nit about an Oxford comma after "signaling". And a hyphen between "Higher" and "layer". Sorry, that's just how my eyes/brain work. ;-)
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gunnar Hellstrom
>
-- 
Gunnar Hellström
GHAccess
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se


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    <p>Peter, <br>
    </p>
    <p>I have made the extra few adjustments you proposed.</p>
    <p>For the use of "disappeared", I agree that it is an unusual term
      in this context. <br>
    </p>
    <p>I checked RFC 4575, and there it is said that users "depart" or
      "disconnect" from a conference. "Disconnect" feels most familiar,
      so I propose to change the sentence to:<br>
      <br>
      "When a participant on the RTP side is disconnected from the
      multiparty session, the corresponding T.140 data channel(s) SHOULD
      be closed."</p>
    <p>Thanks,</p>
    <p>Gunnar</p>
    <pre>-- </pre>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-07 kl. 20:55, skrev Peter
      Yee:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:008501d74372$9d96d6c0$d8c48440$@akayla.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Thanks for the quick response, Gunnar. I've prefaced my replies below with [PEY].

		-Peter

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Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14

Thank you for the thorough review. Please see comments inline.

I will split the answers, and start here with answers and change 
proposals for the minor issues:

Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Issues

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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For more information, please see the FAQ at

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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2021-05-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time text
mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. It has
some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready with
issues]

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Page 7, 1st block, 13th sentence: what constitutes a “reasonable effort”? It
might be best to drop this sentence.
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] This reason is important for the desicion on technology selection.

I suggest a change from:

"For best deployment opportunity, it should be possible to upgrade 
existing endpoint solutions to be multi-party aware with a reasonable 
effort."

to

"For best deployment opportunity, it should be feasible to upgrade 
existing endpoint solutions to become multiparty-aware."

[PEY] I'm fine with that.

</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence, “300 ms”: would it make sense to append
“period” or “timeout” after this value?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] I suggest to change from "every 300 ms." to "with 300 ms intervals."

[PEY] Works for me.

</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: in regards to “only part”,
how is this calculated?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] I suggest to change from "If the "CPS" value is reached, longer 
transmission intervals SHALL be applied and only part of the text queued 
for transmission sent at end of each transmission interval, until the 
transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value again."

to

"If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be 
applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission sent at end 
of each transmission interval that can be allowed without exceeding the 
"CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value 
again. Division of text for partial transmission MUST then be made at 
T140block borders. "

[PEY] That's clearer. I'd insert "the" before "end".

</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: The placing of all
available redundant levels in the packet is presumably subject to a maximum
packet size or the “CPS” limit, if there are obnoxious levels of redundancy
specified?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] Thanks, a good observation. It is already covered in section 3.10, 
but it could be more emphasized there. In 3.12 we are only dealing with 
the redundancy, which must be possible to send and is not included in 
the "CPS" value.

I suggest that the following part of 3.10 is improved from:

"Redundant text SHALL also be included.  See Section 3.12"

to;
"Redundant text SHALL also be included, and the assessment of how much 
new text can be included within the maximum packet size MUST take into 
account that the redundancy has priority to be transmitted in its 
entirety.  See Section 3.12."

[PEY] That works.

</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: “SHALL prefer” seems odd.
It doesn’t say that the marking will actually be done. It’s just preferred. If
you’re not going to require the marking in that sentence, then perhaps change
“SHALL” to “SHOULD”.
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">[GH] Agreed. Done as proposed.
</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 19, section 3.20, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: I don’t find the “something
specific” particularly enlightening. Like what? An identifier for the method?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] Proposed to be changed from:

" In that case, the
    SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method, and
    an answer acknowledging the use of that method would accept it by
    something specific included in the SDP."

to:

"In that case, the
    SDP of the offer will include something specific for that method, 
e.g. an SDP attribute or another media format. An answer selecting the 
use of that method would accept it by
    a corresponding acknowledgement included in the SDP."

[PEY] That helps. With a comma after the "e.g.". ;-)

</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 27, section 4.2.2, 4th paragraph: can you elaborate on these “Integrity
considerations”? Otherwise, it’s difficult to comply with the SHALL in any
meaningful way.
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] The sentence was inserted after discussions with emergency service 
providers, who had an example that it would be valuable to have a 
detailed personalized label of an emergency service agent shown to other 
agents while a less personal label should be used when sent to the 
calling users in emergency.

The security aspects on the label are quite similar to the security 
aspects on the &lt;display-text&gt; elements specified in RFC 4575. Its 
security aspects are specified in 
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4575#section-8">https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4575#section-8</a>

You are right that that example contains mainly SHOULD and RECOMMENDED 
and no SHALL.

I suggest changing:

"Integrity considerations SHALL be taken when composing the label."

to:

"Information available to the mixer for composing the label may contain 
sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in sessions 
not securely authenticated and protected. Integrity considerations 
regarding how much personal information is included in the label SHOULD 
therefore be taken when composing the label."

[PEY] That's much clearer.

</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: any reason for the change from “T.140” in
the previous and following paragraphs to “t140” in this one?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">[GH] No, they should be "T.140 data channels" for all cases in that 
paragraph.
I have changed.
</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 33, 6th paragraph: how is disappearance determined?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">[GH]The disappearance may be signaled by the SIP conference system RFC 
4353, RFC 4575 etc. as a conference notification if that system is used, 
or simply by removal of the text media in an RTP session modification. 
There may also be a malfunction detected by keep-alive transactions not 
being maintained. I suggest to not detail how it disappears.

[PEY] Okay by me if that's well understood in this ecosystem. The verb disappearance just made it sound somewhat mysterious as opposed to something that can be signaled.
</pre>
      <blockquote type="cite">
        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence before creating a new sentence
(see nits, below): I’m having troubles tying the adjective “secure” to each of
the nouns in the sentence. It works for “signaling” and perhaps “media”, but
for “authentication”, one sort of assumes that authentication mechanism is
secure and helping to provide the security. Perhaps you could reword that
sentence?
</pre>
      </blockquote>
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
[GH] I propose to change the sentence from:

"Counteractions should be to require
    secure signaling, media and authentication, and to provide higher
    level conference functions e.g. for blocking and expelling
    participants."

to:

"Counteractions should be to require authentication, secure session 
signaling and secure media. Higher level conference functions should 
also be used e.g., for blocking and expelling participants who caused 
security concerns."

[PEY] Yes, I like that. Along with my usual nit about an Oxford comma after "signaling". And a hyphen between "Higher" and "layer". Sorry, that's just how my eyes/brain work. ;-)


Thanks,

Gunnar Hellstrom

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Abstract:
   This document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text
   mixing suitable for a centralized conference model that enables
   source identification and rapidly interleaved transmission of text
   from different sources.  The intended use is for real-time text
   mixers and participant endpoints capable of providing an efficient
   presentation or other treatment of a multiparty real-time text
   session.  The specified mechanism builds on the standard use of the
   CSRC list in the RTP packet for source identification.  The method
   makes use of the same "text/t140" and "text/red" formats as for two-
   party sessions.

   Solutions using multiple RTP streams in the same RTP session are
   briefly mentioned, as they could have some benefits over the RTP-
   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

   A capability exchange is specified so that it can be verified that a
   mixer and a participant can handle the multiparty-coded real-time
   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an SDP media attribute "rtt-mixer".

   The document updates RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation".

   A specification of how a mixer can format text for the case when the
   endpoint is not multiparty-aware is also provided.


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Den 2021-05-07 kl. 21:14, skrev Peter Yee:
> Responses prefixed with [PEY] below.
>
> 		Kind regards,
> 		-Peter
>
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> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
>
> Continuing with comments and edit proposals from "Nits/editorial
> comments:" below.
>
> Den 2021-05-06 kl. 05:41, skrev Peter Yee via Datatracker:
>> Reviewer: Peter Yee
>> Review result: Ready with Issues
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
>> Reviewer: Peter Yee
>> Review Date: 2021-05-05
>> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time text
>> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. It has
>> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready with
>> issues]
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> Change “multiparty capable” to “multiparty-capable” throughout the document.
> [GH] I suggest to change to "multiparty-aware" instead for consistency.
>
> [PEY] Fine by me.
>
>> Page 6, section 1.1, 2nd paragraph: insert “are” before “as”.
> [GH] Recently changed to just "are defined in" by proposal in another
> review. I suggest to keep that.
>
> [PEY] Agreed.
>
>> Page 6, “multiparty-unaware”: change “stands for” to “describes”.
> [GH] Accepted and done.Your use of hyphen in "multiparty-unaware" made
> me understand that that term also should be hyphenated all through the
> document. Done.
>
> [PEY] Yes, I failed to include that hyphenation in the general nits although I marked all of them in my review copy.
>
>> Page 29, “BOM”, 1st sentence: insert “it” before “SHALL”.
> [GH] Accepted, but part of the first statement is separated out to a
> sentence of its own: "  It SHALL be deleted from incoming streams."
>
> [PEY] That's fine. I didn't fuss so much over sentence structure for the definitions.
>
>> Page 32, section 6.1, title: drop the “e.g.” in the subsection title.
> [GH] Not done. Many countries have their own terms for textphones. In
> USA and a few other countries (Canada, Australia) they are called TTY.
> That term is not understood in other countries. "Textphone" may not be
> understood in USA. Therefore I prefer having both the general term and
> the (e.g., TTYs) in the heading.
>
> [PEY] With that understanding, I'm fine leaving an examples or two in the body text. As a matter of style, I don't think examples should appear in the title, but I won't argue the point. It's only style. :-)
>
>> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, parenthetical: perhaps you want “i.e.,”
>> instead of “e.g.” here given that further down you put “TTYS” in another
>> parenthetical as though it weren’t just an example but the only exemplar of
>> this type of device under discussion.
> [GH] No. I did not mean "i.e.,". "TTY" is just one example with specific
> technology.
>
> So, I suggest to keep this sentence:    "One case that may occur is a
> gateway to PSTN for communication with textphones (e.g., TTYs)."  While
> in the other places where (TTY) was mentioned it is deleted with its
> parenthesis.
>
> [PEY] Okay.
>
>> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: delete “make”. Change
>> “adaptions” to “adapt”. Delete “for” before “the functional”. Delete “(TTY)”.
> [GH] I also needed to insert "to" before "adapt" to make:
>
> "This solution makes it possible to adapt
>      to the functional limitations of the textphone."
>
> [PEY] I'm fine with the that sentence.
>
> Thanks again for the thorough review. I have next version ready, also
> including changed caused by security comments and discussed in other mail.
>
> Do you want me to submit the new version.
>
> [PEY] If you have no further changes pending from other reviews, it probably makes sense to submit a new version with everything incorporated. I admit that I didn't thoroughly check the diffs between -14 and -16 to see if any of my proposed changes clashed.
>
>
> Regards
>
> Gunnar
>
-- 
Gunnar Hellström
GHAccess
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se


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The IESG has received a request from the Audio/Video Transport Core
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  <draft-ietf-payload-vp9-13.txt> as Proposed Standard

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Abstract


   This specification describes an RTP payload format for the VP9 video
   codec.  The payload format has wide applicability, as it supports
   applications from low bit-rate peer-to-peer usage, to high bit-rate
   video conferences.  It includes provisions for temporal and spatial
   scalability.




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Peter, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot =
for this document.

Lars

On 2021-5-6, at 6:41, Peter Yee via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> =
wrote:
>=20
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>=20
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>=20
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>=20
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>=20
> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: 2021-05-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>=20
> Summary: This draft specifies updates to RFC 4103 to allow real-time =
text
> mixing for both multiparty-aware and multiparty-unaware participants. =
It has
> some minor issues that should be addressed before publication. [Ready =
with
> issues]
>=20
> Major issues: None
>=20
> Minor issues:
>=20
> Page 7, 1st block, 13th sentence: what constitutes a =E2=80=9Creasonable=
 effort=E2=80=9D? It
> might be best to drop this sentence.
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> Page 7, 2nd block, 2nd sentence, =E2=80=9C300 ms=E2=80=9D: would it =
make sense to append
> =E2=80=9Cperiod=E2=80=9D or =E2=80=9Ctimeout=E2=80=9D after this =
value?
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> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: in regards to =
=E2=80=9Conly part=E2=80=9D,
> how is this calculated?
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> Page 15, section 3.12, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: The placing of all
> available redundant levels in the packet is presumably subject to a =
maximum
> packet size or the =E2=80=9CCPS=E2=80=9D limit, if there are obnoxious =
levels of redundancy
> specified?
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> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: =E2=80=9CSHALL =
prefer=E2=80=9D seems odd.
> It doesn=E2=80=99t say that the marking will actually be done. It=E2=80=99=
s just preferred. If
> you=E2=80=99re not going to require the marking in that sentence, then =
perhaps change
> =E2=80=9CSHALL=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9CSHOULD=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 19, section 3.20, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: I don=E2=80=99t =
find the =E2=80=9Csomething
> specific=E2=80=9D particularly enlightening. Like what? An identifier =
for the method?
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> Page 27, section 4.2.2, 4th paragraph: can you elaborate on these =
=E2=80=9CIntegrity
> considerations=E2=80=9D? Otherwise, it=E2=80=99s difficult to comply =
with the SHALL in any
> meaningful way.
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> Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: any reason for the change from =
=E2=80=9CT.140=E2=80=9D in
> the previous and following paragraphs to =E2=80=9Ct140=E2=80=9D in =
this one?
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> Page 33, 6th paragraph: how is disappearance determined?
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> Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence before creating a new =
sentence
> (see nits, below): I=E2=80=99m having troubles tying the adjective =
=E2=80=9Csecure=E2=80=9D to each of
> the nouns in the sentence. It works for =E2=80=9Csignaling=E2=80=9D =
and perhaps =E2=80=9Cmedia=E2=80=9D, but
> for =E2=80=9Cauthentication=E2=80=9D, one sort of assumes that =
authentication mechanism is
> secure and helping to provide the security. Perhaps you could reword =
that
> sentence?
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> General:
> Change =E2=80=9Cmulti-party=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cmultiparty=E2=80=9D =
throughout the document. While we are a
> bit inconsistent about that particular hyphenation within the IETF, =
all major
> dictionaries I sampled spell this as a single, non-hyphenated word.
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> Append a comma after each instance of =E2=80=9Ce.g.=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Change =E2=80=9Cmultiparty aware=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cmultiparty-aware=E2=
=80=9D throughout the document except
> in two cases where you =E2=80=9Cmultiparty awareness=E2=80=9D, which =
should be left alone.
> These are located in section 4.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence and =
section 6.1,
> 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence.
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> Change =E2=80=9Cfall-back=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cfallback=E2=80=9D in a =
few places in the document. Both uses are
> found in the document.
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> Change =E2=80=9CRTP-mixer based=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9CRTP-mixer-based=E2=80=
=9D throughout the document.
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> Change =E2=80=9Cmultiparty capable=E2=80=9D to =
=E2=80=9Cmultiparty-capable=E2=80=9D throughout the document.
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> Delete periods at the end of section/subsection titles, e.g., section =
6.2.
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> Specific:
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> Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: I=E2=80=99d rewrite it in the active =
voice as: =E2=80=9CThis
> document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text mixing =
suitable for
> a centralized conference model that enables source identification and =
rapidly
> interleaved transmission of text from different sources.=E2=80=9D
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> =E2=80=9Cmultiparty=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9Ccoded=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 5, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: I think I would change =E2=80=9Cin=E2=
=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cat=E2=80=9D.
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Change =E2=80=9Cway=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cways=E2=80=9D.
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before =E2=80=9Cas=E2=80=9D.
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based=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cweb-based=E2=80=9D. Insert
> =E2=80=9Creal-time=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Ccommunication=E2=80=9D.
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security=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cis a DTLS
> extension for use with SRTP/SRTCP=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cspecified=E2=80=
=9D.
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for=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cdescribes=E2=80=9D. Append a
> comma after =E2=80=9Creal-time=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cseparated=E2=80=9D=
. Append a comma after =E2=80=9Csource=E2=80=9D.
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for=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cdescribes=E2=80=9D.
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e.g., at
> the end of =E2=80=9CMultiple RTP streams, one per participant.=E2=80=9D
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=E2=80=9Cparticipant=E2=80=9D. Delete
> the following =E2=80=9Cand=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cwith=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9Cno=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 7, 1st block, 14th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cimplementation=E2=80=9D=
 to =E2=80=9Cimplementations=E2=80=9D
> and delete =E2=80=9Ctechnologies=E2=80=9D unless you really want the =
problem is in regards to
> technologies and not particular implementations.
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> Page 7, 1st block 15th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cmade=E2=80=9D to =
=E2=80=9Cled to=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cbeing=E2=80=9D
> before =E2=80=9Conly=E2=80=9D.
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=E2=80=9Cshorter=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D
> before source=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =
=E2=80=9CCSRC=E2=80=9D. Append field after =E2=80=9CCSRC=E2=80=9D.
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quoted =E2=80=9Ctext/t140=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 7, 2nd block, 3rd sentence: delete the whole sentence.
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> Page 7, 2nd block, 6th sentence: move =E2=80=9Cwith=E2=80=9D before =
=E2=80=9Creceivers=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Chaving
> the=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cdefault=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 8, 1st partial block, 2nd full sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cit=E2=80=9D=
 before =E2=80=9Ccorresponds=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 8, 1st full block, 6th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cbe varying=E2=80=9D=
 to =E2=80=9Cvary=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 8, 1st full block, 9th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cwhile=E2=80=9D =
to =E2=80=9CWhen=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 9, section 1.3, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: change =
=E2=80=9Ccalltaker=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Ccall
> taker=E2=80=9D. Change =E2=80=9Cobserving=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cto =
observe=E2=80=9D.
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=E2=80=9CCSRC-list=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 12, section 3.1, 4th paragraph: change =E2=80=9C=46rom other =
aspects=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9CIn other
> regards=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 13, section 3.4, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert a hyphen =
between =E2=80=9C10=E2=80=9D
> and =E2=80=9Csecond=E2=80=9D.
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> Page 13, section 3.4, 1st paragraph, 4th sentence: delete =E2=80=9Ca=E2=80=
=9D before =E2=80=9Cgood=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert =E2=80=9CSHALL=
 be=E2=80=9D before
> =E2=80=9Csent=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cend=
=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 13, section 3.4, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: Append a period at =
the end
> of the sentence.
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> Page 13, section 3.4, 3rd paragraph: change =E2=80=9Cin=E2=80=9D to =
=E2=80=9Cas=E2=80=9D.
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and =E2=80=9Cproduced=E2=80=9D. Append
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=E2=80=9CT140blocks=E2=80=9D.
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sentence:
> insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Ctime=E2=80=9D.
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=E2=80=9Cswitch=E2=80=9D. Change
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=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cnext=E2=80=9D.
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=E2=80=9Cnumber=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Clevel=E2=80=9D.
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extraneous space
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=E2=80=9Cself-sourced=E2=80=9D
> before =E2=80=9Cdata=E2=80=9D. Delete =E2=80=9Cthat it is source of =
itself=E2=80=9D.
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after
> =E2=80=9CCNAME=E2=80=9D.
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e receiver
> SHALL monitor=E2=80=9D. Change =E2=80=9CThe=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=
=9D. Delete =E2=80=9CSHALL be monitored=E2=80=9D.
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> =E2=80=9Ccase=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cthe receiver SHALL create=E2=80=9D=
 before =E2=80=9Ca t140block=E2=80=9D. Delete =E2=80=9CSHALL
> be created=E2=80=9D. I=E2=80=99m suggesting but not certain that you =
might want to change =E2=80=9Cand
> assigned=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cassociated with=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 17, section 3.17.2, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: change =E2=80=9Cif=
=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cwhether=E2=80=9D
> if you are amenable to that wording.
>=20
> Page 18, 2nd paragraph: delete an extraneous blank line before this =
paragraph.
>=20
> Page 18, section 3.18, 1st sentence: insert a hyphen between =E2=80=9C10=
=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9Csecond=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 19, section 3.19, 1st sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9Csession=E2=80=9D. Insert
> =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cmedia=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 19, section 3.19, 2nd sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9Cmedia=E2=80=9D. Consider
> deleting =E2=80=9Csecurity by=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 19, section 3.19, 5th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cis=E2=80=9D to =
=E2=80=9Care=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 20, section 3.21, 4th sentence: append a period after =E2=80=9Cetc=E2=
=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 21, 1st partial paragraph, 1st full sentence: insert =E2=80=9Ca=E2=80=
=9D before =E2=80=9Cdropped=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 21, 1st full paragraph, 1st sentence: delete an extraneous space =
after
> =E2=80=9C(=E2=80=9C. Where the word =E2=80=9Carea=E2=80=9D occurs, =
would that make more sense as =E2=80=9Cbuffer=E2=80=9D or
> =E2=80=9Cqueue=E2=80=9D?
>=20
> Page 21, 1st full paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cinitial=E2=80=
=9D before the first
> =E2=80=9Ctext=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 22, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change =E2=80=9Cin=E2=80=9D to =
=E2=80=9Cdue to=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 22, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cpackets=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9C103=E2=80=9D. Delete the
> comma after =E2=80=9C103=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 22, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: there appears to be an adverb =
missing
> before =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D. Perhaps =E2=80=9Cduring=E2=80=9D?
>=20
> Page 22, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change =E2=80=9C21040=E2=80=9D =
to =E2=80=9C21060=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 22, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: change =E2=80=9Cneeds=E2=80=9D =
to =E2=80=9Cneed=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 22, 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: change =E2=80=9C21150=E2=80=9D =
to =E2=80=9C21160=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 23, section 4, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete =E2=80=9Cand=E2=80=
=9D.
>=20
> Page 23, section 4, 3rd paragraph: consider changing =E2=80=9Cof=E2=80=9D=
 before =E2=80=9Cthe text=E2=80=9D to
> =E2=80=9Cconveyed in=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 24, 1st full paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert =E2=80=9Ca=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9Creplacement=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 24, 1st full paragraph, 4th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cjust=E2=80=9D=
 to =E2=80=9Cthe same=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 26, section 4.2, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert a hyphen =
between
> =E2=80=9Cbest=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9Ceffort=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma =
after
> =E2=80=9Csimulated=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 4th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cis =
depending=E2=80=9D to
> =E2=80=9Cdepends=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 26, section 4.2, 4th paragraph, 5th sentence: change =E2=80=9Cswitc=
h=E2=80=9D to
> =E2=80=9Cswitching=E2=80=9D. Append a comma after =E2=80=9Ccan=E2=80=9D.=
 Append a comma after =E2=80=9Cexample=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 26, section 4.2.1, 3rd sentence: append a comma after =
=E2=80=9Ckeep-alive=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 27, 5th bullet point: insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =
=E2=80=9Cnext=E2=80=9D. Change =E2=80=9Cif even=E2=80=9D to
> =E2=80=9Ceven if=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Ca=E2=80=9D between =
=E2=80=9Cfor=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9Cword delimiter=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, 1st paragraph: insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9CUTF-8=E2=80=9D. Change
> =E2=80=9Ctransform=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Ctransformation=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, =E2=80=9CBEL=E2=80=9D: change the comma after =
=E2=80=9Csession=E2=80=9D to a period.
> Capitalize =E2=80=9Cprovides=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, =E2=80=9CNEW LINE=E2=80=9D, 3rd sentence: =
insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cdisplay=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, =E2=80=9CCR LF=E2=80=9D, 1st sentence: delete =
the comma after
> =E2=80=9Csupported=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, =E2=80=9CCR LF=E2=80=9D, 3rd sentence: insert =
=E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cdisplay=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, =E2=80=9CINT ESC=E2=80=9D, 1st sentence: =
insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cmode=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 28, section 4.2.4, =E2=80=9CSGR=E2=80=9D, 2nd sentence: insert =
=E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Crendition=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 29, 1st partial sentence: insert a hyphen between =E2=80=9C256=E2=80=
=9D and =E2=80=9Cbytes=E2=80=9D. Then
> change =E2=80=9Cbytes=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cbyte=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 29, =E2=80=9CBOM=E2=80=9D, 1st sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cit=E2=80=9D=
 before =E2=80=9CSHALL=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 29, =E2=80=9CMissing text mark=E2=80=9D, 1st sentence: change the =
comma after =E2=80=9Capostrophe
> =E2=80=98=E2=80=9D to a period. Insert =E2=80=9CIt=E2=80=9D before =
=E2=80=9Cmarks=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =
=E2=80=9Cplace=E2=80=9D. Insert
> =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cstream=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 29, =E2=80=9CSGR=E2=80=9D, 1st sentence: delete the comma after =
=E2=80=9C(SGR)=E2=80=9D. Insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D
> before =E2=80=9Cstatus=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 29, =E2=80=9CSGR=E2=80=9D, 2nd sentence: change =E2=80=9Coriginated=
=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Coriginating=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 29, BS, last sentence: change =E2=80=9Cnot=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cbe=E2=
=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 32, section 6.1, title: drop the =E2=80=9Ce.g.=E2=80=9D in the =
subsection title.
>=20
> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, parenthetical: perhaps you want =
=E2=80=9Ci.e.,=E2=80=9D
> instead of =E2=80=9Ce.g.=E2=80=9D here given that further down you put =
=E2=80=9CTTYS=E2=80=9D in another
> parenthetical as though it weren=E2=80=99t just an example but the =
only exemplar of
> this type of device under discussion.
>=20
> Page 32, section 6.1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: delete =E2=80=9Cmake=
=E2=80=9D. Change
> =E2=80=9Cadaptions=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9Cadapt=E2=80=9D. Delete =
=E2=80=9Cfor=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Cthe functional=E2=80=9D. Delete =
=E2=80=9C(TTY)=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 32, section 6.1, 3rd paragraph: delete =E2=80=9C(TTYs)=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 33, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert =E2=80=9Ca=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9Ctwo-way=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 33, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D =
before =E2=80=9CNAME=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 33, section 7: insert a hyphen between =E2=80=9Cmultiparty=E2=80=9D=
 and =E2=80=9Cmixing=E2=80=9D in this
> one instance of that term. Other uses of the term in the document =
should not be
> hyphenated.
>=20
> Page 34, section 8, 1st paragraph: I like the sound of the sentence =
better if
> you swap =E2=80=9Cvalid=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9Calso=E2=80=9D. That=E2=80=99=
s just me. =EF=81=8A
>=20
> Page 34, section 8, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert a space =
between
> =E2=80=9Csecond=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9C(=E2=80=9CCPS=E2=80=9D)=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 34, section 8, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: insert =E2=80=9Can=E2=80=
=9D before =E2=80=9CRTP=E2=80=9D.
> Regarding =E2=80=9Cexcess=E2=80=9D: in excess of what?
>=20
> Page 35, section 11, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after =
=E2=80=9Cpack=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 35, section 11, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after =
=E2=80=9CCNAME=E2=80=9D.
>=20
> Page 35, section 11, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: I suggest inserting
> =E2=80=9Cemitting=E2=80=9D before =E2=80=9Ca continuous=E2=80=9D. =
Change the comma after =E2=80=9Cflow of text=E2=80=9D to a
> period. Delete the following =E2=80=9Cor=E2=80=9D. Change the rest of =
that sentence to read
> something like: =E2=80=9CThey may also send text that appears to =
originate from other
> participants.=E2=80=9D I rewrote that because the malicious =
participants don=E2=80=99t
> themselves masquerade as text, although that might be a mildly amusing
> Halloween costume.
>=20
> Page 35, section 11, 4th paragraph: delete one of =E2=80=9Csection=E2=80=
=9D or =E2=80=9CSection=E2=80=9D. You
> capitalize that term interchangeably, so it=E2=80=99s your choice.
>=20
> Page 35, section 12.1 (when discussing -14 only): change =
=E2=80=9CCucherawy=E2=80=9D to
> =E2=80=9CKucherawy=E2=80=9D unless we=E2=80=99re talking about someone =
else. Yeah, I know these will
> all be deleted upon publication, but it caught my eye. I have not =
reviewed the
> remainder of the change history entries.
>=20
>=20
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- It is not completely clear to me what the actions in the case of congestion
are. RFC 4103 RECOMMENDS four steps, the first is going from 300 to 500ms. So
what is the hiearchy here. My guess is:

Step 1. Senders MUST go from 300ms to 2 seconds
Step 2. Senders SHOULD (further?) limit the number of characters sent
Step 3. Senders SHOULD go from 2 seconds to 5 seconds
Step 4. Senders SHOULD exclude nodes from the session

Is this correct?

- Assuming it is correct, I don't understand the motivation behind the
congestion considerations in Section 8.

The first and third paragraphs make perfect sense to me. But if the total
traffic to a receiver, regardless of the number of senders, remains limited to
1 packet / 300ms, I don't see why you would change the RFC 4103 guidance of
500ms up to 2 seconds. This isn't a DISCUSS because you're welcome to be more
conservative, but I would like to understand your reasoning.

No need to reply to the comments below:

- In (3.16) and (4.2.2), you mention various privacy-sensitive fields and then
say "Integrity SHALL be considered..." I think you mean confidentiality?
Integrity means the data hasn't been altered by an attacker.

- It would be helpful to clarify in this draft that the CPS limit applies only
to new, not redundant, text, assuming that is in fact the case.




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Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

The document describes an RTP payload format for the VP9 video codec.  The
security consideration section lists a number of RTP documents that deal with
the RTP protocol and its security. The section also highlights that the
application is the one that is responsible for securing the media.

The security consideration section also discusses the potential impact of a
corrupted RTP payload on the receiver and indicates that this is unlikely to
pose a denial of service threat. This seems reasonable to me.




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Hi,

I have performed the SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegx=
s-13.

Regards,

Christer

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Q.1

I suggest converting section 7.2 to a separate main section, and change the=
 name to "SDP Offer/Answer Considerations". I don't think we need to consid=
er other SDP usage than Offer/Answer.


Q.2. Regarding section 7.2.1.:


    "A Session Description Protocol (SDP) [RFC8866] media description SHALL=
 be created for each RTP stream."

This sentence is not needed.


     "The information carried in the media type specification of
      Section 7.1 has a specific mapping to the SDP fields, used to
      describe RTP sessions.  This information is redundant with the
      information found in the payload data (namely, in the JPEG XS header
      segment) and SHALL be consistent with it."

In SDP offer/answer, you typically indicate what you are willing to RECEIVE=
. In this case it seems like you indicate what you are going to SEND. Is th=
ere a reason for that? I guess that impacts Section 7.2.3 too.


Q.3. Regarding Section 7.2.3.:

     "All parameters must be supported by both sides,"

In Section 7.2.1 you say that the receiver shall ignore unrecognized parame=
ters. I ASSUME that you mean that the all the parameter defined in Section =
7.2.1.

      "i.e. the answerer SHALL either maintain all parameters or remove the=
 media format (payload
       type) completely if one or more of the parameter values are not
       supported."

I don't understand what this mean. According to Section 7.2.1, some of the =
parameters are OPTIONAL. Is the answerer only allowed to reply with paramet=
ers that were present in the offer?

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I have performed the SDP direct=
orate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Christer<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">----<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Q.1<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I suggest converting section 7.=
2 to a separate main section, and change the name to &quot;SDP Offer/Answer=
 Considerations&quot;. I don't think we need to consider other SDP usage th=
an Offer/Answer.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Q.2. Regarding section 7.2.1.:<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;A Sess=
ion Description Protocol (SDP) [RFC8866] media description SHALL be created=
 for each RTP stream.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">This sentence is not needed.<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;=
The information carried in the media type specification of<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
Section 7.1 has a specific mapping to the SDP fields, used to<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
describe RTP sessions.&nbsp; This information is redundant with the<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
information found in the payload data (namely, in the JPEG XS header<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
segment) and SHALL be consistent with it.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">In SDP offer/answer, you typica=
lly indicate what you are willing to RECEIVE. In this case it seems like yo=
u indicate what you are going to SEND. Is there a reason for that? I guess =
that impacts Section 7.2.3 too.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Q.3. Regarding Section 7.2.3.:<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;=
All parameters must be supported by both sides,&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 7.2.1 you say that t=
he receiver shall ignore unrecognized parameters. I ASSUME that you mean th=
at the all the parameter defined in Section 7.2.1.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
&quot;i.e. the answerer SHALL either maintain all parameters or remove the =
media format (payload<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp; type) completely if one or more of the parameter values are not<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp; supported.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I don't understand what this me=
an. According to Section 7.2.1, some of the parameters are OPTIONAL. Is the=
 answerer only allowed to reply with parameters that were present in the of=
fer?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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We have a draft agenda for the AVTCORE WG Virtual Interim that will take
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Agenda interim-2021-avtcore-02: Mon 11:00 (ietf.org)
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Martin,

Thanks for the review,

Please see my responses inline.

Den 2021-05-10 kl. 23:30, skrev Martin Duke via Datatracker:
> Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-17: No Objection
>
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/
>
>
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> - It is not completely clear to me what the actions in the case of congestion
> are. RFC 4103 RECOMMENDS four steps, the first is going from 300 to 500ms. So
> what is the hiearchy here. My guess is:
>
> Step 1. Senders MUST go from 300ms to 2 seconds
> Step 2. Senders SHOULD (further?) limit the number of characters sent
> Step 3. Senders SHOULD go from 2 seconds to 5 seconds
> Step 4. Senders SHOULD exclude nodes from the session
>
> Is this correct?
>
> - Assuming it is correct, I don't understand the motivation behind the
> congestion considerations in Section 8.
>
> The first and third paragraphs make perfect sense to me. But if the total
> traffic to a receiver, regardless of the number of senders, remains limited to
> 1 packet / 300ms, I don't see why you would change the RFC 4103 guidance of
> 500ms up to 2 seconds. This isn't a DISCUSS because you're welcome to be more
> conservative, but I would like to understand your reasoning.

[GH] First, I should clarify that the values are per source in the 
communication to one receiver.
You are right that it is not very logical to require an increase to a 
fixed time of 2 seconds. It does not help much, and the third action is 
anyway according to RFC 4103 an increase to an interval between 0.5 and 
5 seconds.

Therefore, I suggest to replace the second sentence of section 8, so 
that the section begins:

"The congestion considerations and recommended actions from [RFC4103] 
are also valid in multiparty situations.

The time values SHALL then be applied per source of text sent to a 
receiver."


>
> No need to reply to the comments below:
>
> - In (3.16) and (4.2.2), you mention various privacy-sensitive fields and then
> say "Integrity SHALL be considered..." I think you mean confidentiality?
> Integrity means the data hasn't been altered by an attacker.
[GH] Right, I meant "confidentiality". Modified.
>
> - It would be helpful to clarify in this draft that the CPS limit applies only
> to new, not redundant, text, assuming that is in fact the case.
[GH] Thanks, yes. I propose to insert the following sentence after the 
first sentence in section 3.22: "The actual rate is calculated without 
regard to any redundant text transmission and is in the multiparty case 
evaluated for all sources contributing to transmission to a receiver."

[GH] I will submit version -18 with the changes indicated above, 
together with edits because of Lars Eggert's nit findings, but am 
prepared to do further changes if needed on the congestion consideration 
wording.


Thanks,

Gunnar

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP-mixer formatting of multiparty Real-time text
        Author          : Gunnar Hellstrom
	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18.txt
	Pages           : 47
	Date            : 2021-05-17

Abstract:
   This document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text
   mixing suitable for a centralized conference model that enables
   source identification and rapidly interleaved transmission of text
   from different sources.  The intended use is for real-time text
   mixers and participant endpoints capable of providing an efficient
   presentation or other treatment of a multiparty real-time text
   session.  The specified mechanism builds on the standard use of the
   CSRC list in the RTP packet for source identification.  The method
   makes use of the same "text/t140" and "text/red" formats as for two-
   party sessions.

   Solutions using multiple RTP streams in the same RTP session are
   briefly mentioned, as they could have some benefits over the RTP-
   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

   A capability exchange is specified so that it can be verified that a
   mixer and a participant can handle the multiparty-coded real-time
   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an SDP media attribute "rtt-mixer".

   The document updates RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation".

   A specification of how a mixer can format text for the case when the
   endpoint is not multiparty-aware is also provided.


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The new version mentioned in a recent mail answering the comments by 
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Den 2021-05-10 kl. 23:30, skrev Martin Duke via Datatracker:
> Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
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> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> - It is not completely clear to me what the actions in the case of congestion
> are. RFC 4103 RECOMMENDS four steps, the first is going from 300 to 500ms. So
> what is the hiearchy here. My guess is:
>
> Step 1. Senders MUST go from 300ms to 2 seconds
> Step 2. Senders SHOULD (further?) limit the number of characters sent
> Step 3. Senders SHOULD go from 2 seconds to 5 seconds
> Step 4. Senders SHOULD exclude nodes from the session
>
> Is this correct?
>
> - Assuming it is correct, I don't understand the motivation behind the
> congestion considerations in Section 8.
>
> The first and third paragraphs make perfect sense to me. But if the total
> traffic to a receiver, regardless of the number of senders, remains limited to
> 1 packet / 300ms, I don't see why you would change the RFC 4103 guidance of
> 500ms up to 2 seconds. This isn't a DISCUSS because you're welcome to be more
> conservative, but I would like to understand your reasoning.
>
> No need to reply to the comments below:
>
> - In (3.16) and (4.2.2), you mention various privacy-sensitive fields and then
> say "Integrity SHALL be considered..." I think you mean confidentiality?
> Integrity means the data hasn't been altered by an attacker.
>
> - It would be helpful to clarify in this draft that the CPS limit applies only
> to new, not redundant, text, assuming that is in fact the case.
>
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LGTM

On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 2:29 PM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m <
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> wrote:

> The new version mentioned in a recent mail answering the comments by
> both Martin Duke and Lars Eggert is available.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/
>
> There is also an HTML version available at:
>
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18=
.html
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mi=
x-18
>
>
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> Regards
> Gunnar
>
> Den 2021-05-10 kl. 23:30, skrev Martin Duke via Datatracker:
> > Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
> > draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-17: No Objection
> >
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> > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> > introductory paragraph, however.)
> >
> >
> > Please refer to
> https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> > for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> >
> >
> > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix=
/
> >
> >
> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> > - It is not completely clear to me what the actions in the case of
> congestion
> > are. RFC 4103 RECOMMENDS four steps, the first is going from 300 to
> 500ms. So
> > what is the hiearchy here. My guess is:
> >
> > Step 1. Senders MUST go from 300ms to 2 seconds
> > Step 2. Senders SHOULD (further?) limit the number of characters sent
> > Step 3. Senders SHOULD go from 2 seconds to 5 seconds
> > Step 4. Senders SHOULD exclude nodes from the session
> >
> > Is this correct?
> >
> > - Assuming it is correct, I don't understand the motivation behind the
> > congestion considerations in Section 8.
> >
> > The first and third paragraphs make perfect sense to me. But if the tot=
al
> > traffic to a receiver, regardless of the number of senders, remains
> limited to
> > 1 packet / 300ms, I don't see why you would change the RFC 4103 guidanc=
e
> of
> > 500ms up to 2 seconds. This isn't a DISCUSS because you're welcome to b=
e
> more
> > conservative, but I would like to understand your reasoning.
> >
> > No need to reply to the comments below:
> >
> > - In (3.16) and (4.2.2), you mention various privacy-sensitive fields
> and then
> > say "Integrity SHALL be considered..." I think you mean confidentiality=
?
> > Integrity means the data hasn't been altered by an attacker.
> >
> > - It would be helpful to clarify in this draft that the CPS limit
> applies only
> > to new, not redundant, text, assuming that is in fact the case.
> >
> >
> >
> > _______________________________________________
> > Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance
> > avt@ietf.org
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> --
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<div dir=3D"ltr">LGTM<br></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"l=
tr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 2:29 PM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=
=B6m &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se">gunnar.hellstrom@g=
haccess.se</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding=
-left:1ex">The new version mentioned in a recent mail answering the comment=
s by <br>
both Martin Duke and Lars Eggert is available.<br>
<br>
<br>
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-=
rtt-mix/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org=
/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/</a><br>
<br>
There is also an HTML version available at:<br>
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tt-mix-18.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/a=
rchive/id/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18.html</a><br>
<br>
A diff from the previous version is available at:<br>
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ty-rtt-mix-18" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/rf=
cdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18</a><br>
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Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submissio=
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until the htmlized version and diff are available at <a href=3D"http://tool=
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Regards<br>
Gunnar<br>
<br>
Den 2021-05-10 kl. 23:30, skrev Martin Duke via Datatracker:<br>
&gt; Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for<br>
&gt; draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-17: No Objection<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<=
br>
&gt; email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut thi=
s<br>
&gt; introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss=
-criteria.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/i=
esg/statement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
&gt; for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br=
>
&gt; <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-p=
arty-rtt-mix/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.iet=
f.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt; COMMENT:<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; - It is not completely clear to me what the actions in the case of con=
gestion<br>
&gt; are. RFC 4103 RECOMMENDS four steps, the first is going from 300 to 50=
0ms. So<br>
&gt; what is the hiearchy here. My guess is:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Step 1. Senders MUST go from 300ms to 2 seconds<br>
&gt; Step 2. Senders SHOULD (further?) limit the number of characters sent<=
br>
&gt; Step 3. Senders SHOULD go from 2 seconds to 5 seconds<br>
&gt; Step 4. Senders SHOULD exclude nodes from the session<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Is this correct?<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; - Assuming it is correct, I don&#39;t understand the motivation behind=
 the<br>
&gt; congestion considerations in Section 8.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The first and third paragraphs make perfect sense to me. But if the to=
tal<br>
&gt; traffic to a receiver, regardless of the number of senders, remains li=
mited to<br>
&gt; 1 packet / 300ms, I don&#39;t see why you would change the RFC 4103 gu=
idance of<br>
&gt; 500ms up to 2 seconds. This isn&#39;t a DISCUSS because you&#39;re wel=
come to be more<br>
&gt; conservative, but I would like to understand your reasoning.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; No need to reply to the comments below:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; - In (3.16) and (4.2.2), you mention various privacy-sensitive fields =
and then<br>
&gt; say &quot;Integrity SHALL be considered...&quot; I think you mean conf=
identiality?<br>
&gt; Integrity means the data hasn&#39;t been altered by an attacker.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; - It would be helpful to clarify in this draft that the CPS limit appl=
ies only<br>
&gt; to new, not redundant, text, assuming that is in fact the case.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; _______________________________________________<br>
&gt; Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance<br>
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Thank you for the work on this document. I have some minor non-blocking
comments (feel free to take them or leave them), but I'd like some response to
point 6. about the normative MUST.

Francesca

1. -----

FP: Please expand acronyms (CSRC, SDP, BOM, PSTN,...) on first use.

2. -----

      Since
      simultaneous typing by more than two parties is very rare, this
      method can be used successfully with good performance.  Recovery

FP: I had question on this point, i.e. how was it evaluated that simultaneous
typing by more than two parties is very rare, but that was answered in section
1.3 Intended application - so I would suggest adding a forward reference to
that section in the paragraph quoted above.

3. -----

   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an SDP media attribute "rtt-mixer".

FP: Please add a reference to RFC 8866.

4. -----

   streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
   encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
   in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware

FP: I have a problem parsing this sentence "... if support ... is supported
because of lack of such support"

5. -----

   is the timestamp of packet 102 THAT was received.  So B1 does not

FP: nit - all capitals THAT.

6. -----

   the stream.  Some of them are optional.  Implementations MUST be able
   to ignore optional control codes that they do not support.

FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified for interoperability.
Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?

7. -----

    |                                              | |
    |(mix)[Bob)] Bob as well.                       | |

FP: one space character too much




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Francesca,

thank you for your review. I will answer your question 6 here, and 
follow up soon with a new version with actions on all comments.

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....
> 6. -----
>
>     the stream.  Some of them are optional.  Implementations MUST be able
>     to ignore optional control codes that they do not support.
>
> FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified for interoperability.
> Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?

Yes, this MUST is intended to be a normative MUST. And it is very 
important but not that complicated to properly ignore unsupported 
control codes.

The control codes are specified in ITU-T T.140, in turn referencing to 
ISO 6429. The control codes often consist of a special leading 
character, followed by a parameter consisting of normal text characters, 
and then a final special character.

Ignoring an unsupported control code means that the app needs to 
understand the structure of control codes, so that it ignores everything 
from the leading special character to and including the final special 
character.

It would be incorrect and cause garbage in the display or even 
malfunction if it just ignored the leading special character and then 
interpreted the characters in the parameter as if it was text and tried 
to present it.

The control codes can imply change in color or blinking or other visible 
effects in the text, and it is said that such effects are optional.


Would more explaining text be required for this section?


Regards

Gunnar

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Thank you to Rich Salz for the SECDIR review.

** Section 11.  Per “Participants with malicious intentions may appear ...”,
this text seems to be describing an attacker that is party to the call.  If the
mitigations suggested in the next sentence (i.e., secure signaling ... and
authentication) aren’t present, this style of attack may also be possible by an
on-path attacker as might be simple eavesdropping or injection of arbitrary
content.

** Section 11. Would the caution of the mixer not revealing that a user is
hearing or speech impaired noted in Section 8 of RFC5194 apply here too?




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I'm not sure I understand how the examples are consistent with the main
specification, so let's please discuss it to either un-confuse me or fix
the document.

Section 3.9 seems to say that the oldest (source or redundant) text at
the mixer takes priority when there is text from more than one source
waiting to be sent, but the examples in Section 3.21 seem to show (e.g.)
text received from A at time 20400 that is to be sent as redundancy,
being sent after text from B received at time 20500 (sent as primary).
Is the intent that if there is any primary text, the oldest primary text
is sent first, and only if there is no outstanding primary text do we
consider the redundant text?

In a related vein, Section 3.10 says that a packet is sent when (among
other things) "330 ms has passed since already transmitted text was
queued for transmission as redundant text".  But that doesn't say
anything about the timer being reset by subsequent transmission or
queuing of redundant text, so I'm not sure how in the Section 3.21
example, we say that transmitting B1 and B2 as redundancy was planned as
330 ms after packet 105 -- the original B2 was sent in packet 104, so
shouldn't the 330ms start from packet 104's transmission?  (The stated
time for this seems to match 330ms after 104, so maybe the "105" is just
a typo?)


I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds.


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The abstract is perhaps pushing the boundary of length reasonable for an
abstract.

There were a couple interesting remarks in the shepherd writeup:

% The specification has not been implemented yet, so it is possible that
% issues could arise in implementation. This is more of a concern than
% for typical AVTCORE documents, since this specification is likely to
% become a regulatory requirement prior to advancing beyond Proposed
% Standard.

Are there still no implementations?  Are we happy with publishign the
specification at this time in the absence of implementations?

% During review, the question was raised as to whether the specification
% will require development of an RTT mixer, or whether it could be made
% compatible with existing conferencing servers implementing Selective
% Forwarding.

What was the outcome of the discussion?  Should that be reflected in the
document?

Abstract

   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

It's a little surprising to see this claim given the absence (per the
shepherd writeup) of any actual implementations.

Section 1.2

   Multiple sources per packet
      A new "text" media subtype would be specified with up to 15
      sources in each packet.  The mechanism would make use of the RTP
      mixer model specified in RTP [RFC3550].  Text from up to 15
      sources can be included in each packet.  [...]

(How was the "15" number determined?)

Section 2.3.2

   A party receiving an offer containing the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute
   and being willing to use the RTP-mixer-based method of this
   specification for sending or receiving or both sending and receiving
   SHALL include the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute in the corresponding
   "text" media section in the answer.

This requirement doesn't quite seem to match up with what I expect -- an
answerer that's willing to use rtt-mixer and also willing to use
something else seems to still be bound by the "SHALL include" in the
first paragraph, which makes the willingness to use something else a bit
irrelevant and precludes choosing the other option.  Perhaps we want to
say only "chooses to use the RTP-mixer-based method of this
specification"?

Section 3.2

What purpose does the initial BOM serve?  I note that, e.g., RFC 5198
has an explicit BOM "MUST NOT appear at the beginning of these text
strings" and that RFC 4103 specifies UTF-8 encoding of the text.
I see in Section 3.17.4 (and 4.2.1) we mention that it might be used for
keepalive, but in rtt-mix don't we have lots of non-BOM keepalive
options?

Section 3.4

   If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be
   applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission SHALL be
   sent at the end of each transmission interval that can be allowed
   without exceeding the "CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls
   under the "CPS" value again.  [...]

This doesn't seem as precisely specified as it could be, given that the
CPS rate is supposed to be enforced over "any 10-second interval".  As
written, this seems to suggest that the entire 10-second history of
packet size/spacing needs to be retained, so that at each transmission
the earliest time for next transmission can be computed that retains the
CPS limit.  It's not clear that there's real need for such a complicated
solution vs something that more bluntly backs off the transmit rate and
uses bucketed averages for tracking the transmission rate.

(I have no idea why it's 330ms for a mixer and 300ms for a non-mixer,
but assume there is some reason for the difference.)

Section 3.6

   Text received by a mixer from a participant SHOULD NOT be included in
   transmission from the mixer to that participant, because the normal
   behavior of the endpoint is to present locally-produced text locally.

When would the SHOULD NOT be ignored?  (How might a mixer know that the
other endpoint is not using the "normal behavior" of presenting
locally-produced text locally?)

Section 3.7

   A mixer SHALL handle reception, recovery from packet loss, deletion
   of superfluous redundancy, marking of possible text loss and deletion
   of 'BOM' characters from each participant before queueing received
   text for transmission to receiving participants.

Are there specific references available for each of these operations?

Section 3.9

   The source with the oldest text received in the mixer or oldest
   redundant text SHALL be next in turn to get all its available unsent
   text transmitted.  Any redundant repetitions of earlier transmitted

Just to confirm: this is really *all* its available unsent text, not
just however much will fit in one packet/flight/etc.?  Can a participant
"hog the mic" by continuing to append to that list even as transmission
has commenced?

Section 3.13

It took me a bit of searching to realize that it is RFC 2198 that
specifies the additional header that includes the "timestamp offset"
field.  A specific reference here (or maybe from an earlier section?)
would have helped me out.

Section 3.14

   The SSRC of the mixer for the RTT session SHALL be inserted in the
   SSRC field of the RTP header.

As written, this could be taken to say that the non-mixer endpoint
should also use the SSRC of the mixer.

Section 3.16

   Confidentiality SHALL be considered when composing these fields.

I think "privacy considerations" would be more relevant than
"confidentiality".

   Similar considerations SHALL be taken as for other media.

This seems rather vague and it's not really clear how the implementor is
supposed to take action based on it.  (Note that media are typically
straight over (S)RTP, but these reports are (S)RTCP, which admittedly is
also over (S)RTP, but is still different.)

Section 3.17.2

   If it is known that only one source is active in the RTP session,
   then it is likely that a gap equal to or larger than the agreed
   number of redundancy generations (including the primary) causes text
   loss.  [...]

Some more care in description may be needed here, as the gap in RTP
sequence numbers is measured in the RTP sequence units (e.g., time), but
the redundancy generation number is just a dimensionless generation
count.  We need to assume the max inter-packet spacing in order to
convert that into a time value that is suitable for assuming loss.

   evaluate if three or more packets were lost within one second.  If
   this simple method is used, then a t140block SHOULD be created with a
   marker for possible text loss [T140ad1] and associated with the SSRC
   of the transmitter as a general input from the mixer.

Does "input from the mixer" mean that it uses the mixer's SSRC value?
Or is this injected by the mixer (in contrast to the previous paragraph,
where it was the receiver that injects the marker for possible text
loss)?

Section 3.17.3

   If the packet is not the first packet from a source, then if the
   second generation redundant data is available, its timestamp SHALL be
   created by subtracting its timestamp offset from the RTP timestamp.
   If the resulting timestamp is later than the latest retrieved data
   from the same source, then the redundant data SHALL be retrieved and
   appended to the receive buffer.  The process SHALL be continued in
   the same way for the first generation redundant data.  After that,
   the primary data SHALL be retrieved from the packet and appended to
   the receive buffer for the source.

I think I can come up with reordering scenarios that cause this
procedure to discard data that would otherwise have recovered from loss.

Also, this procedure as written says that the primary data shall always
be appended to the receive buffer (with no time check), which could
result in doubled content in the case of reordering.

Section 3.19

   Security SHOULD be applied when possible regarding the capabilities
   of the participating devices by use of SIP over TLS by default

"Security" is not some all-encompassing attribute that can be
generically applied; there are specific security properties that may or
may not be achieved by any given mechanism, and it's generally worth
being precise about what properties are (or are not) achieved.  So here
we might say "security mechanisms to provide confidentiality and
integrity protection and peer authentication SHOULD be applied".  We
cannot in general achieve source authenticity with just SRTP when a
mixer is involved, though RFC 8723 does specify a double-encryption
mechanism that applies in some cases when there is a central media
distributor.

                                                             In
   applications where legacy endpoints without security may exist, a
   negotiation SHOULD be performed to decide if encryption on the media
   level will be applied.  [...]

How would endpoints know if legacy endpoints might exist?

How would this negotiation be performed?

   security levels.  The mixing for conference-unaware endpoints has
   lower security level than the mixing method for conference-aware
   endpoints, because there may be an opportunity for a malicious mixer
   or a middleman to masquerade the source labels accompanying the text
   streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
   encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
   in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware
   endpoints as specified here also requires that the mixer can be
   trusted.  [...]

As the last sentence indicates, the provided reasoning in the first
sentence is not really accurate, since the mixer could just as easily
adjust the CSRC value in the header as change the label in the in-band
text stream.  This does not inherently invalidate the claim that there
are different security levels, though, as the correct behavior of the
mixer seems easier to independently validate in the conference-aware
endpoint case (with the well-formed RTP payloads providing information
that can be validated out-of-band with other participants).  But I don't
think this description should be left in the document as-is; it doesn't
seem accurate.

In the case of unencrypted media, it does seem technically true that it
is easier for a non-mixer middleman to masquerade the source labels,
since in that case it only adjusts the payload directly without needing
to keep state on the RTP sender information and produce well-formed RTP
headers after its adjustment.  But this is only a modest level of
additional difficulty and does not reflect any kind of effective
security control, so it may not be worth mentioning at all.

   End-to-end encryption would require further work and could be based
   on WebRTC as specified in Section 1.2.

Is RFC 8723 not applicable to these scenarios at all?  I do not think it
is WebRTC-specific.

Section 3.21

          Transmission of A2 and A3 as redundancy is planned for 330 ms
   after packet 101 if no new text from A is ready to be sent before
   that.

I thought new text from *anyone* would trigger sending A2 and A3 as
redundancy, per §3.9.


Is there any reason why the dummy offsets in 104 are 300/600 but the
dummy offsets in 103 are 330/660?

Section 4.2

               In order to expedite source switching, a user can, for
   example, end its turn with a new line.

How would a user know that there is a legacy endpoint in the coversation
so as to choose to end its turn in this way?

Section 4.2.2

   *  A long pause (e.g., > 10 seconds) in received text from the
      currently transmitted source

   *  If text from one participant has been transmitted with text from
      other sources waiting for transmission for a long time (e.g., > 1
      minute) and none of the other suitable points for switching has

I think I'm confused how we could hit the 1 minute timer before the 10
seconds timer has triggered.

Section 11

I think that the obvious attacks involving control characters are
addressed in one way or another, but it might be worth a reminder to
implementors that control characters should not be allowed to let one
user's content affect the display of other users' content, or the
presentation-format's label of the sender, etc.

It might be appropriate to have yet another reminder here that SRTP is
the recommended mode of operation.

   The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
   reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
   notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
   already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], [...]

Could you point me to where this is stated in RFC 3550?  I looked in the
security considerations (section 14) and searched for all instances of
"CNAME", but didn't see discussion about SDES/CNAME/NAME being privacy
sensitive.

Section 13.1

RFC 8825 is not currently referenced in any context that specifically
requires it to be listed as a normative reference.  This may suggest
that it should be referenced in more places (e.g., in the discussion of
gateway considerations with WebRTC).

NITS

Section 1

   Use of RTT is increasing, and specifically, use in emergency calls is
   increasing.  Emergency call use requires multiparty mixing.  [...]

I expect the conclusion that emergency-call use requires mixing to be
non-intuitive to many readers, so additional explanation might be
helpful.

                                                                RFC 4103
   "RTP Payload for Text Conversation" mixer implementations can use
   traditional RTP functions for source identification, but the

The word "mixer" (or even "mix") does not appear in RFC 4103, so I'm not
sure how to interpret "RFC 4103 mixer implementations".  Perhaps it is
an RFC 3550 mixer acting on RFC 4103 payloads?

   The document updates [RFC4103] by introducing an attribute for
   indicating capability for the RTP-mixer-based multiparty mixing case
   and rules for source indications and interleaving of text from
   different sources.

I think "indicating capability for the RTP-mixer-based multiparty mixing
case" needs another verb.

Section 2.2

   A party acting as a mixer, which has not negotiated any method for
   true multiparty RTT handling, but negotiated a "text/red" or "text/
   t140" format in a session with a participant SHOULD in order to
   maintain interoperability, if nothing else is specified for the
   application, format transmitted text to that participant to be
   suitable to present on a multiparty-unaware endpoint as further
   specified in Section 4.2.

comma after "SHOULD".
The whole sentence is a bit long, though, and the parenthetical "if
nothing else is specified for the application" is somewhat in the way in
its current location.  Further reworking may be in order.

I'd also consider s/format transmitted text/transmit formatted text/ or
/format text transmitted/.

Section 2.3.4

   If the modified offer deletes indication of support for multiparty
   real-time text by excluding the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute, the answer
   MUST NOT contain the "rtt-mixer" attribute, and both parties SHALL
   after processing the SDP exchange NOT send real-time text formatted
   for multiparty-aware parties according to this specification.

The BCP 14 keyword "SHALL NOT" is supposed to appear as the specific
phrase, so something like "SHALL NOT, after processing the SDP exchange,
send" seems more appropriate.

Section 3.4

   transmission MUST then be made at T140block borders.  See also
   Section 8

full stop at end of sentence.

Section 3.10

   The mixer SHALL compose and transmit an RTP packet to a receiver when
   one of the following conditions has occurred:

Maybe "one or more" (or "one or both")?

Section 3.16

   Confidentiality SHALL be considered when composing these fields.
   They contain name and address information that may be sensitive to
   transmit in its entirety e.g., to unauthenticated participants.

comma before "e.g." (as well as after)

Section 3.17

   presentation areas for each source.  Other receiver roles, such as
   gateways or chained mixers are also feasible, and requires
   consideration if the stream shall just be forwarded, or distributed

"such as gateways or chained mixers" seems like a parenthetical phrase
that should be offset by commas on both sides.

Also, "require consideration" seems to match up better with the plural
"roles".

Section 3.17.3

   When a packet is received in an RTP session using the packetization
   for multiparty-aware endpoints, its T140blocks SHALL be extracted in
   the following way.  The description is adapted to the default
   redundancy case using the original and two redundant generations.

Is this supposed to imply that the extension to the generic case with
other levels of redundancy is trivial for the reader to perform?

Section 3.18

   This solution has good performance with low text delays as long as
   the sum of characters per second during any 10-second interval sent
   from a number of simultaneously sending participants to a receiving
   participant does not reach the 'CPS' value.  [...]

"sum of characters per second during any 10-second interval" seems to
mean "compute CPS for each second, then add them up".  I don't think
that's the intended meaning.

                                   Only in large unmanaged conferences
   with a high number of participants there may on very rare occasions
   appear situations when many participants happen to send text
   simultaneously, resulting in unpleasantly jerky presentation of text
   from each sending participant.  [...]

This sentence seems a bit long and winding.

Section 3.20

      Offer example for "text/red" format including multiparty
      and security:
            a=fingerprint: (fingerprint1)

I think it would be preferred to make up some random fingerprints and
use them instead of the placeholder string (throughout).

Section 3.21

   offset 660 ms.  The timestamp of packet 106 minus 660 is 20500 which
   is the timestamp of packet 102 THAT was received.  So B1 does not

I don't see why "THAT" needs to be in all majuscule letters.

Section 3.22

   to transmission to a receiver.  The value MAY be modified in the
   "CPS" parameter of the FMTP attribute in the media section for the
   "text/t140" media.  [...]

RFC 4103 seems to show the lowercase "cps" parameter name (there are
subsequent occurrences that I do not quote).

Section 4.2

   one presentation area.  The mixer SHALL group text in suitable groups
   and prepare for presentation of them by inserting a new line between
   them if the transmitted text did not already end with a new line.  A

Is "new line" specified somewhere?  Up in toplevel §4 we cover the
unicode line separator and CRLF sequences but don't use the phrase "new
line".

Section 4.2.2

   Information available to the mixer for composing the label may
   contain sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in

"SHOULD NOT" in all caps

   sessions not securely authenticated and protected.  Integrity

"confidentiality protected"

   considerations regarding how much personal information is included in
   the label SHOULD therefore be taken when composing the label.

I don't think "integrity" is the right word here.

Section 11

   Therefore, the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in
   confidentiality and integrity.  [...]

s/trusted to achieve security in confidentiality and integrity/trusted
to maintain confidentiality and integrity of the RTT data/

   The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
   reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
   notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as

There's something awry with the commas around "for creation of labels".




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I apologize for asking, but ...

On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 4:43 PM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m <
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> wrote:

> Francesca,
>
> thank you for your review. I will answer your question 6 here, and
> follow up soon with a new version with actions on all comments.
>
> Den 2021-05-18 kl. 22:34, skrev Francesca Palombini via Datatracker:
> > Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for
> > draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: No Objection
> >
> > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> > introductory paragraph, however.)
> >
> >
> > Please refer to
> https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> > for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> >
> >
> > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix=
/
> >
> >
> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> > Thank you for the work on this document. I have some minor non-blocking
> > comments (feel free to take them or leave them), but I'd like some
> response to
> > point 6. about the normative MUST.
> >
> > Francesca
> ....
> > 6. -----
> >
> >     the stream.  Some of them are optional.  Implementations MUST be ab=
le
> >     to ignore optional control codes that they do not support.
> >
> > FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified for
> interoperability.
> > Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?
>

Gunnar,

When I read your response to Francesca's comment, my next question was
whether an implementation should always ignore optional control codes that
they do not support, if *not* ignoring them just cause problems, displays
garbage characters, etc.

If that's correct, I'm not Francesca, of course, but I'd think
"Implementations MUST ignore optional control codes that they do not
support" would be verifiable for interoperability, and would justify a BCP
14 MUST..

Best,

Spencer


> Yes, this MUST is intended to be a normative MUST. And it is very
> important but not that complicated to properly ignore unsupported
> control codes.
>
> The control codes are specified in ITU-T T.140, in turn referencing to
> ISO 6429. The control codes often consist of a special leading
> character, followed by a parameter consisting of normal text characters,
> and then a final special character.
>
> Ignoring an unsupported control code means that the app needs to
> understand the structure of control codes, so that it ignores everything
> from the leading special character to and including the final special
> character.
>
> It would be incorrect and cause garbage in the display or even
> malfunction if it just ignored the leading special character and then
> interpreted the characters in the parameter as if it was text and tried
> to present it.
>
> The control codes can imply change in color or blinking or other visible
> effects in the text, and it is said that such effects are optional.
>
>
> Would more explaining text be required for this section?
>
>
> Regards
>
> Gunnar
>
> >
> >
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>I apologize for asking, but ...=C2=A0</div><br><div c=
lass=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Tue, May 18, =
2021 at 4:43 PM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gunnar.hellstro=
m@ghaccess.se">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockq=
uote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1p=
x solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Francesca,<br>
<br>
thank you for your review. I will answer your question 6 here, and <br>
follow up soon with a new version with actions on all comments.<br>
<br>
Den 2021-05-18 kl. 22:34, skrev Francesca Palombini via Datatracker:<br>
&gt; Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for<br>
&gt; draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: No Objection<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<=
br>
&gt; email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut thi=
s<br>
&gt; introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss=
-criteria.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/i=
esg/statement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
&gt; for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br=
>
&gt; <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-p=
arty-rtt-mix/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.iet=
f.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt; COMMENT:<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Thank you for the work on this document. I have some minor non-blockin=
g<br>
&gt; comments (feel free to take them or leave them), but I&#39;d like some=
 response to<br>
&gt; point 6. about the normative MUST.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Francesca<br>
....<br>
&gt; 6. -----<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0the stream.=C2=A0 Some of them are optional.=C2=A0 =
Implementations MUST be able<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0to ignore optional control codes that they do not s=
upport.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified for interoperabil=
ity.<br>
&gt; Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?<br></blockquote><div><br=
></div><div>Gunnar,=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>When I read your respons=
e to Francesca&#39;s comment, my next question was whether an implementatio=
n should always ignore optional control codes that they do not support, if =
*not* ignoring them just cause problems, displays garbage characters, etc.=
=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>If that&#39;s correct, I&#39;m not Francesc=
a, of course, but I&#39;d think &quot;Implementations MUST ignore optional =
control codes that they do not support&quot; would be verifiable for intero=
perability, and would justify a BCP 14 MUST..=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><di=
v>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Spencer</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px sol=
id rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Yes, this MUST is intended to be a no=
rmative MUST. And it is very <br>
important but not that complicated to properly ignore unsupported <br>
control codes.<br>
<br>
The control codes are specified in ITU-T T.140, in turn referencing to <br>
ISO 6429. The control codes often consist of a special leading <br>
character, followed by a parameter consisting of normal text characters, <b=
r>
and then a final special character.<br>
<br>
Ignoring an unsupported control code means that the app needs to <br>
understand the structure of control codes, so that it ignores everything <b=
r>
from the leading special character to and including the final special <br>
character.<br>
<br>
It would be incorrect and cause garbage in the display or even <br>
malfunction if it just ignored the leading special character and then <br>
interpreted the characters in the parameter as if it was text and tried <br=
>
to present it.<br>
<br>
The control codes can imply change in color or blinking or other visible <b=
r>
effects in the text, and it is said that such effects are optional.<br>
<br>
<br>
Would more explaining text be required for this section?<br>
<br>
<br>
Regards<br>
<br>
Gunnar<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
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-- <br>
Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m<br>
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Spencer and Francesca,

Thanks for the edit proposal. Since Francesca accepts it, I will include 
it in next version.

If my further comments inline do not lead to one more change.

Den 2021-05-19 kl. 15:48, skrev Spencer Dawkins at IETF:
> I apologize for asking, but ...
>
> On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 4:43 PM Gunnar Hellström 
> <gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se <mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se>> 
> wrote:
>
>     Francesca,
>
>     thank you for your review. I will answer your question 6 here, and
>     follow up soon with a new version with actions on all comments.
>
>     Den 2021-05-18 kl. 22:34, skrev Francesca Palombini via Datatracker:
>     > Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for
>     > draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: No Objection
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>     > COMMENT:
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>     >
>     > Thank you for the work on this document. I have some minor
>     non-blocking
>     > comments (feel free to take them or leave them), but I'd like
>     some response to
>     > point 6. about the normative MUST.
>     >
>     > Francesca
>     ....
>     > 6. -----
>     >
>     >     the stream.  Some of them are optional. Implementations MUST
>     be able
>     >     to ignore optional control codes that they do not support.
>     >
>     > FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified for
>     interoperability.
>     > Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?
>
>
> Gunnar,
>
> When I read your response to Francesca's comment, my next question was 
> whether an implementation should always ignore optional control codes 
> that they do not support, if *not* ignoring them just cause problems, 
> displays garbage characters, etc.
>
> If that's correct, I'm not Francesca, of course, but I'd think 
> "Implementations MUST ignore optional control codes that they do not 
> support" would be verifiable for interoperability, and would justify a 
> BCP 14 MUST..

Yes, that is the case and the edit looks good.

I forgot to comment on the kernel of Francesca's comment. "Can it be 
verified"? Yes, a test generator can include control codes of the 
different specified types, and the verification would be that the ones 
supported have the intentional effect and the unsupported ones do not 
cause any visible effects and do not cause malfunction in the receiver. 
As usual with testing you need to restrict the variations of the values 
in these control codes to a realistic number.

Is "ignore" a too weak word here. It is an active discarding with 
knowledge about the syntax of the control codes that is required, so 
that everything from start to end can be discarded.

Would it be better to change "ignore" to "discard" or "skip"?

Regards

Gunnar

>
> Best,
>
> Spencer
>
>     Yes, this MUST is intended to be a normative MUST. And it is very
>     important but not that complicated to properly ignore unsupported
>     control codes.
>
>     The control codes are specified in ITU-T T.140, in turn
>     referencing to
>     ISO 6429. The control codes often consist of a special leading
>     character, followed by a parameter consisting of normal text
>     characters,
>     and then a final special character.
>
>     Ignoring an unsupported control code means that the app needs to
>     understand the structure of control codes, so that it ignores
>     everything
>     from the leading special character to and including the final special
>     character.
>
>     It would be incorrect and cause garbage in the display or even
>     malfunction if it just ignored the leading special character and then
>     interpreted the characters in the parameter as if it was text and
>     tried
>     to present it.
>
>     The control codes can imply change in color or blinking or other
>     visible
>     effects in the text, and it is said that such effects are optional.
>
>
>     Would more explaining text be required for this section?
>
>
>     Regards
>
>     Gunnar
>
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>     >
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    <p>Spencer and Francesca,<br>
    </p>
    <p>Thanks for the edit proposal. Since Francesca accepts it, I will
      include it in next version.</p>
    <p>If my further comments inline do not lead to one more change.<br>
    </p>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-19 kl. 15:48, skrev Spencer
      Dawkins at IETF:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type="cite"
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        <div>I apologize for asking, but ... </div>
        <br>
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          <div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 4:43
            PM Gunnar Hellström &lt;<a
              href="mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se"
              moz-do-not-send="true">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a>&gt;
            wrote:<br>
          </div>
          <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px
            0.8ex;border-left:1px solid
            rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Francesca,<br>
            <br>
            thank you for your review. I will answer your question 6
            here, and <br>
            follow up soon with a new version with actions on all
            comments.<br>
            <br>
            Den 2021-05-18 kl. 22:34, skrev Francesca Palombini via
            Datatracker:<br>
            &gt; Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot
            position for<br>
            &gt; draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: No Objection<br>
            &gt;<br>
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            and reply to all<br>
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            free to cut this<br>
            &gt; introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
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            &gt;<br>
            &gt; Please refer to <a
              href="https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html"
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            positions.<br>
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            &gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be
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            &gt;<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt;
            ----------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
            &gt; COMMENT:<br>
            &gt;
            ----------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt; Thank you for the work on this document. I have some
            minor non-blocking<br>
            &gt; comments (feel free to take them or leave them), but
            I'd like some response to<br>
            &gt; point 6. about the normative MUST.<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt; Francesca<br>
            ....<br>
            &gt; 6. -----<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt;     the stream.  Some of them are optional. 
            Implementations MUST be able<br>
            &gt;     to ignore optional control codes that they do not
            support.<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt; FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified
            for interoperability.<br>
            &gt; Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?<br>
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          <div>Gunnar, </div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>When I read your response to Francesca's comment, my next
            question was whether an implementation should always ignore
            optional control codes that they do not support, if *not*
            ignoring them just cause problems, displays garbage
            characters, etc. </div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>If that's correct, I'm not Francesca, of course, but I'd
            think "Implementations MUST ignore optional control codes
            that they do not support" would be verifiable for
            interoperability, and would justify a BCP 14 MUST.. <br>
          </div>
        </div>
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    </blockquote>
    <p>Yes, that is the case and the edit looks good. <br>
    </p>
    <p>I forgot to comment on the kernel of Francesca's comment. "Can it
      be verified"? Yes, a test generator can include control codes of
      the different specified types, and the verification would be that
      the ones supported have the intentional effect and the unsupported
      ones do not cause any visible effects and do not cause malfunction
      in the receiver. As usual with testing you need to restrict the
      variations of the values in these control codes to a realistic
      number. <br>
    </p>
    <p>Is "ignore" a too weak word here. It is an active discarding with
      knowledge about the syntax of the control codes that is required,
      so that everything from start to end can be discarded.</p>
    <p>Would it be better to change "ignore" to "discard" or "skip"?</p>
    <p>Regards</p>
    <p>Gunnar  <br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
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          </div>
          <div>Best,</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Spencer</div>
          <div> </div>
          <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px
            0.8ex;border-left:1px solid
            rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Yes, this MUST is
            intended to be a normative MUST. And it is very <br>
            important but not that complicated to properly ignore
            unsupported <br>
            control codes.<br>
            <br>
            The control codes are specified in ITU-T T.140, in turn
            referencing to <br>
            ISO 6429. The control codes often consist of a special
            leading <br>
            character, followed by a parameter consisting of normal text
            characters, <br>
            and then a final special character.<br>
            <br>
            Ignoring an unsupported control code means that the app
            needs to <br>
            understand the structure of control codes, so that it
            ignores everything <br>
            from the leading special character to and including the
            final special <br>
            character.<br>
            <br>
            It would be incorrect and cause garbage in the display or
            even <br>
            malfunction if it just ignored the leading special character
            and then <br>
            interpreted the characters in the parameter as if it was
            text and tried <br>
            to present it.<br>
            <br>
            The control codes can imply change in color or blinking or
            other visible <br>
            effects in the text, and it is said that such effects are
            optional.<br>
            <br>
            <br>
            Would more explaining text be required for this section?<br>
            <br>
            <br>
            Regards<br>
            <br>
            Gunnar<br>
            <br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt;<br>
            &gt;<br>
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Benjamin,

Thanks for the thorough review.

I will respond in multiple pieces, starting with the first parts of the 
DISCUSS.

Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:
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>
> I'm not sure I understand how the examples are consistent with the main
> specification, so let's please discuss it to either un-confuse me or fix
> the document.
>
> Section 3.9 seems to say that the oldest (source or redundant) text at
> the mixer takes priority when there is text from more than one source
> waiting to be sent, but the examples in Section 3.21 seem to show (e.g.)
> text received from A at time 20400 that is to be sent as redundancy,
> being sent after text from B received at time 20500 (sent as primary).
> Is the intent that if there is any primary text, the oldest primary text
> is sent first, and only if there is no outstanding primary text do we
> consider the redundant text?

[GH] You are right. The text in 3.9 i not clear enough. If there is no 
new text from A, the redundancy of A shall not be sent until 330 ms 
after the primary text from A was sent.

Only if new text arrives from A before 330 ms after the previous text 
was sent, then both that new text and the redundancy shall be sent, when 
the new text is the oldest available.

So in the example, it is correct to send text from B first.

One way to say it is that redundant text shall not participate in the 
age assessment until it is 330 ms older than when it was last sent. But 
it shall be included if new text is available and decided to be sent.

When composing suitable text from this, we also need to consider that 
the "CPS" value may puts a limit to how much new text may be sent.

We also have the following words last in 3.12:

"   The T140blocks saved for transmission as redundant data are assigned
    a planned transmission time 330 ms after the current time, but SHOULD
    be transmitted earlier if new text for the same source gets in turn
    for transmission before that time."


So, 3.9 is about interleaving new text and not about making sure that 
redundancy is sent even when there is no new text.  The text in 3.9 may 
become correct by deleting the redundancy from the age assessment, and 
include "CPS" consideration, to result in:

"The source with the oldest text received in the mixer  SHALL be next in 
turn to get all its available unsent text transmitted, as long as it is 
allowed considering the "CPS" value of the receiver.  Any redundant 
repetitions of earlier transmitted  text not yet sent the intended 
number of times SHALL be included as redundant retransmission in the 
transmission."



>
> In a related vein, Section 3.10 says that a packet is sent when (among
> other things) "330 ms has passed since already transmitted text was
> queued for transmission as redundant text".  But that doesn't say
> anything about the timer being reset by subsequent transmission or
> queuing of redundant text, so I'm not sure how in the Section 3.21
> example, we say that transmitting B1 and B2 as redundancy was planned as
> 330 ms after packet 105 -- the original B2 was sent in packet 104, so
> shouldn't the 330ms start from packet 104's transmission?  (The stated
> time for this seems to match 330ms after 104, so maybe the "105" is just
> a typo?)
>
>
> I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
> security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
> resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds.
>
>
[GH]

-Answers to be continued,

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Hi,

Thanks for this document.  This document is quite a long way from my core
knowledge base, so I'm not sure whether there is much that I can really add. 
It doesn't seem to have any obvious manageability concerns.

I was initially surprised by the capability exchange mechanism
(offer/exchange), in that if both offeror and receiver could support multiple
options then it is always the the receiver that decides which to use (by only
selecting one).  I think that this is probably fine.  I don't know which
parties generally initiate these exchanges, and whether there is ever a case
where both offeror and receiver support multiple options where it would be
beneficial for the offeror to make the final decision as to which should be
used (e.g., when coordinating between more than two devices).

As one minor nit, I would have preferred to see section 1.2, "Selected solution
and considered alternatives" as an appendix.  I wasn't convinced that it is
core to understanding this document, but I'm happy to leave it to the authors
discretion as to whether they should move it, or leave it where it is.

Thanks,
Rob




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Gunnar,

this looks all good to me. Thanks for considering my comments.

/js

On Wed, Apr 28, 2021 at 01:44:20PM +0200, Gunnar Hellstrm wrote:
> Jrgen,
> 
> I have submitted a new version, acting on your comments.
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-15.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-15
> 
> 
> Here is a summary of what I did:
> 
> Actions on review comments from Jurgen Schonwalder:
> 
>    A bit more about congestion situations and that they are expected to
>    be very rare.
> 
>    Explanation of differences in security between the conference-aware
>    and the conference-unaware case added in security section.
> 
>    Presentation examples with source labels made less confusing, and
>    explained.
> 
>    Reference to T.140 inserted at first mentioning of T.140.
> 
>    Reference to RFC 8825 inserted to explain WebRTC
> 
>    Nit in wording in terminology section adjusted.
> 
> I hope this satisfies your comments.
> 
> Thanks,
> Gunnar
> 
> 
> Den 2021-04-27 kl. 23:58, skrev Gunnar Hellstrm:
> > Thank you for your review.
> > 
> > I will provide initial reactions here, and follow up with more exact
> > proposals for changes.
> > 
> > Den 2021-04-27 kl. 12:25, skrev Jrgen Schnwlder via Datatracker:
> > > Reviewer: Jrgen Schnwlder
> > > Review result: Has Nits
> > > 
> > > I am by no means an expert in this area so please take this into
> > > account while reading my comments...
> > > 
> > > Content comments:
> > > 
> > > * The document assumes "human" communication, i.e., where text
> > >  originates at a speed of a human and politeness is used to resolve
> > >  concurrency conflicts. This seems to be a fair assumption for the
> > >  considered use cases but what happens if this assumption is not met?
> > >  Can systems or RTP mixers detect and handle such situations
> > >  gracefully or is the idea that any resulting "jerkiness" must be
> > >  accepted if senders misbehave?
> > 
> > [GH] The receivers are expected to declare their reception speed
> > capability in characters per second (over a 10 second period). A high
> > capability will allow smooth flow of text from many participants
> > simultaneously. The congestion section 9 tells what can be done if the
> > load gets too high. The mixer can then discard text, and if it has any
> > means to detect who is the main contributer, it can avid to discard text
> > from that participant. (e.g. by the sdp "content" attribute.
> > 
> > This is of course not nice. But it is equally not nice to try to hear
> > any specific voice in a mixed audio channel with many participants. And
> > same with video in cases when the video has real information.
> > 
> > So we are in good company with the other media in the problem that there
> > are no really good solutions to an information overload situation.
> > 
> > In most cases the typing participants will send a sentence or two and
> > then stop and read or listen to the others. In such situations the
> > overload will be sorted out after a short while even without the
> > participants being very polite.
> > 
> > Do you want me to elaborate more about this in the congestion chapter 9?
> > 
> > > 
> > > * The solution does not provide end-to-end security since the mixer
> > >  must be trusted to have access to the texts in order do the mixing.
> > >  This is mentioned in the security considerations and in section 2
> > >  where alternatives are considered. The reason to not select a
> > >  solution providing end-to-end security is give in section 1.2. Is
> > >  there work planned to address this issue, i.e., to complement this
> > >  solution with a solution providing end-to-end security?
> > 
> > [GH] There is another individual draft
> > "draft-hellstrom-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-solutions", intended to
> > document design choices behind the reviewed draft. It discusses the
> > end-to-end security topic among other things but does not solve it. If
> > there are requests for it, that work could be continued to provide
> > specific solutions. But I would like to hear the request first.
> > 
> > Maybe it is more urgent to specify how RFC 8865 "real-time text in
> > WebRTC" can be used in a multi-party setting with end-to-end security.
> > 
> > I would prefer to let the discussion of the topic in the reviewed draft
> > be sufficient fo now.
> > 
> > > 
> > > * Perhaps the recommendation in section 4.2.6 that the mixing method
> > >  for multi-party unaware endpoints is not RECOMMENDED to be used
> > >  should be repeated in the security considerations? It seems there
> > >  are serious limitations, in particular also related to the creation
> > >  of a presentation that can make it impossible to detect masquerade
> > >  attacks. Yes, masquerading is mentioned but from an outside security
> > >  point of view it feels like there was a strong security solution
> > >  that was discarded due to lack of implementation support, there is a
> > >  somewhat OK solution (but not able to provide end-to-end security),
> > >  and there is a pretty ugly solution to accommodate endpoints with no
> > >  support for the other solution. If this is a fair summary, perhaps
> > >  explaining this clearly in the security considerations would be a
> > >  good thing.
> > [GH] Yes, good point. I will compose a proposal.
> > > 
> > > * I am confused about Figures 5 and 6 since the mixed identities of
> > >  the sources are once shown in square brackets and once in
> > >  parenthesis. Are labels like [Alice] or [Bob] not inserted by the
> > >  mixer? If so, why would the format on the endpoint be different? Is
> > >  the idea that endpoints try to parse the mixed text in order to
> > >  render it differently? Or was the idea to show that different mixers
> > >  can use different styles to generate labels, i.e., I should not
> > >  really compare Figure 5 and 6?
> > 
> > [GH] The figures should be possible to compare. And, yes, I have caused
> > confusion by letting the mixer create labels with brackets in figure 5
> > but with parentheses in figure 6. In figure 6 the brackets are inserted
> > by the receiving terminal in a way that has become quite common in RTT
> > implementations, but the parentheses come from the mixer. Alice is the
> > local user. Her text is merged locally and therefore get the label
> > assigned locally.
> > 
> > I will change so that the type of label framing is consistent and insert
> > some words about the labels and their framing.
> > 
> > > 
> > > Editorial comments:
> > > 
> > > * I suggest to cite [T140] when you first refer to it in the
> > >  Introduction:
> > > 
> > >  OLD
> > > 
> > >  A requirement related to multi-party sessions from the presentation
> > >  level standard T.140 for real-time text is: "The display of text
> > > from
> > > 
> > >  NEW
> > > 
> > >  A requirement related to multi-party sessions from the presentation
> > >  level standard T.140 [T140] for real-time text is: "The display
> > > of text from
> > [GH] In the previous review, I got a recommendation to delete many such
> > standard names before the reference, but you are right that it would
> > probably be good with using it once.
> > > * as defined -> are defined and missing full stop
> > > 
> > >  OLD
> > > 
> > >  The terms SDES, CNAME, NAME, SSRC, CSRC, CSRC list, CC, RTCP, RTP-
> > >  mixer, RTP-translator as defined in [RFC3550]
> > > 
> > >  NEW
> > > 
> > >  The terms SDES, CNAME, NAME, SSRC, CSRC, CSRC list, CC, RTCP, RTP-
> > >  mixer, RTP-translator are defined in [RFC3550].
> > [GH] Yes, will do.
> > > 
> > > * Add reference(s) to WebRTC in the terminology section?
> > [GH] Yes, will do.
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > 
> > Gunnar
> > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > > _______________________________________________
> > > Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance
> > > avt@ietf.org
> > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/avt
> > 
> -- 
> Gunnar Hellstrm
> GHAccess
> gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se
> 

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Benjamin,

This is a more complete answer on your DISCUSS

I think the description of the procedure was too much spread out in 
section 3. So, I propose to delete section 3.9, and change 3.4 to become:

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3.4.  Transmission interval

    A "text/red" or "text/t140" transmitter in a mixer SHALL send packets
    distributed in time as long as there is something (new or redundant
    T140blocks) to transmit.  The maximum transmission interval between
    text from the same source SHALL then be 330 ms, when no other
    limitations cause a longer interval to be temporarily used.
    It is RECOMMENDED to send the next packet to a
    receiver as soon as new text to that receiver is available, as long
    as the maximum character rate ("CPS") to the receiver is not exceeded
    during any 10-second interval.  The intention is to keep the latency
    low and network load limited while keeping good protection against
    text loss in bursty packet loss conditions.
    The main purpose of the 330 ms interval is for timing of redundant
    transmission, when no new text from the same source is available.

    The reason for the value 330 ms is that many sources of text will
    transmit new text with 300 ms intervals during periods of
    continuous user typing, and then reception in the mixer of such new
    text will cause a combined transmission of the new text and the
    unsent redundancy from the previous transmission. Only when the user
    stops typing, the 330 ms interval will be applied to send the
    redundancy.

    If the "CPS" value is reached, a longer transmission interval SHALL be
    applied for text from all sources as specified in [RFC 4103] and only
    as much of the text queued for transmission SHALL be sent at the end
    of each transmission interval that can be allowed without exceeding
    the "CPS" value. Division of text for partial transmission MUST
    then be made at T140block borders.
    When the transmission rate falls under the "CPS" value again,
    the transmission intervals SHALL be returned to 330 ms and
    transmission of new text SHALL return to be made as soon as new
    text is available.

    NOTE: that extending the transmission intervals during high load
    periods does not change the number of characters to be conveyed.
    It just evens out the load in time and reduces the number of packets
    per second. With human created conversational text, the sending
    user will eventually take a pause letting transmission catch up.

    See also Section 8

    For a transmitter not acting as a mixer, the transmission interval
    principles from [RFC4103] apply, and the normal transmission 
interval SHALL
    be 300 ms.

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Section 3.10 also needs a few changes, to read:

3.10.  Text placement in packets

    The mixer SHALL compose and transmit an RTP packet to a receiver when
    one of the following conditions has occurred:

    *  There is unsent text available for transmission to that receiver.

|   *  The current transmission interval ( normally 330 ms) has passed
|     since already transmitted text was queued for
|      transmission as redundant text.

    At the time of transmission, the mixer SHALL populate the RTP packet
    with all T140blocks queued for transmission originating from the
    source in turn for transmission as long as this is not in conflict
    with the allowed number of characters per second ("CPS") or the
    maximum packet size.  In this way, the latency of the latest received
    text is kept low even in moments of simultaneous transmission from
    many sources.

    Redundant text SHALL also be included, and the assessment of how much
    new text can be included within the maximum packet size MUST take
    into account that the redundancy has priority to be transmitted in
|   its entirety.  See Section 3.4

    The SSRC of the source SHALL be placed as the only member in the
    CSRC-list.

    Note: The CSRC-list in an RTP packet only includes the participant
    whose text is included in text blocks.  It is not the same as the
    total list of participants in a conference.  With audio and video
    media, the CSRC-list would often contain all participants who are not
    muted whereas text participants that don't type are completely silent
    and thus are not represented in RTP packet CSRC-lists.

.........................................................................................

The examples in section 3.21 needs some small adjustments:

in packet 104, the timer should be 20 800,

The text above and in packet 106 should be as you also discovered:

  B1 and B2 still need to be transmitted as redundancy.
|     This is planned 330 ms after packet 104. That
|    would be at 21130.

       |-----------------------|
|     |Seq no 106, Timer=21130|
       |CC=1                   |
       |CSRC list B            |
       | R2: B1, Offset=660    |
       | R1: B2, Offset=330    |
       | P:  Empty             |
       |-----------------------|

-----------------------------------------------------------------


Regards

Gunnar



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Den 2021-05-19 kl. 23:25, skrev Gunnar Hellström:
> Benjamin,
>
> Thanks for the thorough review.
>
> I will respond in multiple pieces, starting with the first parts of 
> the DISCUSS.
>
> Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:
>> Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: Discuss
>>
>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/
>>
>>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> DISCUSS:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> I'm not sure I understand how the examples are consistent with the main
>> specification, so let's please discuss it to either un-confuse me or fix
>> the document.
>>
>> Section 3.9 seems to say that the oldest (source or redundant) text at
>> the mixer takes priority when there is text from more than one source
>> waiting to be sent, but the examples in Section 3.21 seem to show (e.g.)
>> text received from A at time 20400 that is to be sent as redundancy,
>> being sent after text from B received at time 20500 (sent as primary).
>> Is the intent that if there is any primary text, the oldest primary text
>> is sent first, and only if there is no outstanding primary text do we
>> consider the redundant text?
>
> [GH] You are right. The text in 3.9 i not clear enough. If there is no 
> new text from A, the redundancy of A shall not be sent until 330 ms 
> after the primary text from A was sent.
>
> Only if new text arrives from A before 330 ms after the previous text 
> was sent, then both that new text and the redundancy shall be sent, 
> when the new text is the oldest available.
>
> So in the example, it is correct to send text from B first.
>
> One way to say it is that redundant text shall not participate in the 
> age assessment until it is 330 ms older than when it was last sent. 
> But it shall be included if new text is available and decided to be sent.
>
> When composing suitable text from this, we also need to consider that 
> the "CPS" value may puts a limit to how much new text may be sent.
>
> We also have the following words last in 3.12:
>
> "   The T140blocks saved for transmission as redundant data are assigned
>    a planned transmission time 330 ms after the current time, but SHOULD
>    be transmitted earlier if new text for the same source gets in turn
>    for transmission before that time."
>
>
> So, 3.9 is about interleaving new text and not about making sure that 
> redundancy is sent even when there is no new text.  The text in 3.9 
> may become correct by deleting the redundancy from the age assessment, 
> and include "CPS" consideration, to result in:
>
> "The source with the oldest text received in the mixer  SHALL be next 
> in turn to get all its available unsent text transmitted, as long as 
> it is allowed considering the "CPS" value of the receiver.  Any 
> redundant repetitions of earlier transmitted  text not yet sent the 
> intended number of times SHALL be included as redundant retransmission 
> in the transmission."
>
>
>
>>
>> In a related vein, Section 3.10 says that a packet is sent when (among
>> other things) "330 ms has passed since already transmitted text was
>> queued for transmission as redundant text".  But that doesn't say
>> anything about the timer being reset by subsequent transmission or
>> queuing of redundant text, so I'm not sure how in the Section 3.21
>> example, we say that transmitting B1 and B2 as redundancy was planned as
>> 330 ms after packet 105 -- the original B2 was sent in packet 104, so
>> shouldn't the 330ms start from packet 104's transmission?  (The stated
>> time for this seems to match 330ms after 104, so maybe the "105" is just
>> a typo?)
>>
>>
>> I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
>> security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
>> resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds.
>>
>>
> [GH]
>
> -Answers to be continued,
>
> Gunnar
>>
>> _______________________________________________
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>
-- 
Gunnar Hellström
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        Title           : Multiplexing Scheme Updates for QUIC
        Authors         : Bernard Aboba
                          Gonzalo Salgueiro
                          Colin Perkins
	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-01.txt
	Pages           : 8
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Abstract:
   This document defines how QUIC, Datagram Transport Layer Security
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   (RTCP), Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN), Traversal Using
   Relays around NAT (TURN), and ZRTP packets are multiplexed on a
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        Title           : RTP Payload Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)
        Authors         : Sébastien Lugan
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                          Tim Bruylants
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   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
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   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
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Dear Christer,



A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-14.txt has been submitt=
ed and posted to the IETF repository.



We have addressed your comments and remarks as good as possible.



We made the following changes to address all three questions:



-> (Q1) We have moved Section 7.2 to become a separate main section (now se=
ction 8).

-> (Q2) We removed the sentence.

-> (Q2 and Q3) We reworked both subsections and tried to clarify better wha=
t was intended to be expressed.



As such, the intent of the SDP Offer/Answer negotiation is that a receiver =
can offer a certain set of parameters (and values) that it wants to receive=
. The answerer (or sender in this case) can either honor this offer exactly=
 (i.e. everything in the offer can be matched inside the payload) or drop t=
he offered SDP media description. As an example, when the receiver wants 4:=
2:0 content, it can signal this in the offer by specifying the "sampling" p=
arameter with a value of "YCbCr-4:2:0". The sender is not allowed to answer=
 with another sampling format (to counter offer).



On the other hand, if the offerer does not specify a specific optional para=
meter (meaning it does not care about this specific feature), the answerer =
is allowed to clarify in the answer such optional parameter. For example, a=
n offer is made without specifying the frame rate, the answer is allowed to=
 add the "exactframerate" option with a value that matches the payload. Thi=
s is true for any unspecified optional parameter in the offer.


We hope this addresses all concerns regarding SDP.

Best regards,
Tim Bruylants.


From: avt <avt-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
Sent: Monday 17 May 2021 16:24
To: IETF AVTCore WG <avt@ietf.org>
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sic <mmusic@ietf.org>
Subject: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-=
13

Hi,

I have performed the SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegx=
s-13.

Regards,

Christer

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Q.1

I suggest converting section 7.2 to a separate main section, and change the=
 name to "SDP Offer/Answer Considerations". I don't think we need to consid=
er other SDP usage than Offer/Answer.


Q.2. Regarding section 7.2.1.:


    "A Session Description Protocol (SDP) [RFC8866] media description SHALL=
 be created for each RTP stream."

This sentence is not needed.


     "The information carried in the media type specification of
      Section 7.1 has a specific mapping to the SDP fields, used to
      describe RTP sessions.  This information is redundant with the
      information found in the payload data (namely, in the JPEG XS header
      segment) and SHALL be consistent with it."

In SDP offer/answer, you typically indicate what you are willing to RECEIVE=
. In this case it seems like you indicate what you are going to SEND. Is th=
ere a reason for that? I guess that impacts Section 7.2.3 too.


Q.3. Regarding Section 7.2.3.:

     "All parameters must be supported by both sides,"

In Section 7.2.1 you say that the receiver shall ignore unrecognized parame=
ters. I ASSUME that you mean that the all the parameter defined in Section =
7.2.1.

      "i.e. the answerer SHALL either maintain all parameters or remove the=
 media format (payload
       type) completely if one or more of the parameter values are not
       supported."

I don't understand what this mean. According to Section 7.2.1, some of the =
parameters are OPTIONAL. Is the answerer only allowed to reply with paramet=
ers that were present in the offer?

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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Dear Christer,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpeg=
xs-14.txt has been submitted and posted to the IETF repository.<o:p></o:p><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">We have addressed your comments and remarks as go=
od as possible.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">We made the following changes to address all thre=
e questions:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">-&gt; (Q1) We have moved Section 7.2 to become a =
separate main section (now section 8).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">-&gt; (Q2) We removed the sentence.<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">-&gt; (Q2 and Q3) We reworked both subsections an=
d tried to clarify better what was intended to be expressed.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">As such, the intent of the SDP Offer/Answer negot=
iation is that a receiver can offer a certain set of parameters (and values=
) that it wants to receive. The answerer (or sender in this case) can eithe=
r honor this offer exactly (i.e. everything
 in the offer can be matched inside the payload) or drop the offered SDP me=
dia description. As an example, when the receiver wants 4:2:0 content, it c=
an signal this in the offer by specifying the &quot;sampling&quot; paramete=
r with a value of &quot;YCbCr-4:2:0&quot;. The sender
 is not allowed to answer with another sampling format (to counter offer).<=
o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">On the other hand, if the offerer does not specif=
y a specific optional parameter (meaning it does not care about this specif=
ic feature), the answerer is allowed to clarify in the answer such optional=
 parameter. For example, an offer
 is made without specifying the frame rate, the answer is allowed to add th=
e &quot;exactframerate&quot; option with a value that matches the payload. =
This is true for any unspecified optional parameter in the offer.<o:p></o:p=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">We hope this addresses all concerns regarding SDP.<o=
:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Tim Bruylants.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> avt &lt;avt-bounces@ietf.org&gt; <b>On =
Behalf Of </b>
Christer Holmberg<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday 17 May 2021 16:24<br>
<b>To:</b> IETF AVTCore WG &lt;avt@ietf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; Murray S. Kucherawy &lt;superuser@gmail=
.com&gt;; mmusic &lt;mmusic@ietf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-=
jpegxs-13<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"FI">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"FI"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I have performed the SDP directorate review of draft=
-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Christer<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">----<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q.1<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I suggest converting section 7.2 to a separate main =
section, and change the name to &quot;SDP Offer/Answer Considerations&quot;=
. I don't think we need to consider other SDP usage than Offer/Answer.<o:p>=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q.2. Regarding section 7.2.1.:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;A Session Description Proto=
col (SDP) [RFC8866] media description SHALL be created for each RTP stream.=
&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This sentence is not needed.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;The information carri=
ed in the media type specification of<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Section 7.1 has a spe=
cific mapping to the SDP fields, used to<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; describe RTP sessions=
.&nbsp; This information is redundant with the<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; information found in =
the payload data (namely, in the JPEG XS header<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; segment) and SHALL be=
 consistent with it.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In SDP offer/answer, you typically indicate what you=
 are willing to RECEIVE. In this case it seems like you indicate what you a=
re going to SEND. Is there a reason for that? I guess that impacts Section =
7.2.3 too.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q.3. Regarding Section 7.2.3.:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;All parameters must b=
e supported by both sides,&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 7.2.1 you say that the receiver shall ign=
ore unrecognized parameters. I ASSUME that you mean that the all the parame=
ter defined in Section 7.2.1.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;i.e. the answer=
er SHALL either maintain all parameters or remove the media format (payload=
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; type) completel=
y if one or more of the parameter values are not<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; supported.&quot=
;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I don't understand what this mean. According to Sect=
ion 7.2.1, some of the parameters are OPTIONAL. Is the answerer only allowe=
d to reply with parameters that were present in the offer?<o:p></o:p></p>
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Benjamin,

I hope I resolved the issues with 3.9 in the previous answer.

Therefore I continue here with 3.19 that you partly included in the DISCUSS.

You say:

"I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds."

Section 3.19

    Security SHOULD be applied when possible regarding the capabilities
    of the participating devices by use of SIP over TLS by default

"Security" is not some all-encompassing attribute that can be
generically applied; there are specific security properties that may or
may not be achieved by any given mechanism, and it's generally worth
being precise about what properties are (or are not) achieved.  So here
we might say "security mechanisms to provide confidentiality and
integrity protection and peer authentication SHOULD be applied".

[GH] Accepted and included.
  We
cannot in general achieve source authenticity with just SRTP when a
mixer is involved, though RFC 8723 does specify a double-encryption
mechanism that applies in some cases when there is a central media
distributor.
  


  In
    applications where legacy endpoints without security may exist, a
    negotiation SHOULD be performed to decide if encryption on the media
    level will be applied.  [...]

How would endpoints know if legacy endpoints might exist?

[GH] It may be a decision by the service provider. It is of course not 
desirable to mix secure and unsecured endpoints, but that is what is 
specified in the next generation emergency service RFC:s RFC 6443 and 
RFC 6881. These RFCs have reasoning about that choise. I suggest to 
replace "may exist" with "are allowed".   


  How would this negotiation be performed?
[GH]The draft only supplies a suitable example in next sentence by 
recommending RFC 8643 OSRTP when nothing else is specified in the 
application. RFC 6443 and RFC 6881 also specifies mechanisms to be used 
for negotiating security. I suggest that that is sufficient.   



  security levels.  The mixing for conference-unaware endpoints has
    lower security level than the mixing method for conference-aware
    endpoints, because there may be an opportunity for a malicious mixer
    or a middleman to masquerade the source labels accompanying the text
    streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
    encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
    in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware
    endpoints as specified here also requires that the mixer can be
    trusted.  [...]

As the last sentence indicates, the provided reasoning in the first
sentence is not really accurate, since the mixer could just as easily
adjust the CSRC value in the header as change the label in the in-band
text stream.  This does not inherently invalidate the claim that there
are different security levels, though, as the correct behavior of the
mixer seems easier to independently validate in the conference-aware
endpoint case (with the well-formed RTP payloads providing information
that can be validated out-of-band with other participants).  But I don't
think this description should be left in the document as-is; it doesn't
seem accurate.

In the case of unencrypted media, it does seem technically true that it
is easier for a non-mixer middleman to masquerade the source labels,
since in that case it only adjusts the payload directly without needing
to keep state on the RTP sender information and produce well-formed RTP
headers after its adjustment.  But this is only a modest level of
additional difficulty and does not reflect any kind of effective
security control, so it may not be worth mentioning at all.
[GH]I suggest to delete the paragraph, except the last sentence 
referring to "Further security considerations..."

  End-to-end encryption would require further work and could be based
    on WebRTC as specified in Section 1.2.
Is RFC 8723 not applicable to these scenarios at all? I do not think it 
is WebRTC-specific. [GH] Yes, it looks good, but requires quite another 
approach to how to detect and indicate text loss, because RFC 2198 that 
is used, has a header in the RTP payload, containing Payload type and 
timestamp offsets. RFC 8723 has a special chapter on how to handle cases 
when RFC 2198 is used, and it requires the detection of loss and 
recovery to be handled between the source and the destination rather 
than by the mixer. I suggest to add reference to RFC 8723 in the 
sentence about further work to read: "End-to-end encryption would 
require further work and could be based on WebRTC as specified in 
section 1.2 or on double encryption as specified in [RFC8723]."

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Thanks,

Gunnar


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> I'm not sure I understand how the examples are consistent with the main
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> the document.
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> Section 3.9 seems to say that the oldest (source or redundant) text at
> the mixer takes priority when there is text from more than one source
> waiting to be sent, but the examples in Section 3.21 seem to show (e.g.)
> text received from A at time 20400 that is to be sent as redundancy,
> being sent after text from B received at time 20500 (sent as primary).
> Is the intent that if there is any primary text, the oldest primary text
> is sent first, and only if there is no outstanding primary text do we
> consider the redundant text?
>
> In a related vein, Section 3.10 says that a packet is sent when (among
> other things) "330 ms has passed since already transmitted text was
> queued for transmission as redundant text".  But that doesn't say
> anything about the timer being reset by subsequent transmission or
> queuing of redundant text, so I'm not sure how in the Section 3.21
> example, we say that transmitting B1 and B2 as redundancy was planned as
> 330 ms after packet 105 -- the original B2 was sent in packet 104, so
> shouldn't the 330ms start from packet 104's transmission?  (The stated
> time for this seems to match 330ms after 104, so maybe the "105" is just
> a typo?)
>
>
> I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
> security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
> resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds.
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    <p>Benjamin,</p>
    <p>I hope I resolved the issues with 3.9 in the previous answer. <br>
    </p>
    <p>Therefore I continue here with 3.19 that you partly included in
      the DISCUSS.<br>
    </p>
    <p>You say: <br>
    </p>
    <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">"I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds."</pre>
    <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Section 3.19

   Security SHOULD be applied when possible regarding the capabilities
   of the participating devices by use of SIP over TLS by default

"Security" is not some all-encompassing attribute that can be
generically applied; there are specific security properties that may or
may not be achieved by any given mechanism, and it's generally worth
being precise about what properties are (or are not) achieved.  So here
we might say "security mechanisms to provide confidentiality and
integrity protection and peer authentication SHOULD be applied". 

<font color="#ff0000">[GH] Accepted and included.
</font>
 We
cannot in general achieve source authenticity with just SRTP when a
mixer is involved, though RFC 8723 does specify a double-encryption
mechanism that applies in some cases when there is a central media
distributor.
 


 In
   applications where legacy endpoints without security may exist, a
   negotiation SHOULD be performed to decide if encryption on the media
   level will be applied.  [...]

How would endpoints know if legacy endpoints might exist?

<font color="#ff0000">[GH] It may be a decision by the service provider. It is of course not desirable to mix secure and unsecured endpoints, but that is what is specified in the next generation emergency service RFC:s RFC 6443 and RFC 6881. These RFCs have reasoning about that choise. 
I suggest to replace "may exist" with "are allowed".</font>  


 How would this negotiation be performed?
<font color="#ff0000">[GH]The draft only supplies a suitable example in next sentence by recommending RFC 8643 OSRTP when nothing else is specified in the application. RFC 6443 and RFC 6881 also specifies mechanisms to be used for negotiating security. I suggest that that is sufficient.</font>  



 security levels.  The mixing for conference-unaware endpoints has
   lower security level than the mixing method for conference-aware
   endpoints, because there may be an opportunity for a malicious mixer
   or a middleman to masquerade the source labels accompanying the text
   streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
   encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
   in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware
   endpoints as specified here also requires that the mixer can be
   trusted.  [...]

As the last sentence indicates, the provided reasoning in the first
sentence is not really accurate, since the mixer could just as easily
adjust the CSRC value in the header as change the label in the in-band
text stream.  This does not inherently invalidate the claim that there
are different security levels, though, as the correct behavior of the
mixer seems easier to independently validate in the conference-aware
endpoint case (with the well-formed RTP payloads providing information
that can be validated out-of-band with other participants).  But I don't
think this description should be left in the document as-is; it doesn't
seem accurate.

In the case of unencrypted media, it does seem technically true that it
is easier for a non-mixer middleman to masquerade the source labels,
since in that case it only adjusts the payload directly without needing
to keep state on the RTP sender information and produce well-formed RTP
headers after its adjustment.  But this is only a modest level of
additional difficulty and does not reflect any kind of effective
security control, so it may not be worth mentioning at all.
<font color="#ff0000">[GH]I suggest to delete the paragraph, except the last sentence referring to "Further security considerations..."</font>

 End-to-end encryption would require further work and could be based
   on WebRTC as specified in Section 1.2.
<font color="#ff0000">
Is RFC 8723 not applicable to these scenarios at all?  I do not think it
is WebRTC-specific.
[GH] Yes, it looks good, but requires quite another approach to how to detect and indicate text loss, because RFC 2198 that is used, has a header in the RTP payload, containing Payload type and timestamp offsets. RFC 8723 has a special chapter on how to handle cases when RFC 2198 is used, and it requires the detection of loss and recovery to be handled between the source and the destination rather than by the mixer. I suggest to add reference to RFC 8723 in the sentence about further work to read: "End-to-end encryption would require further work and could be based on WebRTC as specified in section 1.2 or on double encryption as specified in [RFC8723]."</font>

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Continuation will follow with the COMMENT points.
Thanks,

Gunnar


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I'm not sure I understand how the examples are consistent with the main
specification, so let's please discuss it to either un-confuse me or fix
the document.

Section 3.9 seems to say that the oldest (source or redundant) text at
the mixer takes priority when there is text from more than one source
waiting to be sent, but the examples in Section 3.21 seem to show (e.g.)
text received from A at time 20400 that is to be sent as redundancy,
being sent after text from B received at time 20500 (sent as primary).
Is the intent that if there is any primary text, the oldest primary text
is sent first, and only if there is no outstanding primary text do we
consider the redundant text?

In a related vein, Section 3.10 says that a packet is sent when (among
other things) "330 ms has passed since already transmitted text was
queued for transmission as redundant text".  But that doesn't say
anything about the timer being reset by subsequent transmission or
queuing of redundant text, so I'm not sure how in the Section 3.21
example, we say that transmitting B1 and B2 as redundancy was planned as
330 ms after packet 105 -- the original B2 was sent in packet 104, so
shouldn't the 330ms start from packet 104's transmission?  (The stated
time for this seems to match 330ms after 104, so maybe the "105" is just
a typo?)


I also left a note in the comment that there's a remark about "lower
security level" in Section 3.19 that's not really accurate; we should
resolve that in some manner before the document proceeds.


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Hi,



>A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-14.txt has been submit=
ted and posted to the IETF repository.

>

>We have addressed your comments and remarks as good as possible.

>

>We made the following changes to address all three questions:

>

>-> (Q1) We have moved Section 7.2 to become a separate main section (now s=
ection 8).

>-> (Q2) We removed the sentence.

>-> (Q2 and Q3) We reworked both subsections and tried to clarify better wh=
at was intended to be expressed.

>

>As such, the intent of the SDP Offer/Answer negotiation is that a receiver=
 can offer a certain set of parameters (and values) that it wants to receiv=
e. The answerer (or sender in this case)

>can either honor this offer exactly (i.e. everything in the offer can be m=
atched inside the payload) or drop the offered SDP media description. As an=
 example, when the receiver wants

>4:2:0 content, it can signal this in the offer by specifying the "sampling=
" parameter with a value of "YCbCr-4:2:0". The sender is not allowed to ans=
wer with another sampling format (to counter offer).

>

>On the other hand, if the offerer does not specify a specific optional par=
ameter (meaning it does not care about this specific feature), the answerer=
 is allowed to clarify in the answer such optional parameter.

>For example, an offer is made without specifying the frame rate, the answe=
r is allowed to add the "exactframerate" option with a value that matches t=
he payload. This is true for any unspecified optional parameter in the offe=
r.



Unfortunately I don't think what you explain above is very clear in the tex=
t.



Consider the following.



The offerer sends an offer. The offerer specifies the characteristics that =
the offerer wants to receive. Similarly, the answer specifies the character=
istics that the answerer wants to receive - the answerer does NOT specify w=
hat it is going to send. which I think the text is currently describing.



So, I think you need to describe that the offerer indicates what it wants t=
o receive.



Then, you need to specify that, if the answerer accepts the offered paramet=
ers, it sends an answer, in which it indicates what it wants to receive. It=
 is fine to say that the answerer must indicate the same characteristics as=
 the offerer, if that is required.




"The receiver SHALL ignore any unrecognized parameter or invalid parameter =
value."

First, In my opinion invalid parameters values shall trigger an error.

Second, what is an unrecognized parameter?


Also, the text does not say what restrictions (if any) there are when it co=
mes to modify the stream during a session. Is it allowed to modify any/all =
characteristics?


Regards,

Christer



From: avt <avt-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:avt-bounces@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of =
Christer Holmberg
Sent: Monday 17 May 2021 16:24
To: IETF AVTCore WG <avt@ietf.org<mailto:avt@ietf.org>>
Cc: avtcore-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:avtcore-chairs@ietf.org>; Murray S. Kuch=
erawy <superuser@gmail.com<mailto:superuser@gmail.com>>; mmusic <mmusic@iet=
f.org<mailto:mmusic@ietf.org>>
Subject: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-=
13

Hi,

I have performed the SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegx=
s-13.

Regards,

Christer

----

Q.1

I suggest converting section 7.2 to a separate main section, and change the=
 name to "SDP Offer/Answer Considerations". I don't think we need to consid=
er other SDP usage than Offer/Answer.


Q.2. Regarding section 7.2.1.:


    "A Session Description Protocol (SDP) [RFC8866] media description SHALL=
 be created for each RTP stream."

This sentence is not needed.


     "The information carried in the media type specification of
      Section 7.1 has a specific mapping to the SDP fields, used to
      describe RTP sessions.  This information is redundant with the
      information found in the payload data (namely, in the JPEG XS header
      segment) and SHALL be consistent with it."

In SDP offer/answer, you typically indicate what you are willing to RECEIVE=
. In this case it seems like you indicate what you are going to SEND. Is th=
ere a reason for that? I guess that impacts Section 7.2.3 too.


Q.3. Regarding Section 7.2.3.:

     "All parameters must be supported by both sides,"

In Section 7.2.1 you say that the receiver shall ignore unrecognized parame=
ters. I ASSUME that you mean that the all the parameter defined in Section =
7.2.1.

      "i.e. the answerer SHALL either maintain all parameters or remove the=
 media format (payload
       type) completely if one or more of the parameter values are not
       supported."

I don't understand what this mean. According to Section 7.2.1, some of the =
parameters are OPTIONAL. Is the answerer only allowed to reply with paramet=
ers that were present in the offer?

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi,<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;A new version of I-D, dr=
aft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-14.txt has been submitted and posted to the IET=
F repository.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;We have addressed your c=
omments and remarks as good as possible.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;We made the following ch=
anges to address all three questions:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;-&gt; (Q1) We have moved=
 Section 7.2 to become a separate main section (now section 8).<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;-&gt; (Q2) We removed th=
e sentence.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;-&gt; (Q2 and Q3) We rew=
orked both subsections and tried to clarify better what was intended to be =
expressed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;As such, the intent of t=
he SDP Offer/Answer negotiation is that a receiver can offer a certain set =
of parameters (and values) that it wants to receive. The answerer (or sende=
r in this case)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US">can either honor this offer exactly (i.e. everything in the offer can b=
e matched inside the payload) or drop the offered SDP media description. As=
 an example, when the receiver wants<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US">4:2:0 content, it can signal this in the offer by specifying the &quot;=
sampling&quot; parameter with a value of &quot;YCbCr-4:2:0&quot;. The sende=
r is not allowed to answer with another sampling format (to counter
 offer).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;On the other hand, if th=
e offerer does not specify a specific optional parameter (meaning it does n=
ot care about this specific feature), the answerer is allowed to clarify in=
 the answer such optional parameter.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US">For example, an offer is made without specifying the frame rate, the an=
swer is allowed to add the &quot;exactframerate&quot; option with a value t=
hat matches the payload. This is true for any unspecified
 optional parameter in the offer.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Unfortunately I don&#8217;t =
think what you explain above is very clear in the text.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Consider the following.<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">The offerer sends an offer. =
The offerer specifies the characteristics that the offerer wants to receive=
. Similarly, the answer specifies the characteristics that the answerer wan=
ts to receive &#8211; the answerer does NOT
 specify what it is going to send. which I think the text is currently desc=
ribing.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">So, I think you need to desc=
ribe that the offerer indicates what it wants to receive.<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Then, you need to specify th=
at, if the answerer accepts the offered parameters, it sends an answer, in =
which it indicates what it wants to receive. It is fine to say that the ans=
werer must indicate the same characteristics
 as the offerer, if that is required.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:black">&#8220;The receiver SHALL ignor=
e any unrecognized parameter or invalid parameter value.&#8221;<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">First, In my opinion invalid pa=
rameters values shall trigger an error.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Second, what is an unrecognized=
 parameter?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Also, the text does not say wha=
t restrictions (if any) there are when it comes to modify the stream during=
 a session. Is it allowed to modify any/all characteristics?<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Christer</span><span lang=3D"EN=
-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:bl=
ack"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> avt &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:avt-bounces@ietf.org">avt-bounces@iet=
f.org</a>&gt;
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Christer Holmberg<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday 17 May 2021 16:24<br>
<b>To:</b> IETF AVTCore WG &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:avt@ietf.org">avt@ietf.org=
</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:avtcore-chairs@ietf.org">avtcore-chairs@ietf.o=
rg</a>; Murray S. Kucherawy &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:superuser@gmail.com">supe=
ruser@gmail.com</a>&gt;; mmusic &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mmusic@ietf.org">mmus=
ic@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-=
jpegxs-13<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I have performed the SDP direct=
orate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Christer<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">----<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Q.1<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I suggest converting section 7.=
2 to a separate main section, and change the name to &quot;SDP Offer/Answer=
 Considerations&quot;. I don't think we need to consider other SDP usage th=
an Offer/Answer.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Q.2. Regarding section 7.2.1.:<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;A Sess=
ion Description Protocol (SDP) [RFC8866] media description SHALL be created=
 for each RTP stream.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">This sentence is not needed.<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;=
The information carried in the media type specification of<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
Section 7.1 has a specific mapping to the SDP fields, used to<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
describe RTP sessions.&nbsp; This information is redundant with the<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
information found in the payload data (namely, in the JPEG XS header<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
segment) and SHALL be consistent with it.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">In SDP offer/answer, you typica=
lly indicate what you are willing to RECEIVE. In this case it seems like yo=
u indicate what you are going to SEND. Is there a reason for that? I guess =
that impacts Section 7.2.3 too.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Q.3. Regarding Section 7.2.3.:<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;=
All parameters must be supported by both sides,&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 7.2.1 you say that t=
he receiver shall ignore unrecognized parameters. I ASSUME that you mean th=
at the all the parameter defined in Section 7.2.1.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
&quot;i.e. the answerer SHALL either maintain all parameters or remove the =
media format (payload<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp; type) completely if one or more of the parameter values are not<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp; supported.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I don't understand what this me=
an. According to Section 7.2.1, some of the parameters are OPTIONAL. Is the=
 answerer only allowed to reply with parameters that were present in the of=
fer?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Continuing the answers:

Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:
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>
> The abstract is perhaps pushing the boundary of length reasonable for an
> abstract.
>
> There were a couple interesting remarks in the shepherd writeup:
>
> % The specification has not been implemented yet, so it is possible that
> % issues could arise in implementation. This is more of a concern than
> % for typical AVTCORE documents, since this specification is likely to
> % become a regulatory requirement prior to advancing beyond Proposed
> % Standard.
>
> Are there still no implementations?  Are we happy with publishign the
> specification at this time in the absence of implementations?

[GH] There is an implementation of section 4.2

4.2.  multiparty mixing for multiparty-unaware endpoints
It works well.

It is true that there are no known implementations of the method for 
multiparty-aware endpoints. However the basic methods: the RTP-mixer and 
the centralized SIP conference model, and the base RTP transport for 
real-time text (RFC 4103) are all commonly implemented.

>
> % During review, the question was raised as to whether the specification
> % will require development of an RTT mixer, or whether it could be made
> % compatible with existing conferencing servers implementing Selective
> % Forwarding.
>
> What was the outcome of the discussion?  Should that be reflected in the
> document?
[GH] The discussion is concluded in section 1.2, and a note in 3.20.
The first expected implementation environment is the traditional SIP 
centralized conference server and endpoints (for emergency services) , 
where traditional RTP-mixers are the dominating bases for 
implementations. It seems to me that we are closer to get 
implementations done by keeping to that well known technology than 
trying to apply selective forwarding for this case.

>
> Abstract
>
>     mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
>     range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
>     selected to be fully specified in this document.
>
> It's a little surprising to see this claim given the absence (per the
> shepherd writeup) of any actual implementations.

[GH] The RTP-mixer is a general technology, specified in RFC 3550. It is 
very commonly applied in conference bridges since long, but for the 
other media; video and audio. But more important here is that the 
RTP-mixer makes use of just one RTP media stream to each receiver. Many 
implementations of RTP seem to have the limitation that they cannot 
handle more than one media stream per RTP media session. Requiring a 
multi-stream solution would have led to excluding a lot of potential 
current endpoints with two-party RTT implementations from becoming 
upgraded to RTT multiparty-aware endpoints.

>
> Section 1.2
>
>     Multiple sources per packet
>        A new "text" media subtype would be specified with up to 15
>        sources in each packet.  The mechanism would make use of the RTP
>        mixer model specified in RTP [RFC3550].  Text from up to 15
>        sources can be included in each packet.  [...]
>
> (How was the "15" number determined?)
[GH] It is a limitation from the maximum size of the CSRC list in the 
RTP header defined in RFC 3550:
"

CSRC list: 0 to 15 items, 32 bits each The CSRC list identifies the 
contributing sources for the payload contained in this packet. The 
number of identifiers is given by the CC field. If there are more than 
15 contributing sources, only 15 can be identified." In our case it is 
essential to have the sources identified, and complicated to go over 
this limitation. I suggest to add to the text in 1.2 to read: "The 
sources are indicated in strict order in the CSRC list of the RTP 
packets. The CSRC list can have up to 15 members. Therefore, text from 
up to 15 sources can be included in each packet."

>
> Section 2.3.2
>
>     A party receiving an offer containing the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute
>     and being willing to use the RTP-mixer-based method of this
>     specification for sending or receiving or both sending and receiving
>     SHALL include the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute in the corresponding
>     "text" media section in the answer.
>
> This requirement doesn't quite seem to match up with what I expect -- an
> answerer that's willing to use rtt-mixer and also willing to use
> something else seems to still be bound by the "SHALL include" in the
> first paragraph, which makes the willingness to use something else a bit
> irrelevant and precludes choosing the other option.  Perhaps we want to
> say only "chooses to use the RTP-mixer-based method of this
> specification"?

[GH] It says "willing" because also two-party coded real-time text is 
still allowed. The multi-party coding is expected to be applied when 
more than two parties participate in the call.

So, the answerer is not willing to use another multiparty method.

In order to make that clear, I suggest to insert this sentence before 
the discussion of other multiparty methods in 2.3.2:

"  Even when the "rtt-mixer" attribute is successfully negotiated, the 
parties MAY send and receive two-party coded real-time text."



>
> Section 3.2
>
> What purpose does the initial BOM serve?  I note that, e.g., RFC 5198
> has an explicit BOM "MUST NOT appear at the beginning of these text
> strings" and that RFC 4103 specifies UTF-8 encoding of the text.
> I see in Section 3.17.4 (and 4.2.1) we mention that it might be used for
> keepalive, but in rtt-mix don't we have lots of non-BOM keepalive
> options?

[GH] The initial BOM is for initial opening of ports and firewall paths 
so that traffic rapidly can start to flow both ways. In real-time text 
already the first real media packet with text is important, while for 
most other media (= video and audio) usually many hundred RTP packet 
flow before any important information carrying packet is sent. BOM is 
also said in Unicode to be required in the beginning of UNICODE streams, 
and that is negated by RFC 5198. RFC 4103 is a update of RFC 2793, 
published in May 2000. At that time RFC 2279 was the UTF-8 RFC. RFC 2279 
did not mention any restrictions for use of BOM, so RFC 2793 specified 
the use from Unicode, For interoperability reasons we have not changed 
that in RFC 4103 and not in the current draft. So we can just realizr 
that we are not fully RFC 5198 compliant of historical and 
interoperational reasons.

BOM is not recommended as keep-alive even if some implementations may 
use it.

I suggest to add this sentence in 3.2: " This is useful in many 
configurations to open ports and firewalls and setting up the connection 
between the application and the network."

>
> Section 3.4
>
>     If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be
>     applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission SHALL be
>     sent at the end of each transmission interval that can be allowed
>     without exceeding the "CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls
>     under the "CPS" value again.  [...]
>
> This doesn't seem as precisely specified as it could be, given that the
> CPS rate is supposed to be enforced over "any 10-second interval".  As
> written, this seems to suggest that the entire 10-second history of
> packet size/spacing needs to be retained, so that at each transmission
> the earliest time for next transmission can be computed that retains the
> CPS limit.  It's not clear that there's real need for such a complicated
> solution vs something that more bluntly backs off the transmit rate and
> uses bucketed averages for tracking the transmission rate.

[GH] I suggest to change the calculation of mean character rate in the 
first paragraph of 3.4 to: " as long as the mean character rate of new 
text to the receiver calculated over the last 10 one-second intervals 
does not exceed the "CPS" value of the receiver."

That calculation method of character rate will then be remembered when 
reading other references to "CPS"

>
> (I have no idea why it's 330ms for a mixer and 300ms for a non-mixer,
> but assume there is some reason for the difference.)

[GH] I have now inserted an explanation in 3.4 as proposed in the 
DISCUSS resolution:

"    The reason for the value 330 ms is that many sources of text will
    transmit new text with 300 ms intervals during periods of
    continuous user typing, and then reception in the mixer of such new
    text will cause a combined transmission of the new text and the
    unsent redundancy from the previous transmission. Only when the user
    stops typing, the 330 ms interval will be applied to send the
    redundancy."

>
> Section 3.6
>
>     Text received by a mixer from a participant SHOULD NOT be included in
>     transmission from the mixer to that participant, because the normal
>     behavior of the endpoint is to present locally-produced text locally.
>
> When would the SHOULD NOT be ignored?  (How might a mixer know that the
> other endpoint is not using the "normal behavior" of presenting
> locally-produced text locally?)
[GH] It is SHOULD just to allow specific applications to deviate. I have 
no reason to think that it would be useful, but I do not want to make it 
forbidden. Then all mixers and endpoints in that application environment 
would do it the same way or have a setting or control mechanism to 
select which solution to use. I suggest no change.
>
> Section 3.7
>
>     A mixer SHALL handle reception, recovery from packet loss, deletion
>     of superfluous redundancy, marking of possible text loss and deletion
>     of 'BOM' characters from each participant before queueing received
>     text for transmission to receiving participants.
>
> Are there specific references available for each of these operations?

[GH] Yes. I suggest to add last " as specified in [RFC4103] for 
single-party sources and section 3.17  for multiparty sources (chained 
mixers).


>
> Section 3.9
>
>     The source with the oldest text received in the mixer or oldest
>     redundant text SHALL be next in turn to get all its available unsent
>     text transmitted.  Any redundant repetitions of earlier transmitted
>
> Just to confirm: this is really *all* its available unsent text, not
> just however much will fit in one packet/flight/etc.?  Can a participant
> "hog the mic" by continuing to append to that list even as transmission
> has commenced?
[GH] Section 3.9 is in answers to the DISCUSS suggested to be replaced 
by wording in 3.4, where the problem indicated here is amended.
>
> Section 3.13
>
> It took me a bit of searching to realize that it is RFC 2198 that
> specifies the additional header that includes the "timestamp offset"
> field.  A specific reference here (or maybe from an earlier section?)
> would have helped me out.
[GH] I suggest to include after the bullet list in section 3.10 the 
following:
             "The principles from [RFC4103] apply for populating the 
header, the redundancy header and the data in the packet with specifics 
specified here and in the following sections."

I hope it is OK to take it in pieces, with next piece coming soon.

Thanks,

Gunnar

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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev
      Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: Discuss

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The abstract is perhaps pushing the boundary of length reasonable for an
abstract.

There were a couple interesting remarks in the shepherd writeup:

% The specification has not been implemented yet, so it is possible that
% issues could arise in implementation. This is more of a concern than
% for typical AVTCORE documents, since this specification is likely to
% become a regulatory requirement prior to advancing beyond Proposed
% Standard.

Are there still no implementations?  Are we happy with publishign the
specification at this time in the absence of implementations?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] There is an implementation of section
        4.2</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">4.2.  multiparty mixing for
        multiparty-unaware endpoints<br>
        It works well.</font></p>
    <p><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#800000">It is true that there
          are no known implementations of the method for
          multiparty-aware endpoints. However the basic methods: the
          RTP-mixer and the centralized SIP conference model, and the
          base RTP transport for real-time text (RFC 4103) are all
          commonly implemented. </font><br>
      </font></p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

% During review, the question was raised as to whether the specification
% will require development of an RTT mixer, or whether it could be made
% compatible with existing conferencing servers implementing Selective
% Forwarding.

What was the outcome of the discussion?  Should that be reflected in the
document?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] The discussion is concluded in section
      1.2, and a note in 3.20.<br>
      The first expected implementation environment is the traditional
      SIP centralized conference server and endpoints (for emergency
      services) , where traditional RTP-mixers are the dominating bases
      for implementations. It seems to me that we are closer to get
      implementations done by keeping to that well known technology than
      trying to apply selective forwarding for this case. </font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Abstract

   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

It's a little surprising to see this claim given the absence (per the
shepherd writeup) of any actual implementations.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] The RTP-mixer is a general technology,
        specified in RFC 3550. It is very commonly applied in conference
        bridges since long, but for the other media; video and audio.
        But more important here is that the RTP-mixer makes use of just
        one RTP media stream to each receiver. Many implementations of
        RTP seem to have the limitation that they cannot handle more
        than one media stream per RTP media session. Requiring a
        multi-stream solution would have led to excluding a lot of
        potential current endpoints with two-party RTT implementations
        from becoming upgraded to RTT multiparty-aware endpoints. </font><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 1.2

   Multiple sources per packet
      A new "text" media subtype would be specified with up to 15
      sources in each packet.  The mechanism would make use of the RTP
      mixer model specified in RTP [RFC3550].  Text from up to 15
      sources can be included in each packet.  [...]

(How was the "15" number determined?)</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] It is a limitation from the maximum size
      of the CSRC list in the RTP header defined in RFC 3550:<br>
      "<br>
    </font>
    <pre class="newpage" style="font-size: 13.3333px; margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; break-before: page; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial;"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#800000">CSRC list: 0 to 15 items, 32 bits each
      The CSRC list identifies the contributing sources for the payload
      contained in this packet.  The number of identifiers is given by
      the CC field.  If there are more than 15 contributing sources,
      only 15 can be identified."

In our case it is essential to have the sources identified, 
and complicated to go over this limitation.

I suggest to add to the text in 1.2 to read:
"The sources are indicated in strict order in the CSRC list of the RTP packets.
 The CSRC list can have up to 15 members. Therefore, text from up to 15 sources
 can be included in each packet."</font>
</font>
</pre>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 2.3.2

   A party receiving an offer containing the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute
   and being willing to use the RTP-mixer-based method of this
   specification for sending or receiving or both sending and receiving
   SHALL include the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute in the corresponding
   "text" media section in the answer.

This requirement doesn't quite seem to match up with what I expect -- an
answerer that's willing to use rtt-mixer and also willing to use
something else seems to still be bound by the "SHALL include" in the
first paragraph, which makes the willingness to use something else a bit
irrelevant and precludes choosing the other option.  Perhaps we want to
say only "chooses to use the RTP-mixer-based method of this
specification"?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] It says "willing" because also
        two-party coded real-time text is still allowed. The multi-party
        coding is expected to be applied when more than two parties
        participate in the call. <br>
      </font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">So, the answerer is not willing to use
        another multiparty method. <br>
      </font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">In order to make that clear, I suggest to
        insert this sentence before the discussion of other multiparty
        methods in 2.3.2:</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">"  Even when the "rtt-mixer" attribute is
        successfully negotiated, the parties MAY send and receive
        two-party coded real-time text."</font></p>
    <p><br>
    </p>
    <p><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.2

What purpose does the initial BOM serve?  I note that, e.g., RFC 5198
has an explicit BOM "MUST NOT appear at the beginning of these text
strings" and that RFC 4103 specifies UTF-8 encoding of the text.
I see in Section 3.17.4 (and 4.2.1) we mention that it might be used for
keepalive, but in rtt-mix don't we have lots of non-BOM keepalive
options?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] The initial BOM is for initial opening
        of ports and firewall paths so that traffic rapidly can start to
        flow both ways. In real-time text already the first real media
        packet with text is important, while for most other media (=
        video and audio) usually many hundred RTP packet flow before any
        important information carrying packet is sent. BOM is also said
        in Unicode to be required in the beginning of UNICODE streams,
        and that is negated by RFC 5198. RFC 4103 is a update of RFC
        2793, published in May 2000. At that time RFC 2279 was the UTF-8
        RFC. RFC 2279 did not mention any restrictions for use of BOM,
        so RFC 2793 specified the use from Unicode, For interoperability
        reasons we have not changed that in RFC 4103 and not in the
        current draft. So we can just realizr that we are not fully RFC
        5198 compliant of historical and interoperational reasons.<br>
      </font></p>
    <p><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#800000">BOM is not
          recommended as keep-alive even if some implementations may use
          it.<br>
        </font></font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">I suggest to add this sentence in 3.2: "
        This is useful in many configurations to open ports and
        firewalls and setting up the connection between the application
        and the network."</font><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.4

   If the "CPS" value is reached, longer transmission intervals SHALL be
   applied and only as much of the text queued for transmission SHALL be
   sent at the end of each transmission interval that can be allowed
   without exceeding the "CPS" value, until the transmission rate falls
   under the "CPS" value again.  [...]

This doesn't seem as precisely specified as it could be, given that the
CPS rate is supposed to be enforced over "any 10-second interval".  As
written, this seems to suggest that the entire 10-second history of
packet size/spacing needs to be retained, so that at each transmission
the earliest time for next transmission can be computed that retains the
CPS limit.  It's not clear that there's real need for such a complicated
solution vs something that more bluntly backs off the transmit rate and
uses bucketed averages for tracking the transmission rate.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to change the calculation of
        mean character rate in the first paragraph of 3.4 to: " as long
        as the mean character rate of new text to the receiver
        calculated over the last 10 one-second intervals does not exceed
        the "CPS" value of the receiver."</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">That calculation method of character rate
        will then be remembered when reading other references to "CPS"</font><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

(I have no idea why it's 330ms for a mixer and 300ms for a non-mixer,
but assume there is some reason for the difference.)</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] I have now inserted an explanation in
        3.4 as proposed in the DISCUSS resolution:</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">"    The reason for the value 330 ms is
        that many sources of text will<br>
           transmit new text with 300 ms intervals during periods of <br>
           continuous user typing, and then reception in the mixer of
        such new<br>
           text will cause a combined transmission of the new text and
        the <br>
           unsent redundancy from the previous transmission. Only when
        the user <br>
           stops typing, the 330 ms interval will be applied to send the
        <br>
           redundancy."</font><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.6

   Text received by a mixer from a participant SHOULD NOT be included in
   transmission from the mixer to that participant, because the normal
   behavior of the endpoint is to present locally-produced text locally.

When would the SHOULD NOT be ignored?  (How might a mixer know that the
other endpoint is not using the "normal behavior" of presenting
locally-produced text locally?)</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] It is SHOULD just to allow specific
      applications to deviate. I have no reason to think that it would
      be useful, but I do not want to make it forbidden. Then all mixers
      and endpoints in that application environment would do it the same
      way or have a setting or control mechanism to select which
      solution to use. I suggest no change.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.7

   A mixer SHALL handle reception, recovery from packet loss, deletion
   of superfluous redundancy, marking of possible text loss and deletion
   of 'BOM' characters from each participant before queueing received
   text for transmission to receiving participants.

Are there specific references available for each of these operations?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] Yes. I suggest to add last " as
        specified in [RFC4103] for single-party sources and section
        3.17  for multiparty sources (chained mixers).</font></p>
    <p><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.9

   The source with the oldest text received in the mixer or oldest
   redundant text SHALL be next in turn to get all its available unsent
   text transmitted.  Any redundant repetitions of earlier transmitted

Just to confirm: this is really *all* its available unsent text, not
just however much will fit in one packet/flight/etc.?  Can a participant
"hog the mic" by continuing to append to that list even as transmission
has commenced?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Section 3.9 is in answers to the DISCUSS
      suggested to be replaced by wording in 3.4, where the problem
      indicated here is amended.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.13

It took me a bit of searching to realize that it is RFC 2198 that
specifies the additional header that includes the "timestamp offset"
field.  A specific reference here (or maybe from an earlier section?)
would have helped me out.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to include after the bullet
      list in section 3.10 the following:<br>
                  "The principles from [RFC4103] apply for populating
      the header, the redundancy header and the data in the packet with
      specifics specified here and in the following sections."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p>I hope it is OK to take it in pieces, with next piece coming
      soon.</p>
    <p>Thanks,</p>
    <p>Gunnar<br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

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Hi Christer, hi Tim,

> Unfortunately I dont think what you explain above is very clear in the 
> text.
> 
> Consider the following.
> 
> The offerer sends an offer. The offerer specifies the characteristics 
> that the offerer wants to receive. Similarly, the answer specifies the 
> characteristics that the answerer wants to receive  the answerer does 
> NOT specify what it is going to send. which I think the text is 
> currently describing.

Sorry to sound confused, but maybe you could explain a bit better. To my 
understanding, it is the offerer that describes what it offers to send, 
and not the other way around? Maybe I misunderstand something very 
fundamental? Sorry to ask these elementary questions, but this is 
important for the text.

> The receiver SHALL ignore any unrecognized parameter or invalid 
> parameter value.
> 
> First, In my opinion invalid parameters values shall trigger an error.
> 
> Second, what is an unrecognized parameter?

I wonder why we need to specify this, i.e. what a receive does about 
parameters it does not recognize? Essentially, this is a problem of 
"foreward compatibility". Wouldn't it be a matter of implementation 
whether the receiver accepts an offer (note well, the receiver), and 
attempts to decode a stream on a "best effort" basis, keeping in mind 
that the stream itself includes additional means to identify required 
capabilities necessary for a successful decode.

If that is not an option, we would/could need means to identify the type 
of parameters in a foreward compatible way. I.e., conventions by which 
we would identify in the future parameters a receiver can safely ignore 
and attempt to decode, and parameters a receiver cannot safely ignore.

However, I believe this is getting a bit out of hands...

> Also, the text does not say what restrictions (if any) there are when it 
> comes to modify the stream during a session. Is it allowed to modify 
> any/all characteristics?

My understanding is that you cannot modify characteristics during a 
session. If you need to modify, you need to setup a new session and 
cancel the current one. For JPEG XS stream decoders, one cannot expect 
that an instanciated decoder can decode from modified parameters in 
mid-stream level. That is, if you start decoding in full-HD, and then 
stream parameters become 8K, the decoder will have to abort.

Thanks for helping and clarifying,

Greetings,
	Thomas


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Benjamin,

Continuing the answers with the last part.,

Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:
> Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: Discuss
>
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/

> Section 3.14
>
>     The SSRC of the mixer for the RTT session SHALL be inserted in the
>     SSRC field of the RTP header.
>
> As written, this could be taken to say that the non-mixer endpoint
> should also use the SSRC of the mixer.
[GH] I suggest to change to:
" The SSRC header field SHALL contain the SSRC of the RTP session where 
the packet will be transmitted."
>
> Section 3.16
>
>     Confidentiality SHALL be considered when composing these fields.
>
> I think "privacy considerations" would be more relevant than
> "confidentiality".
[GH] Accepted. Changed to "Privacy considerations SHALL be taken..."
>
>     Similar considerations SHALL be taken as for other media.
>
> This seems rather vague and it's not really clear how the implementor is
> supposed to take action based on it.  (Note that media are typically
> straight over (S)RTP, but these reports are (S)RTCP, which admittedly is
> also over (S)RTP, but is still different.)
[GH] I propose to delete the sentence.

>
> Section 3.17.2
>
>     If it is known that only one source is active in the RTP session,
>     then it is likely that a gap equal to or larger than the agreed
>     number of redundancy generations (including the primary) causes text
>     loss.  [...]
>
> Some more care in description may be needed here, as the gap in RTP
> sequence numbers is measured in the RTP sequence units (e.g., time), but
> the redundancy generation number is just a dimensionless generation
> count.  We need to assume the max inter-packet spacing in order to
> convert that into a time value that is suitable for assuming loss.
[GH] The RTP sequence number steps by one for each new packet sent in 
the RTP session. It is the timestamp that is increased by the time.  
Real-time text is also unusual in that it can transmit with varying 
intervals and be silent when there is no new text to send. No change 
proposed.
>
>     evaluate if three or more packets were lost within one second.  If
>     this simple method is used, then a t140block SHOULD be created with a
>     marker for possible text loss [T140ad1] and associated with the SSRC
>     of the transmitter as a general input from the mixer.
>
> Does "input from the mixer" mean that it uses the mixer's SSRC value?
> Or is this injected by the mixer (in contrast to the previous paragraph,
> where it was the receiver that injects the marker for possible text
> loss)?
[GH] I suggest to change "transmitter" to "RTP session" to make it clear 
that it is the mixer.
>
> Section 3.17.3
>
>     If the packet is not the first packet from a source, then if the
>     second generation redundant data is available, its timestamp SHALL be
>     created by subtracting its timestamp offset from the RTP timestamp.
>     If the resulting timestamp is later than the latest retrieved data
>     from the same source, then the redundant data SHALL be retrieved and
>     appended to the receive buffer.  The process SHALL be continued in
>     the same way for the first generation redundant data.  After that,
>     the primary data SHALL be retrieved from the packet and appended to
>     the receive buffer for the source.
>
> I think I can come up with reordering scenarios that cause this
> procedure to discard data that would otherwise have recovered from loss.
[GH] Would it be sufficient to insert the words "and reordering" in the 
first two sentences in the paragraph to read:
"The receiver SHALL monitor the RTP sequence numbers of the received 
packets for gaps and packets out of order.
If a sequence number gap appears and still exists after some defined 
short time for jitter and reordering resolution, the packets in the gap 
SHALL be regarded as lost."
>
> Also, this procedure as written says that the primary data shall always
> be appended to the receive buffer (with no time check), which could
> result in doubled content in the case of reordering.
[GH] I suggest to change the last sentence in the paragraph to " After 
that, the timestamp of the packet SHALL be compared with the timestamp 
of the latest retrieved data from the same source and if it is later, 
then the primary data SHALL be retrieved from the packet and appended to 
the receive buffer for the source."
>
> Section 3.19
>
>     Security SHOULD be applied when possible regarding the capabilities
>     of the participating devices by use of SIP over TLS by default
>
> "Security" is not some all-encompassing attribute that can be
> generically applied; there are specific security properties that may or
> may not be achieved by any given mechanism, and it's generally worth
> being precise about what properties are (or are not) achieved.  So here
> we might say "security mechanisms to provide confidentiality and
> integrity protection and peer authentication SHOULD be applied".  We
> cannot in general achieve source authenticity with just SRTP when a
> mixer is involved, though RFC 8723 does specify a double-encryption
> mechanism that applies in some cases when there is a central media
> distributor.
[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.
>
>                                                               In
>     applications where legacy endpoints without security may exist, a
>     negotiation SHOULD be performed to decide if encryption on the media
>     level will be applied.  [...]
>
> How would endpoints know if legacy endpoints might exist?
[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.
>
> How would this negotiation be performed?
[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.
>
>     security levels.  The mixing for conference-unaware endpoints has
>     lower security level than the mixing method for conference-aware
>     endpoints, because there may be an opportunity for a malicious mixer
>     or a middleman to masquerade the source labels accompanying the text
>     streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
>     encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
>     in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware
>     endpoints as specified here also requires that the mixer can be
>     trusted.  [...]
>
> As the last sentence indicates, the provided reasoning in the first
> sentence is not really accurate, since the mixer could just as easily
> adjust the CSRC value in the header as change the label in the in-band
> text stream.  This does not inherently invalidate the claim that there
> are different security levels, though, as the correct behavior of the
> mixer seems easier to independently validate in the conference-aware
> endpoint case (with the well-formed RTP payloads providing information
> that can be validated out-of-band with other participants).  But I don't
> think this description should be left in the document as-is; it doesn't
> seem accurate.
>
> In the case of unencrypted media, it does seem technically true that it
> is easier for a non-mixer middleman to masquerade the source labels,
> since in that case it only adjusts the payload directly without needing
> to keep state on the RTP sender information and produce well-formed RTP
> headers after its adjustment.  But this is only a modest level of
> additional difficulty and does not reflect any kind of effective
> security control, so it may not be worth mentioning at all.
[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.
>
>     End-to-end encryption would require further work and could be based
>     on WebRTC as specified in Section 1.2.
>
> Is RFC 8723 not applicable to these scenarios at all?  I do not think it
> is WebRTC-specific.
[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.
>
> Section 3.21
>
>            Transmission of A2 and A3 as redundancy is planned for 330 ms
>     after packet 101 if no new text from A is ready to be sent before
>     that.
>
> I thought new text from *anyone* would trigger sending A2 and A3 as
> redundancy, per §3.9.
[GH] No, since A2 and A3 sent as redundancy only can be sent alone or 
together with new text from A, they should only be triggered to be sent 
when new text from A has arrived or the current transmission interval 
since last transmission from A has passed. I hope that is clear from 
"3.5 Only one source per packet."
>
>
> Is there any reason why the dummy offsets in 104 are 300/600 but the
> dummy offsets in 103 are 330/660?
[GH] There are dummy offsets in 102, 104 and 105. The ones which can be 
analyzed for the values are the ones in 104 and 105. They have the same 
values as they would have if there was redundancy on that level 
available for transmission at that time. Since the value is irrelevant, 
that is just one way to assign a "realistic" value.
>
> Section 4.2
>
>                 In order to expedite source switching, a user can, for
>     example, end its turn with a new line.
>
> How would a user know that there is a legacy endpoint in the coversation
> so as to choose to end its turn in this way?
[GH] It can be from experience or education. The first implementations 
are expected to be in emergency services, where the calling users in 
emergency may get multiparty-aware clients later than the emergency 
service call- takers. The call-takers can then be educated from the 
beginning to end their turns with a new line to expedite the switch so 
that new text from the caller is rapidly presented to another person in 
the service observing, or taking over the call. It is also quite normal 
in modern text communication, both real-time and messaging, to end turn 
with a new line.
>
> Section 4.2.2
>
>     *  A long pause (e.g., > 10 seconds) in received text from the
>        currently transmitted source
>
>     *  If text from one participant has been transmitted with text from
>        other sources waiting for transmission for a long time (e.g., > 1
>        minute) and none of the other suitable points for switching has
>
> I think I'm confused how we could hit the 1 minute timer before the 10
> seconds timer has triggered.
[GH] If one user is generating text continously, e.g. making a live 
transcription of someone making a speech, then it may happen that the 
text neither has full stop anywhere, nor any pause longer than 10 
seconds appears within one minute or more. In that situation it is fair 
that waiting text is allowed to break in and be given turn.
>
> Section 11
>
> I think that the obvious attacks involving control characters are
> addressed in one way or another, but it might be worth a reminder to
> implementors that control characters should not be allowed to let one
> user's content affect the display of other users' content, or the
> presentation-format's label of the sender, etc.

[GH] I suggest to insert in section 11:

"      Participants with malicious intentions may also try to disturb 
the presentation by sending incomplete or malformed control codes. 
Handling of text from the different sources by the receivers MUST 
therefore be well separated so that the effects of such actions only 
affect text from the source causing the action. "


>
> It might be appropriate to have yet another reminder here that SRTP is
> the recommended mode of operation.
[GH] I suggest to insert the following in section 11:
"As already stated in <xref target="security2" format="default"/>, 
security in media SHOULD be applied by using DTLS-SRTP <xref 
target="RFC5764" format="default"/> on the media level."
>
>     The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
>     reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
>     notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
>     already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], [...]
>
> Could you point me to where this is stated in RFC 3550?  I looked in the
> security considerations (section 14) and searched for all instances of
> "CNAME", but didn't see discussion about SDES/CNAME/NAME being privacy
> sensitive.
[GH] In RFC 3550, sentences 2 and 3, it is said: "

For example, an impostor can fake source or destination
    network addresses, or change the header or payload.  Within RTCP, the
    CNAME and NAME information may be used to impersonate another
    participant. "

>
> Section 13.1
>
> RFC 8825 is not currently referenced in any context that specifically
> requires it to be listed as a normative reference.  This may suggest
> that it should be referenced in more places (e.g., in the discussion of
> gateway considerations with WebRTC).
[GH] I think it is sufficient to reference RFC 8865 in the WebRTC 
gateway section. Therefore my proposal is to move the reference to RFC 
8825 to informational.
>
> NITS
>
> Section 1
>
>     Use of RTT is increasing, and specifically, use in emergency calls is
>     increasing.  Emergency call use requires multiparty mixing.  [...]
>
> I expect the conclusion that emergency-call use requires mixing to be
> non-intuitive to many readers, so additional explanation might be
> helpful.
[GH] I propose extending the sentence to: " Emergency call use requires 
multiparty mixing because it is common that one agent needs to transfer 
the call to another specialized agent but is obliged to stay on the call 
at least to verify that the transfer was successful. "
>
>                                                                  RFC 4103
>     "RTP Payload for Text Conversation" mixer implementations can use
>     traditional RTP functions for source identification, but the
>
> The word "mixer" (or even "mix") does not appear in RFC 4103, so I'm not
> sure how to interpret "RFC 4103 mixer implementations".  Perhaps it is
> an RFC 3550 mixer acting on RFC 4103 payloads?
[GH] I do not think that other RTP payload type specifications specify 
how RTP mixing shall be applied either. It is just assumed that RFC 3550 
RTP mixing is used. Anyway, I suggest to change the sentence to: "Mixer 
implementations for RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation" can use 
traditional RFC 3550 RTP functions for mixing and source identification."
>
>     The document updates [RFC4103] by introducing an attribute for
>     indicating capability for the RTP-mixer-based multiparty mixing case
>     and rules for source indications and interleaving of text from
>     different sources.
>
> I think "indicating capability for the RTP-mixer-based multiparty mixing
> case" needs another verb.
[GH] My non-English background makes me not realize the problem. Will it 
be better with "declaring support of" instead of "indicating capability 
for". If so, there may be a couple of other places where similar wording 
should be changed.
>
> Section 2.2
>
>     A party acting as a mixer, which has not negotiated any method for
>     true multiparty RTT handling, but negotiated a "text/red" or "text/
>     t140" format in a session with a participant SHOULD in order to
>     maintain interoperability, if nothing else is specified for the
>     application, format transmitted text to that participant to be
>     suitable to present on a multiparty-unaware endpoint as further
>     specified in Section 4.2.
>
> comma after "SHOULD".
> The whole sentence is a bit long, though, and the parenthetical "if
> nothing else is specified for the application" is somewhat in the way in
> its current location.  Further reworking may be in order.
[GH] I propose to change to:
"A mixer SHOULD by default format and transmit text to a call 
participant to be suitable to present on a multiparty-unaware endpoint 
which has not negotiated any method for true multiparty RTT handling, 
but negotiated a "text/red" or "text/t140" format in a session. This 
SHOULD be done if nothing else is specified for the application in order 
to maintain interoperability. Section 4.2 specifies how this mixing is 
done."
>
> I'd also consider s/format transmitted text/transmit formatted text/ or
> /format text transmitted/.
[GH] Included above
>
> Section 2.3.4
>
>     If the modified offer deletes indication of support for multiparty
>     real-time text by excluding the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute, the answer
>     MUST NOT contain the "rtt-mixer" attribute, and both parties SHALL
>     after processing the SDP exchange NOT send real-time text formatted
>     for multiparty-aware parties according to this specification.
>
> The BCP 14 keyword "SHALL NOT" is supposed to appear as the specific
> phrase, so something like "SHALL NOT, after processing the SDP exchange,
> send" seems more appropriate.
[GH] I propose to change to:
"If the modified offer deletes indication of support for multiparty 
real-time text by excluding the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute, the answer 
MUST NOT contain the "rtt-mixer" attribute. After processing this SDP 
exchange, the parties MUST NOT send real-time text formatted for 
multiparty-aware parties according to this specification."
>
> Section 3.4
>
>     transmission MUST then be made at T140block borders.  See also
>     Section 8
>
> full stop at end of sentence.
[GH] Accepted.
>
> Section 3.10
>
>     The mixer SHALL compose and transmit an RTP packet to a receiver when
>     one of the following conditions has occurred:
>
> Maybe "one or more" (or "one or both")?
[GH] Accepted.
>
> Section 3.16
>
>     Confidentiality SHALL be considered when composing these fields.
>     They contain name and address information that may be sensitive to
>     transmit in its entirety e.g., to unauthenticated participants.
>
> comma before "e.g." (as well as after)
[GH] Accepted.
>
> Section 3.17
>
>     presentation areas for each source.  Other receiver roles, such as
>     gateways or chained mixers are also feasible, and requires
>     consideration if the stream shall just be forwarded, or distributed
>
> "such as gateways or chained mixers" seems like a parenthetical phrase
> that should be offset by commas on both sides.
[GH] Accepted.
>
> Also, "require consideration" seems to match up better with the plural
> "roles".
[GH] I suggest to start a new sentence "They require considerations..."
>
> Section 3.17.3
>
>     When a packet is received in an RTP session using the packetization
>     for multiparty-aware endpoints, its T140blocks SHALL be extracted in
>     the following way.  The description is adapted to the default
>     redundancy case using the original and two redundant generations.
>
> Is this supposed to imply that the extension to the generic case with
> other levels of redundancy is trivial for the reader to perform?
[GH] Yes. Should that be indicated?
>
> Section 3.18
>
>     This solution has good performance with low text delays as long as
>     the sum of characters per second during any 10-second interval sent
>     from a number of simultaneously sending participants to a receiving
>     participant does not reach the 'CPS' value.  [...]
>
> "sum of characters per second during any 10-second interval" seems to
> mean "compute CPS for each second, then add them up".  I don't think
> that's the intended meaning.
[GH] I suggest: "as long as the mean number of characters per second 
sent during any 10-second interval from a number of simultaneously 
sending participants to a receiving participant, does not reach the 
'CPS' value."
>
>                                     Only in large unmanaged conferences
>     with a high number of participants there may on very rare occasions
>     appear situations when many participants happen to send text
>     simultaneously, resulting in unpleasantly jerky presentation of text
>     from each sending participant.  [...]
>
> This sentence seems a bit long and winding.
[GH] I suggest to divide to: "Only in large unmanaged conferences with a 
high number of participants there may on very rare occasions appear 
situations when many participants happen to send text simultaneously. In 
such circumstances, the result may be unpleasantly jerky presentation of 
text from each sending participant."
>
> Section 3.20
>
>        Offer example for "text/red" format including multiparty
>        and security:
>              a=fingerprint: (fingerprint1)
>
> I think it would be preferred to make up some random fingerprints and
> use them instead of the placeholder string (throughout).
[GH] I had the opposite reaction in an earlier review, when I had random 
fingerprints. I suggest to keep as is.
>
> Section 3.21
>
>     offset 660 ms.  The timestamp of packet 106 minus 660 is 20500 which
>     is the timestamp of packet 102 THAT was received.  So B1 does not
>
> I don't see why "THAT" needs to be in all majuscule letters.
[GH] Right. Accepted.
>
> Section 3.22
>
>     to transmission to a receiver.  The value MAY be modified in the
>     "CPS" parameter of the FMTP attribute in the media section for the
>     "text/t140" media.  [...]
>
> RFC 4103 seems to show the lowercase "cps" parameter name (there are
> subsequent occurrences that I do not quote).
[GH] Thanks , all changed to lower case.
>
> Section 4.2
>
>     one presentation area.  The mixer SHALL group text in suitable groups
>     and prepare for presentation of them by inserting a new line between
>     them if the transmitted text did not already end with a new line.  A
>
> Is "new line" specified somewhere?  Up in toplevel §4 we cover the
> unicode line separator and CRLF sequences but don't use the phrase "new
> line".
[GH] "new line (line separator or CRLF)" is used in a number of places. 
I suggest to modify this one to:
"the mixer SHALL insert a line separator if the already transmitted text 
did not end with a new line (line separator or CRLF)"
>
> Section 4.2.2
>
>     Information available to the mixer for composing the label may
>     contain sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in
>
> "SHOULD NOT" in all caps
[GH]Accepted
>
>     sessions not securely authenticated and protected.  Integrity
>
> "confidentiality protected"
[GH] Accepted
>
>     considerations regarding how much personal information is included in
>     the label SHOULD therefore be taken when composing the label.
>
> I don't think "integrity" is the right word here.
[GH] Change to "Privacy" is proposed.
>
> Section 11
>
>     Therefore, the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in
>     confidentiality and integrity.  [...]
>
> s/trusted to achieve security in confidentiality and integrity/trusted
> to maintain confidentiality and integrity of the RTT data/
[GH] Accepted
>
>     The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
>     reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
>     notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
>
> There's something awry with the commas around "for creation of labels".
[GH] I suggest to split in two sentences: "**When used for creation of 
readable labels in the presentation, the receiving user will then get a 
more symbolic label for the source."


[GH]Again, thanks for a thorough review and many good proposals for changes.

Regards

Gunnar

-- 
Gunnar Hellström
GHAccess
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se


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    <p>Benjamin,</p>
    <p>Continuing the answers with the last part.,<br>
    </p>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev
      Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: Discuss

The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/</a></pre>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Section 3.14

   The SSRC of the mixer for the RTT session SHALL be inserted in the
   SSRC field of the RTP header.

As written, this could be taken to say that the non-mixer endpoint
should also use the SSRC of the mixer.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to change to:<br>
      " The SSRC header field SHALL contain the SSRC of the RTP session
      where the packet will be transmitted."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.16

   Confidentiality SHALL be considered when composing these fields.

I think "privacy considerations" would be more relevant than
"confidentiality".</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted. Changed to "Privacy
      considerations SHALL be taken..."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   Similar considerations SHALL be taken as for other media.

This seems rather vague and it's not really clear how the implementor is
supposed to take action based on it.  (Note that media are typically
straight over (S)RTP, but these reports are (S)RTCP, which admittedly is
also over (S)RTP, but is still different.)</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I propose to delete the sentence.<br>
    </font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.17.2

   If it is known that only one source is active in the RTP session,
   then it is likely that a gap equal to or larger than the agreed
   number of redundancy generations (including the primary) causes text
   loss.  [...]

Some more care in description may be needed here, as the gap in RTP
sequence numbers is measured in the RTP sequence units (e.g., time), but
the redundancy generation number is just a dimensionless generation
count.  We need to assume the max inter-packet spacing in order to
convert that into a time value that is suitable for assuming loss.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] The RTP sequence number steps by one for
      each new packet sent in the RTP session. It is the timestamp that
      is increased by the time.  Real-time text is also unusual in that
      it can transmit with varying intervals and be silent when there is
      no new text to send. No change proposed.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   evaluate if three or more packets were lost within one second.  If
   this simple method is used, then a t140block SHOULD be created with a
   marker for possible text loss [T140ad1] and associated with the SSRC
   of the transmitter as a general input from the mixer.

Does "input from the mixer" mean that it uses the mixer's SSRC value?
Or is this injected by the mixer (in contrast to the previous paragraph,
where it was the receiver that injects the marker for possible text
loss)?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to change "transmitter" to "RTP
      session" to make it clear that it is the mixer.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.17.3

   If the packet is not the first packet from a source, then if the
   second generation redundant data is available, its timestamp SHALL be
   created by subtracting its timestamp offset from the RTP timestamp.
   If the resulting timestamp is later than the latest retrieved data
   from the same source, then the redundant data SHALL be retrieved and
   appended to the receive buffer.  The process SHALL be continued in
   the same way for the first generation redundant data.  After that,
   the primary data SHALL be retrieved from the packet and appended to
   the receive buffer for the source.

I think I can come up with reordering scenarios that cause this
procedure to discard data that would otherwise have recovered from loss.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Would it be sufficient to insert the
      words "and reordering" in the first two sentences in the paragraph
      to read: <br>
      "The receiver SHALL monitor the RTP sequence numbers of the
      received packets for gaps and packets out of order.<br>
      If a sequence number gap appears and still exists after some
      defined short time for jitter <font color="#ff0000">and
        reordering</font> resolution, the packets in the gap SHALL be
      regarded as lost."<br>
    </font>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Also, this procedure as written says that the primary data shall always
be appended to the receive buffer (with no time check), which could
result in doubled content in the case of reordering.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to change the last sentence in
      the paragraph to " After that, the timestamp of the packet SHALL
      be compared with the timestamp of the latest retrieved data from
      the same source and if it is later, then the primary data SHALL be
      retrieved from the packet and appended to the receive buffer for
      the source."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.19

   Security SHOULD be applied when possible regarding the capabilities
   of the participating devices by use of SIP over TLS by default

"Security" is not some all-encompassing attribute that can be
generically applied; there are specific security properties that may or
may not be achieved by any given mechanism, and it's generally worth
being precise about what properties are (or are not) achieved.  So here
we might say "security mechanisms to provide confidentiality and
integrity protection and peer authentication SHOULD be applied".  We
cannot in general achieve source authenticity with just SRTP when a
mixer is involved, though RFC 8723 does specify a double-encryption
mechanism that applies in some cases when there is a central media
distributor.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

                                                             In
   applications where legacy endpoints without security may exist, a
   negotiation SHOULD be performed to decide if encryption on the media
   level will be applied.  [...]

How would endpoints know if legacy endpoints might exist?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.</font>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

How would this negotiation be performed?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.</font>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   security levels.  The mixing for conference-unaware endpoints has
   lower security level than the mixing method for conference-aware
   endpoints, because there may be an opportunity for a malicious mixer
   or a middleman to masquerade the source labels accompanying the text
   streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
   encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
   in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware
   endpoints as specified here also requires that the mixer can be
   trusted.  [...]

As the last sentence indicates, the provided reasoning in the first
sentence is not really accurate, since the mixer could just as easily
adjust the CSRC value in the header as change the label in the in-band
text stream.  This does not inherently invalidate the claim that there
are different security levels, though, as the correct behavior of the
mixer seems easier to independently validate in the conference-aware
endpoint case (with the well-formed RTP payloads providing information
that can be validated out-of-band with other participants).  But I don't
think this description should be left in the document as-is; it doesn't
seem accurate.

In the case of unencrypted media, it does seem technically true that it
is easier for a non-mixer middleman to masquerade the source labels,
since in that case it only adjusts the payload directly without needing
to keep state on the RTP sender information and produce well-formed RTP
headers after its adjustment.  But this is only a modest level of
additional difficulty and does not reflect any kind of effective
security control, so it may not be worth mentioning at all.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.</font>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   End-to-end encryption would require further work and could be based
   on WebRTC as specified in Section 1.2.

Is RFC 8723 not applicable to these scenarios at all?  I do not think it
is WebRTC-specific.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Answered in the DISCUSS part.</font>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.21

          Transmission of A2 and A3 as redundancy is planned for 330 ms
   after packet 101 if no new text from A is ready to be sent before
   that.

I thought new text from *anyone* would trigger sending A2 and A3 as
redundancy, per §3.9.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] No, since A2 and A3 sent as redundancy
      only can be sent alone or together with new text from A, they
      should only be triggered to be sent when new text from A has
      arrived or the current transmission interval since last
      transmission from A has passed. I hope that is clear from "3.5
      Only one source per packet."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">


Is there any reason why the dummy offsets in 104 are 300/600 but the
dummy offsets in 103 are 330/660?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] There are dummy offsets in 102, 104 and
      105. The ones which can be analyzed for the values are the ones in
      104 and 105. They have the same values as they would have if there
      was redundancy on that level available for transmission at that
      time. Since the value is irrelevant, that is just one way to
      assign a "realistic" value.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 4.2

               In order to expedite source switching, a user can, for
   example, end its turn with a new line.

How would a user know that there is a legacy endpoint in the coversation
so as to choose to end its turn in this way?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] It can be from experience or education.
      The first implementations are expected to be in emergency
      services, where the calling users in emergency may get
      multiparty-aware clients later than the emergency service call-
      takers. The call-takers can then be educated from the beginning to
      end their turns with a new line to expedite the switch so that new
      text from the caller is rapidly presented to another person in the
      service observing, or taking over the call. It is also quite
      normal in modern text communication, both real-time and messaging,
      to end turn with a new line.</font> <br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 4.2.2

   *  A long pause (e.g., &gt; 10 seconds) in received text from the
      currently transmitted source

   *  If text from one participant has been transmitted with text from
      other sources waiting for transmission for a long time (e.g., &gt; 1
      minute) and none of the other suitable points for switching has

I think I'm confused how we could hit the 1 minute timer before the 10
seconds timer has triggered.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] If one user is generating text
      continously, e.g. making a live transcription of someone making a
      speech, then it may happen that the text neither has full stop
      anywhere, nor any pause longer than 10 seconds appears within one
      minute or more. In that situation it is fair that waiting text is
      allowed to break in and be given turn.</font>  <br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 11

I think that the obvious attacks involving control characters are
addressed in one way or another, but it might be worth a reminder to
implementors that control characters should not be allowed to let one
user's content affect the display of other users' content, or the
presentation-format's label of the sender, etc.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to insert in section 11:</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">"      Participants with malicious
        intentions may also try to disturb the presentation by sending
        incomplete or malformed control codes. Handling of text from the
        different sources by the receivers MUST therefore be well
        separated so that the effects of such actions only affect text
        from the source causing the action. "</font><br>
            <br>
            <br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

It might be appropriate to have yet another reminder here that SRTP is
the recommended mode of operation.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to insert the following in
      section 11:<br>
      "As already stated in &lt;xref target="security2"
      format="default"/&gt;, security in media SHOULD be applied by
      using DTLS-SRTP &lt;xref target="RFC5764" format="default"/&gt; on
      the media level."</font>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
   reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
   notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as
   already stated in RFC 3550 [RFC3550], [...]

Could you point me to where this is stated in RFC 3550?  I looked in the
security considerations (section 14) and searched for all instances of
"CNAME", but didn't see discussion about SDES/CNAME/NAME being privacy
sensitive.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    [GH] In RFC 3550, sentences 2 and 3, it is said: "<br>
    <pre class="newpage" style="font-size: 13.3333px; margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; break-before: page; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial;">For example, an impostor can fake source or destination
   network addresses, or change the header or payload.  Within RTCP, the
   CNAME and NAME information may be used to impersonate another
   participant. "</pre>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 13.1

RFC 8825 is not currently referenced in any context that specifically
requires it to be listed as a normative reference.  This may suggest
that it should be referenced in more places (e.g., in the discussion of
gateway considerations with WebRTC).</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I think it is sufficient to reference RFC
      8865 in the WebRTC gateway section. Therefore my proposal is to
      move the reference to RFC 8825 to informational.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

NITS

Section 1

   Use of RTT is increasing, and specifically, use in emergency calls is
   increasing.  Emergency call use requires multiparty mixing.  [...]

I expect the conclusion that emergency-call use requires mixing to be
non-intuitive to many readers, so additional explanation might be
helpful.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I propose extending the sentence to: "
      Emergency call use requires multiparty mixing because it is common
      that one agent needs to transfer the call to another specialized
      agent but is obliged to stay on the call at least to verify that
      the transfer was successful. "</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

                                                                RFC 4103
   "RTP Payload for Text Conversation" mixer implementations can use
   traditional RTP functions for source identification, but the

The word "mixer" (or even "mix") does not appear in RFC 4103, so I'm not
sure how to interpret "RFC 4103 mixer implementations".  Perhaps it is
an RFC 3550 mixer acting on RFC 4103 payloads?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I do not think that other RTP payload
      type specifications specify how RTP mixing shall be applied
      either. It is just assumed that RFC 3550 RTP mixing is used.
      Anyway, I suggest to change the sentence to: "Mixer
      implementations for RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation"
      can use traditional RFC 3550 RTP functions for mixing and source
      identification."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   The document updates [RFC4103] by introducing an attribute for
   indicating capability for the RTP-mixer-based multiparty mixing case
   and rules for source indications and interleaving of text from
   different sources.

I think "indicating capability for the RTP-mixer-based multiparty mixing
case" needs another verb.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] My non-English background makes me not
      realize the problem. Will it be better with "declaring support of"
      instead of "indicating capability for". If so, there may be a
      couple of other places where similar wording should be changed.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 2.2

   A party acting as a mixer, which has not negotiated any method for
   true multiparty RTT handling, but negotiated a "text/red" or "text/
   t140" format in a session with a participant SHOULD in order to
   maintain interoperability, if nothing else is specified for the
   application, format transmitted text to that participant to be
   suitable to present on a multiparty-unaware endpoint as further
   specified in Section 4.2.

comma after "SHOULD".
The whole sentence is a bit long, though, and the parenthetical "if
nothing else is specified for the application" is somewhat in the way in
its current location.  Further reworking may be in order.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    [GH] I propose to change to: <br>
    "A mixer SHOULD by default format and transmit text to a call
    participant to be suitable to present on a multiparty-unaware
    endpoint which has not negotiated any method for true multiparty RTT
    handling, but negotiated a "text/red" or "text/t140" format in a
    session. This SHOULD be done if nothing else is specified for the
    application in order to maintain interoperability. Section 4.2
    specifies how this mixing is done."<br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

I'd also consider s/format transmitted text/transmit formatted text/ or
/format text transmitted/.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Included above</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 2.3.4

   If the modified offer deletes indication of support for multiparty
   real-time text by excluding the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute, the answer
   MUST NOT contain the "rtt-mixer" attribute, and both parties SHALL
   after processing the SDP exchange NOT send real-time text formatted
   for multiparty-aware parties according to this specification.

The BCP 14 keyword "SHALL NOT" is supposed to appear as the specific
phrase, so something like "SHALL NOT, after processing the SDP exchange,
send" seems more appropriate.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    [GH] I propose to change to:<br>
    "If the modified offer deletes indication of support for multiparty
    real-time text by excluding the "rtt-mixer" SDP attribute, the
    answer MUST NOT contain the "rtt-mixer" attribute. After processing
    this SDP exchange, the parties MUST NOT send real-time text
    formatted for multiparty-aware parties according to this
    specification."<br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.4

   transmission MUST then be made at T140block borders.  See also
   Section 8

full stop at end of sentence.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.10

   The mixer SHALL compose and transmit an RTP packet to a receiver when
   one of the following conditions has occurred:

Maybe "one or more" (or "one or both")?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted. </font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.16

   Confidentiality SHALL be considered when composing these fields.
   They contain name and address information that may be sensitive to
   transmit in its entirety e.g., to unauthenticated participants.

comma before "e.g." (as well as after)</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.17

   presentation areas for each source.  Other receiver roles, such as
   gateways or chained mixers are also feasible, and requires
   consideration if the stream shall just be forwarded, or distributed

"such as gateways or chained mixers" seems like a parenthetical phrase
that should be offset by commas on both sides.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Also, "require consideration" seems to match up better with the plural
"roles".</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to start a new sentence "They
      require considerations..."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.17.3

   When a packet is received in an RTP session using the packetization
   for multiparty-aware endpoints, its T140blocks SHALL be extracted in
   the following way.  The description is adapted to the default
   redundancy case using the original and two redundant generations.

Is this supposed to imply that the extension to the generic case with
other levels of redundancy is trivial for the reader to perform?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Yes. Should that be indicated?</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.18

   This solution has good performance with low text delays as long as
   the sum of characters per second during any 10-second interval sent
   from a number of simultaneously sending participants to a receiving
   participant does not reach the 'CPS' value.  [...]

"sum of characters per second during any 10-second interval" seems to
mean "compute CPS for each second, then add them up".  I don't think
that's the intended meaning.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest: "as long as the mean number of
      characters per second sent during any 10-second interval from a
      number of simultaneously sending participants to a receiving
      participant, does not reach the 'CPS' value."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

                                   Only in large unmanaged conferences
   with a high number of participants there may on very rare occasions
   appear situations when many participants happen to send text
   simultaneously, resulting in unpleasantly jerky presentation of text
   from each sending participant.  [...]

This sentence seems a bit long and winding.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to divide to: "Only in large
      unmanaged conferences with a high number of participants there may
      on very rare occasions appear situations when many participants
      happen to send text simultaneously. In such circumstances, the
      result may be unpleasantly jerky presentation of text from each
      sending participant."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.20

      Offer example for "text/red" format including multiparty
      and security:
            a=fingerprint: (fingerprint1)

I think it would be preferred to make up some random fingerprints and
use them instead of the placeholder string (throughout).</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I had the opposite reaction in an earlier
      review, when I had random fingerprints. I suggest to keep as is.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.21

   offset 660 ms.  The timestamp of packet 106 minus 660 is 20500 which
   is the timestamp of packet 102 THAT was received.  So B1 does not

I don't see why "THAT" needs to be in all majuscule letters.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Right. Accepted.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 3.22

   to transmission to a receiver.  The value MAY be modified in the
   "CPS" parameter of the FMTP attribute in the media section for the
   "text/t140" media.  [...]

RFC 4103 seems to show the lowercase "cps" parameter name (there are
subsequent occurrences that I do not quote).</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Thanks , all changed to lower case.</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 4.2

   one presentation area.  The mixer SHALL group text in suitable groups
   and prepare for presentation of them by inserting a new line between
   them if the transmitted text did not already end with a new line.  A

Is "new line" specified somewhere?  Up in toplevel §4 we cover the
unicode line separator and CRLF sequences but don't use the phrase "new
line".</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] "new line (line separator or CRLF)" is
      used in a number of places. I suggest to modify this one to: <br>
      "the mixer SHALL insert a line separator if the already
      transmitted text did not end with a new line (line separator or
      CRLF)"</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 4.2.2

   Information available to the mixer for composing the label may
   contain sensitive personal information that SHOULD not be revealed in

"SHOULD NOT" in all caps</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH]Accepted</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   sessions not securely authenticated and protected.  Integrity

"confidentiality protected"</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   considerations regarding how much personal information is included in
   the label SHOULD therefore be taken when composing the label.

I don't think "integrity" is the right word here.</pre>
    </blockquote>
    [GH] Change to "Privacy" is proposed.<br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

Section 11

   Therefore, the mixer needs to be trusted to achieve security in
   confidentiality and integrity.  [...]

s/trusted to achieve security in confidentiality and integrity/trusted
to maintain confidentiality and integrity of the RTT data/</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] Accepted</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">

   The requirement to transfer information about the user in RTCP
   reports in SDES, CNAME, and NAME fields, and in conference
   notifications, for creation of labels may have privacy concerns as

There's something awry with the commas around "for creation of labels".
<font color="#800000">
</font></pre>
    </blockquote>
    <font color="#800000">[GH] I suggest to split in two sentences: "<b>
      </b>When used for creation of readable labels in the presentation,
      the receiving user will then get a more symbolic label for the
      source."</font><br>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <p><font color="#800000"><br>
      </font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">[GH]Again, thanks for a thorough review and
        many good proposals for changes.</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">Regards</font></p>
    <p><font color="#800000">Gunnar</font><br>
    </p>
    <blockquote type="cite"
      cite="mid:162139279927.706.12647899386073526674@ietfa.amsl.com">
      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <pre class="moz-signature" cols="72">-- 
Gunnar Hellström
GHAccess
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a></pre>
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Francesca,

I am preparing a new version, with actions on your comments.

Den 2021-05-18 kl. 22:34, skrev Francesca Palombini via Datatracker:
> Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-18: No Objection
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> Thank you for the work on this document. I have some minor non-blocking
> comments (feel free to take them or leave them), but I'd like some response to
> point 6. about the normative MUST.
>
> Francesca
>
> 1. -----
>
> FP: Please expand acronyms (CSRC, SDP, BOM, PSTN,...) on first use.
[GH] Done
>
> 2. -----
>
>        Since
>        simultaneous typing by more than two parties is very rare, this
>        method can be used successfully with good performance.  Recovery
>
> FP: I had question on this point, i.e. how was it evaluated that simultaneous
> typing by more than two parties is very rare, but that was answered in section
> 1.3 Intended application - so I would suggest adding a forward reference to
> that section in the paragraph quoted above.
[GH] Accepted.
>
> 3. -----
>
>     text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
>     by use of an SDP media attribute "rtt-mixer".
>
> FP: Please add a reference to RFC 8866.
[GH] Accepted
>
> 4. -----
>
>     streams in text format.  This is especially true if support of un-
>     encrypted SIP and media is supported because of lack of such support
>     in the target endpoints.  However, the mixing for conference-aware
>
> FP: I have a problem parsing this sentence "... if support ... is supported
> because of lack of such support"
[GH] Simplified wording applied
>
> 5. -----
>
>     is the timestamp of packet 102 THAT was received.  So B1 does not
>
> FP: nit - all capitals THAT.
[GH]Changed to lower case.
> 6. -----
>
>     the stream.  Some of them are optional.  Implementations MUST be able
>     to ignore optional control codes that they do not support.
>
> FP: I am really unsure how this MUST can be verified for interoperability.
> Maybe this does not need to be a BCP 14 MUST?
[GH] Changed as adviced by Spencer Dawkins and agreed by Francesca.
>
> 7. -----
>
>      |                                              | |
>      |(mix)[Bob)] Bob as well.                       | |
>
> FP: one space character too much
[GH] Done

Thanks,

Gunnar

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Robert,

Thanks for your review, please see answers inline.

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> Hi,
>
> Thanks for this document.  This document is quite a long way from my core
> knowledge base, so I'm not sure whether there is much that I can really add.
> It doesn't seem to have any obvious manageability concerns.
>
> I was initially surprised by the capability exchange mechanism
> (offer/exchange), in that if both offeror and receiver could support multiple
> options then it is always the the receiver that decides which to use (by only
> selecting one).  I think that this is probably fine.  I don't know which
> parties generally initiate these exchanges, and whether there is ever a case
> where both offeror and receiver support multiple options where it would be
> beneficial for the offeror to make the final decision as to which should be
> used (e.g., when coordinating between more than two devices).
[GH] Since we do not currently have another multiparty method, it is 
hard to say if it would be suitable to answer that both are supported. 
It is a risk that allowing both simultaneously would cause confusion. 
Therefore I prefer to keep it as it is.
>
> As one minor nit, I would have preferred to see section 1.2, "Selected solution
> and considered alternatives" as an appendix.  I wasn't convinced that it is
> core to understanding this document, but I'm happy to leave it to the authors
> discretion as to whether they should move it, or leave it where it is.

[GH] You have a point in that view. However, another reviewer reported 
that it was very goog to find this information up-front. So, with some 
hesitation, I select to let the alternatives section stay where it is.


Thanks,

Gunnar

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Roman,

Thank you for the review,

please see answers inline,

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> Thank you to Rich Salz for the SECDIR review.
>
> ** Section 11.  Per “Participants with malicious intentions may appear ...”,
> this text seems to be describing an attacker that is party to the call.  If the
> mitigations suggested in the next sentence (i.e., secure signaling ... and
> authentication) aren’t present, this style of attack may also be possible by an
> on-path attacker as might be simple eavesdropping or injection of arbitrary
> content.
[GH] I added this sentence in section 11: "Care should be taken that if 
use of the mixer is allowed for users both with and without security 
procedures, opens for possible attacks by both unauthenticated call 
participants and even eavesdropping and manipulating of content 
non-participants."
>
> ** Section 11. Would the caution of the mixer not revealing that a user is
> hearing or speech impaired noted in Section 8 of RFC5194 apply here too?
[GH] Yes. How about inserting this sentence in section 8: " The services 
available through the RTT mixer may have special interest for deaf and 
hard-of-hearing persons. Some users may want to refrain from revealing 
such characteristics broadly in conferences. The design of the 
conference systems where the mixer is included MAY need to be made with 
confidentiality of such characteristics in mind."

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP-mixer formatting of multiparty Real-time text
        Author          : Gunnar Hellstrom
	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-19.txt
	Pages           : 49
	Date            : 2021-05-25

Abstract:
   This document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text
   mixing suitable for a centralized conference model that enables
   source identification and rapidly interleaved transmission of text
   from different sources.  The intended use is for real-time text
   mixers and participant endpoints capable of providing an efficient
   presentation or other treatment of a multiparty real-time text
   session.  The specified mechanism builds on the standard use of the
   Contributing Source (CSRC) list in the Realtime Protocol (RTP) packet
   for source identification.  The method makes use of the same "text/
   t140" and "text/red" formats as for two-party sessions.

   Solutions using multiple RTP streams in the same RTP session are
   briefly mentioned, as they could have some benefits over the RTP-
   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

   A capability exchange is specified so that it can be verified that a
   mixer and a participant can handle the multiparty-coded real-time
   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an RFC 8866 Session Description Protocol (SDP) media
   attribute "rtt-mixer".

   The document updates RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation".

   A specification of how a mixer can format text for the case when the
   endpoint is not multiparty-aware is also provided.


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Name:		draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix
Revision:	19
Title:		RTP-mixer formatting of multiparty Real-time text
Document date:	2021-05-25
Group:		avtcore
Pages:		49
URL:https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-19.txt
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Hi Gunnar,

On Tue, May 25, 2021 at 12:29:51PM +0200, Gunnar Hellstrm wrote:
> Benjamin,
> 
> Continuing the answers with the last part.,

Thank you for going through them all.  To be clear, I was not waiting for
you to finish before I started replying -- I just had a deadline earlier
today and did not have a chance to do much with my email sooner.  Having
the content chunked up into multiple pieces can make it easier to manage.

This is the only message I'm going to respond to, though, since I basically
have nothing further to say.  (I've already updated my ballot position to
remove the Discuss.)  I'm really impressed with how you took my comments
and turned them into improved text in the document, especially in the
places where I did not have a clear proposal.  I also appreciate your
explanations in the places where my questions did not make sense or are
already covered by some of the fundamental documents in this space; the
gaps in my knowledge are slowly getting filled in.

> Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:
[...]
> [GH]Again, thanks for a thorough review and many good proposals for changes.

I must thank you again for your thorough responses; I feel like I am not
doing them justice by only sending this one short note, but do not want to
make you read through a repetitive set of "yes", "this sounds good", "thank
you", etc.

I read through the changes in the already-uploaded -19 (thank you again!),
and there were only two items that might be worth following up on (both in
section 3.16.3 of the -19):

You had proposed:

[GH] Would it be sufficient to insert the words "and reordering" in the
first two sentences in the paragraph to read: "The receiver SHALL monitor
the RTP sequence numbers of the received packets for gaps and packets
out of order.  If a sequence number gap appears and still exists after some
defined short time for jitter and reordering resolution, the packets in the
gap SHALL be regarded as lost."

I don't think this made it into the -19; my preference is to use your
proposed text that includes mention of reordering, but I do not insist on
it.


There was also a mention about the procedures for extracing T140blocks with
the redundancy procedure, where we currently say "T140blocks SHALL be
extracted in the following way.  The description is adapted to the default
redundancy case using the original and two redundant generations."  While I
am inclined to agree that the extension to the generic case with other
levels of redundancy is something that the reader can be expected to
perform, it feels a little incomplete to say that something "SHALL be
[done] in the following way" but give a not-complete/not-generic procedure.
Only for that reason do I prefer to have an explicit indication that the
procedure might need to be adjusted for a different level of redundancy; as
for the previous point, I do not insist on any change, though.

Thanks again,

Ben


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Hi Ben,

Thank you for the kind words.

The inserted words about packets out-of-order that you did not find in 
version -19 are there, but in the beginning of section 3.16.2, instead 
of in 3.16.3 where you expected to find them.

Please see furthe comments inline.

Den 2021-05-26 kl. 02:23, skrev Benjamin Kaduk:
> Hi Gunnar,
>
> On Tue, May 25, 2021 at 12:29:51PM +0200, Gunnar Hellstrm wrote:
>> Benjamin,
>>
>> Continuing the answers with the last part.,
> Thank you for going through them all.  To be clear, I was not waiting for
> you to finish before I started replying -- I just had a deadline earlier
> today and did not have a chance to do much with my email sooner.  Having
> the content chunked up into multiple pieces can make it easier to manage.
>
> This is the only message I'm going to respond to, though, since I basically
> have nothing further to say.  (I've already updated my ballot position to
> remove the Discuss.)  I'm really impressed with how you took my comments
> and turned them into improved text in the document, especially in the
> places where I did not have a clear proposal.  I also appreciate your
> explanations in the places where my questions did not make sense or are
> already covered by some of the fundamental documents in this space; the
> gaps in my knowledge are slowly getting filled in.
>
>> Den 2021-05-19 kl. 04:53, skrev Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker:
> [...]
>> [GH]Again, thanks for a thorough review and many good proposals for changes.
> I must thank you again for your thorough responses; I feel like I am not
> doing them justice by only sending this one short note, but do not want to
> make you read through a repetitive set of "yes", "this sounds good", "thank
> you", etc.
>
> I read through the changes in the already-uploaded -19 (thank you again!),
> and there were only two items that might be worth following up on (both in
> section 3.16.3 of the -19):
>
> You had proposed:
>
> [GH] Would it be sufficient to insert the words "and reordering" in the
> first two sentences in the paragraph to read: "The receiver SHALL monitor
> the RTP sequence numbers of the received packets for gaps and packets
> out of order.  If a sequence number gap appears and still exists after some
> defined short time for jitter and reordering resolution, the packets in the
> gap SHALL be regarded as lost."
>
> I don't think this made it into the -19; my preference is to use your
> proposed text that includes mention of reordering, but I do not insist on
> it.

[GH] They are there, in 3.16.2, where basic packet reception and gap 
analysis is specified.

it says:

" The receiver SHALL monitor the RTP sequence numbers of the received
  packets for gaps and packets out of order. If a sequence number gap
  appears and still exists after some defined short time for jitter and
  reordering resolution, the packets in the gap SHALL be regarded as
  lost. "

This is intended to require that packets are in order when they go to 
the loss analysis and data retrieval stages.

Very late packets out-of-order would be regarded lost. When you said 
that you could imagine cases of duplication, did you then imagine a 
procedure which would recover text also from late coming packets after 
the short time mentioned in the paragraph above? It would be possible, 
but I do not think it should be part of the general document, because it 
would possibly mean manipulating display buffers already presenting 
earlier received text.

I have created a paragraph for that, that can follow the first in 
3.16.2, but I do not think it adds any value to insert it. What do you 
think?

" Advanced procedures for recovering data from packets received out of
  order later than the short time for jitter and reordering resolution
  mentioned above MAY be implemented but are out of scope for this 
document.
  Such procedures would need to manipulate data in receive buffers and
  possibly also in presentation areas. The procedures MUST avoid
  duplication of already received data."

>
> There was also a mention about the procedures for extracing T140blocks with
> the redundancy procedure, where we currently say "T140blocks SHALL be
> extracted in the following way.  The description is adapted to the default
> redundancy case using the original and two redundant generations."  While I
> am inclined to agree that the extension to the generic case with other
> levels of redundancy is something that the reader can be expected to
> perform, it feels a little incomplete to say that something "SHALL be
> [done] in the following way" but give a not-complete/not-generic procedure.
> Only for that reason do I prefer to have an explicit indication that the
> procedure might need to be adjusted for a different level of redundancy; as
> for the previous point, I do not insist on any change, though.

[GH] I have made a try to generalize the description. I think it can 
replace the current limited one. What do you think?

"
3.16.3. Extracting text and handling recovery

  When applying the following procedures, the effects MUST be
  considered of possible timestamp wrap around and the RTP session
  possibly changing SSRC.

  When a packet is received in an RTP session using the packetization
  for multiparty-aware endpoints, its T140blocks SHALL be extracted in
  the following way.

  The source SHALL be extracted from the CSRC-list if available,
  otherwise from the SSRC.

  If the received packet is the first packet received from the source,
  then all T140blocks in the packet SHALL be retrieved and assigned to
  a receive buffer for the source beginning with the oldest available
  redundant generation, continuing with the younger redundant generations
  in age order and finally the primary.

  NOTE: The normal case is that in the first packet, only the primary
  data has contents. The redundant data has contents in the first
  received packet from a source only after initial packet loss.

  If the packet is not the first packet from a source, then if redundant
  data is available, the process SHALL start with the oldest generation.
  The timestamp of that redundant data SHALL be
  created by subtracting its timestamp offset from the RTP timestamp.
  If the resulting timestamp is later than the latest retrieved data
  from the same source, then the redundant data SHALL be retrieved and
  appended to the receive buffer. The process SHALL be continued in
  the same way for all younger generations of redundant data. After that,
  the timestamp of the packet SHALL be compared with the timestamp of
  the latest retrieved data from the same source and if it is later,
  then the primary data SHALL be retrieved from the packet and appended
  to the receive buffer for the source.

"

Regards

Gunnar

>
> Thanks again,
>
> Ben

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Just checking in: Did version -19 of this draft include all pending edits
after IESG Evaluation?  That is, is it ready to advance to the RFC Editor?

The DISCUSS has been cleared, but there were other comments that had drawn
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Thanks for checking.

In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording for section 3.16.3 
to make it general for any level of redundancy. I believe that that is a 
good improvement, so I want to make a version -20.

I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that may be possible 
later.(?)

Thanks,

Gunnar

Den 2021-05-26 kl. 10:25, skrev Murray S. Kucherawy:
> Just checking in: Did version -19 of this draft include all pending 
> edits after IESG Evaluation?  That is, is it ready to advance to the 
> RFC Editor?
>
> The DISCUSS has been cleared, but there were other comments that had 
> drawn replies, so I wanted to check before pushing the magic buttons.
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> Thanks,
> -MSK
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    <p>Thanks for checking.</p>
    <p>In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording for section
      3.16.3 to make it general for any level of redundancy. I believe
      that that is a good improvement, so I want to make a version -20.
      <br>
    </p>
    <p>I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that may be
      possible later.(?)<br>
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    <p>Thanks,</p>
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          pending edits after IESG Evaluation?  That is, is it ready to
          advance to the RFC Editor?</div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>The DISCUSS has been cleared, but there were other comments
          that had drawn replies, so I wanted to check before pushing
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        <div>Thanks,</div>
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RTP-mixer formatting of multiparty Real-time text
        Author          : Gunnar Hellstrom
	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-20.txt
	Pages           : 50
	Date            : 2021-05-26

Abstract:
   This document provides enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text
   mixing suitable for a centralized conference model that enables
   source identification and rapidly interleaved transmission of text
   from different sources.  The intended use is for real-time text
   mixers and participant endpoints capable of providing an efficient
   presentation or other treatment of a multiparty real-time text
   session.  The specified mechanism builds on the standard use of the
   Contributing Source (CSRC) list in the Realtime Protocol (RTP) packet
   for source identification.  The method makes use of the same "text/
   t140" and "text/red" formats as for two-party sessions.

   Solutions using multiple RTP streams in the same RTP session are
   briefly mentioned, as they could have some benefits over the RTP-
   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

   A capability exchange is specified so that it can be verified that a
   mixer and a participant can handle the multiparty-coded real-time
   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an RFC 8866 Session Description Protocol (SDP) media
   attribute "rtt-mixer".

   The document updates RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation".

   A specification of how a mixer can format text for the case when the
   endpoint is not multiparty-aware is also provided.


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On Wed, May 26, 2021 at 3:14 AM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m <
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> wrote:

> Thanks for checking.
>
> In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording for section 3.16.3
> to make it general for any level of redundancy. I believe that that is a
> good improvement, so I want to make a version -20.
>
> I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that may be possible
> later.(?)
>

I'm fine with tweaks to Acknowledgements during AUTH48 if you want to make
them that late, but if you know what changes you want to make now, you can
just include them in -20.

Either way I'll mark -19 as "Revised I-D Needed", and it'll revert to me
when you post -20.

Thanks for the update.


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    <p>Thanks for checking.</p>
    <p>In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording for section
      3.16.3 to make it general for any level of redundancy. I believe
      that that is a good improvement, so I want to make a version -20.
      <br>
    </p>
    <p>I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that may be
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ou know what changes you want to make now, you can just include them in -20=
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D Needed&quot;, and it&#39;ll revert to me when you post -20.</div><div><br=
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Murray,

-20 is just submitted with generalized retrieval procedure and full 
acknowledgement section.

Thanks,

Gunnar

Den 2021-05-26 kl. 17:08, skrev Murray S. Kucherawy:
> On Wed, May 26, 2021 at 3:14 AM Gunnar Hellström 
> <gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se <mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se>> 
> wrote:
>
>     Thanks for checking.
>
>     In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording for section
>     3.16.3 to make it general for any level of redundancy. I believe
>     that that is a good improvement, so I want to make a version -20.
>
>     I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that may be
>     possible later.(?)
>
>
> I'm fine with tweaks to Acknowledgements during AUTH48 if you want to 
> make them that late, but if you know what changes you want to make 
> now, you can just include them in -20.
>
> Either way I'll mark -19 as "Revised I-D Needed", and it'll revert to 
> me when you post -20.
>
> Thanks for the update.
>
>
> -MSK

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    <p>-20 is just submitted with generalized retrieval procedure and
      full acknowledgement section.</p>
    <p>Thanks,</p>
    <p>Gunnar<br>
    </p>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Den 2021-05-26 kl. 17:08, skrev Murray
      S. Kucherawy:<br>
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              <p>Thanks for checking.</p>
              <p>In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording
                for section 3.16.3 to make it general for any level of
                redundancy. I believe that that is a good improvement,
                so I want to make a version -20. <br>
              </p>
              <p>I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that
                may be possible later.(?)<br>
              </p>
            </div>
          </blockquote>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>I'm fine with tweaks to Acknowledgements during AUTH48 if
            you want to make them that late, but if you know what
            changes you want to make now, you can just include them in
            -20.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Either way I'll mark -19 as "Revised I-D Needed", and
            it'll revert to me when you post -20.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Thanks for the update.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>-MSK<br>
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Yup, I saw that shortly after I sent my last message.  Serves me right for
not checking.

-20 is approved for publication.  You should get the announcement within
the next several days.

-MSK

On Wed, May 26, 2021 at 8:11 AM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m <
gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> wrote:

> Murray,
>
> -20 is just submitted with generalized retrieval procedure and full
> acknowledgement section.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gunnar
> Den 2021-05-26 kl. 17:08, skrev Murray S. Kucherawy:
>
> On Wed, May 26, 2021 at 3:14 AM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m <
> gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> wrote:
>
>> Thanks for checking.
>>
>> In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording for section 3.16.3
>> to make it general for any level of redundancy. I believe that that is a
>> good improvement, so I want to make a version -20.
>>
>> I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that may be possible
>> later.(?)
>>
>
> I'm fine with tweaks to Acknowledgements during AUTH48 if you want to mak=
e
> them that late, but if you know what changes you want to make now, you ca=
n
> just include them in -20.
>
> Either way I'll mark -19 as "Revised I-D Needed", and it'll revert to me
> when you post -20.
>
> Thanks for the update.
>
>
> -MSK
>
> --
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s=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Wed, May 26, 202=
1 at 8:11 AM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=B6m &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@g=
haccess.se">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquot=
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    <p>Murray,<br>
    </p>
    <p>-20 is just submitted with generalized retrieval procedure and
      full acknowledgement section.</p>
    <p>Thanks,</p>
    <p>Gunnar<br>
    </p>
    <div>Den 2021-05-26 kl. 17:08, skrev Murray
      S. Kucherawy:<br>
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        <div dir=3D"ltr">On Wed, May 26, 2021 at 3:14 AM Gunnar Hellstr=C3=
=B6m
          &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se" target=3D"_bl=
ank">gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se</a>&gt;
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        </div>
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          <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8=
ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
            <div>
              <p>Thanks for checking.</p>
              <p>In a response to Ben this morning, I proposed wording
                for section 3.16.3 to make it general for any level of
                redundancy. I believe that that is a good improvement,
                so I want to make a version -20. <br>
              </p>
              <p>I also want to include some acknowledgements. But that
                may be possible later.(?)<br>
              </p>
            </div>
          </blockquote>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>I&#39;m fine with tweaks to Acknowledgements during AUTH48 i=
f
            you want to make them that late, but if you know what
            changes you want to make now, you can just include them in
            -20.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Either way I&#39;ll mark -19 as &quot;Revised I-D Needed&quo=
t;, and
            it&#39;ll revert to me when you post -20.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Thanks for the update.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>-MSK<br>
          </div>
        </div>
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The IESG has approved the following document:
- 'RTP-mixer formatting of multiparty Real-time text'
  (draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-20.txt) as Proposed Standard

This document is the product of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance
Working Group.

The IESG contact persons are Murray Kucherawy and Francesca Palombini.

A URL of this Internet Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix/




Technical Summary:

   Enhancements for RFC 4103 real-time text mixing are provided in this
   document, suitable for a centralized conference model that enables
   source identification and rapidly interleaved transmission of text
   from different sources.  The intended use is for real-time text
   mixers and participant endpoints capable of providing an efficient
   presentation or other treatment of a multi-party real-time text
   session.  The specified mechanism builds on the standard use of the
   CSRC list in the RTP packet for source identification.  The method
   makes use of the same "text/t140" and "text/red" formats as for two-
   party sessions.

   Solutions using multiple RTP streams in the same RTP session are
   briefly mentioned, as they could have some benefits over the RTP-
   mixer model.  The possibility to implement the solution in a wide
   range of existing RTP implementations made the RTP-mixer model be
   selected to be fully specified in this document.

   A capability exchange is specified so that it can be verified that a
   mixer and a participant can handle the multi-party coded real-time
   text stream using the RTP-mixer method.  The capability is indicated
   by use of an SDP media attribute "rtt-mixer".

   The document updates RFC 4103 "RTP Payload for Text Conversation".

   A specification of how a mixer can format text for the case when the
   endpoint is not multi-party aware is also provided.

Working Group Summary:

WG Last Call of "RTP-mixer formatting of multi-party Real-time text" was
announced on November 25, 2020:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/tjGlWlXL5a54nhgl5nRV3jkD_tk/

WGLC concluded on December 9, 2020.

Of the 6 participants responding to the WGLC, 3 supported Advancement to
Proposed Standard, and 3 respondents provided comments, which were addressed
by the author. 

Document Quality:
There are no existing implementations of the specification.  

Personnel:

Document Shepherd is Bernard Aboba. Responsible AD is Murray Kucherawy.


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Hi,

>> Unfortunately I don't think what you explain above is very clear in=20
>> the text.
>>=20
>> Consider the following.
>>=20
>> The offerer sends an offer. The offerer specifies the characteristics=20
>> that the offerer wants to receive. Similarly, the answer specifies the=20
>> characteristics that the answerer wants to receive - the answerer does=20
>> NOT specify what it is going to send. which I think the text is=20
>> currently describing.
>
> Sorry to sound confused, but maybe you could explain a bit better. To my =
understanding, it is the offerer that describes what it offers to send, and=
 not the other way around?=20
> Maybe I misunderstand something very fundamental? Sorry to ask these elem=
entary questions, but this is important for the text.

In SDP Offer/Answer, the default is to indicate what you are willing to REC=
EIVE :)

Typically your receiving capabilities also implicitly indicate what you are=
 able to send. For example, if I am indicating that I am willing to receive=
 codec X it normally means that I am also able to send codec X.

 But, there are cases where that is not true, especially when it comes to v=
ideo codes where you typically have more parameters associated with the cod=
ec, and one needs to explicitly indicate sending capabilities.=20

---

>> "The receiver SHALL ignore any unrecognized parameter or invalid=20
>> parameter value."
>>=20
>> First, In my opinion invalid parameters values shall trigger an error.
>>=20
>> Second, what is an unrecognized parameter?
>
> I wonder why we need to specify this, i.e. what a receive does about para=
meters it does not recognize? Essentially, this is a problem of "foreward c=
ompatibility". Wouldn't it
> be a matter of implementation whether the receiver accepts an offer (note=
 well, the receiver), and attempts to decode a stream on a "best effort" ba=
sis, keeping in mind that
> the stream itself includes additional means to identify required capabili=
ties necessary for a successful decode.
>
> If that is not an option, we would/could need means to identify the type =
of parameters in a foreward compatible way. I.e., conventions by which we w=
ould identify in the future
> parameters a receiver can safely ignore and attempt to decode, and parame=
ters a receiver cannot safely ignore.

I think it is fine to say that unrecognized parameters shall be ignored. It=
 is then up to future specifications to worry about backward compatibility,=
 rather than this specification worrying about forward compatibility.

>> Also, the text does not say what restrictions (if any) there are when=20
>> it comes to modify the stream during a session. Is it allowed to=20
>> modify any/all characteristics?
>
> My understanding is that you cannot modify characteristics during a sessi=
on. If you need to modify, you need to setup a new session and cancel the c=
urrent one. For JPEG XS stream decoders,
> one cannot expect that an instanciated decoder can decode from modified p=
arameters in mid-stream level. That is, if you start decoding in full-HD, a=
nd then stream parameters become 8K, the
> decoder will have to abort.

These kind of things need to be specified. I don't think it needs to be for=
bidden to try to modify something, because there could be text that strongl=
y recommends against doing it.

Regards,

Christer


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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13
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This is a structure that is typically used for SDP offer/answer procedures:

X.  SDP Offer/Answer Procedures
     X.1.  Generic SDP Considerations
	<Here you can describe things which apply to both offers and answers>
     X.2.  Generating the Initial SDP Offer
	<Here you describe how the initial SDP offer for the session is generated>
     X.3.  Generating the SDP Answer
	<Here you describe how the answerer generates the SDP answer, including wh=
ether parameters/parameter values need to be a subset of the parameters/par=
ameter values in the offer etc>
     X.4.  Offerer Processing of the SDP Answer
     7.5.  Modifying the Session
	<Here you describe constraints related to modification of the session, inc=
luding whether there are certain parameters/parameter values that you canno=
t modify etc>

Regards,

Christer

-----Original Message-----
From: avt <avt-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
Sent: keskiviikko 26. toukokuuta 2021 19.38
To: Thomas Richter <thomas.richter@iis.fraunhofer.de>; avt@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpe=
gxs-13

Hi,

>> Unfortunately I don't think what you explain above is very clear in=20
>> the text.
>>=20
>> Consider the following.
>>=20
>> The offerer sends an offer. The offerer specifies the characteristics=20
>> that the offerer wants to receive. Similarly, the answer specifies=20
>> the characteristics that the answerer wants to receive - the answerer=20
>> does NOT specify what it is going to send. which I think the text is=20
>> currently describing.
>
> Sorry to sound confused, but maybe you could explain a bit better. To my =
understanding, it is the offerer that describes what it offers to send, and=
 not the other way around?=20
> Maybe I misunderstand something very fundamental? Sorry to ask these elem=
entary questions, but this is important for the text.

In SDP Offer/Answer, the default is to indicate what you are willing to REC=
EIVE :)

Typically your receiving capabilities also implicitly indicate what you are=
 able to send. For example, if I am indicating that I am willing to receive=
 codec X it normally means that I am also able to send codec X.

 But, there are cases where that is not true, especially when it comes to v=
ideo codes where you typically have more parameters associated with the cod=
ec, and one needs to explicitly indicate sending capabilities.=20

---

>> "The receiver SHALL ignore any unrecognized parameter or invalid=20
>> parameter value."
>>=20
>> First, In my opinion invalid parameters values shall trigger an error.
>>=20
>> Second, what is an unrecognized parameter?
>
> I wonder why we need to specify this, i.e. what a receive does about=20
> parameters it does not recognize? Essentially, this is a problem of=20
> "foreward compatibility". Wouldn't it be a matter of implementation wheth=
er the receiver accepts an offer (note well, the receiver), and attempts to=
 decode a stream on a "best effort" basis, keeping in mind that the stream =
itself includes additional means to identify required capabilities necessar=
y for a successful decode.
>
> If that is not an option, we would/could need means to identify the=20
> type of parameters in a foreward compatible way. I.e., conventions by whi=
ch we would identify in the future parameters a receiver can safely ignore =
and attempt to decode, and parameters a receiver cannot safely ignore.

I think it is fine to say that unrecognized parameters shall be ignored. It=
 is then up to future specifications to worry about backward compatibility,=
 rather than this specification worrying about forward compatibility.

>> Also, the text does not say what restrictions (if any) there are when=20
>> it comes to modify the stream during a session. Is it allowed to=20
>> modify any/all characteristics?
>
> My understanding is that you cannot modify characteristics during a=20
> session. If you need to modify, you need to setup a new session and=20
> cancel the current one. For JPEG XS stream decoders, one cannot expect th=
at an instanciated decoder can decode from modified parameters in mid-strea=
m level. That is, if you start decoding in full-HD, and then stream paramet=
ers become 8K, the decoder will have to abort.

These kind of things need to be specified. I don't think it needs to be for=
bidden to try to modify something, because there could be text that strongl=
y recommends against doing it.

Regards,

Christer

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13
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Hi Christer,

I'm a little bit stuck in how to resolve and address your comments. On one =
hand I understand that we want the text to be clear, but on the other hand =
we do not want to repeat SDP specifics too much. SDP is just one way to neg=
otiate a session, and in the case of XS it is not the most commonly used on=
e. XS is not really intended for the classical video-call case, but rather =
to stream high-quality video content in a professional environment. It can =
be used for video conferencing, but better suited codecs exist for that use=
-case.

However, what is important to lay out correctly is the mapping of the media=
 parameters into the a=3Dfmtp field of SDP, because this is actually used b=
y many other protocols (so, just the media description part of SDP is used)=
.

Originally, we based our draft text on RFC 8450 (VC-2 HQ RTP Payload). In t=
hat respect, what is written there kind of fits exactly what we want with X=
S. Given that this is a published RFC, we are puzzeled a bit as to why our =
draft would need to elaborate so extensively on SDP. For sure, we'd like to=
 allow SDP offer/answer negotiation with XS. But this is very simple: each =
side tells the other side what it supports, and that's it. In XS the parame=
ters are declarative, meaning (at least that's what we want to express) tha=
t each parameter is represents an exact value and is not "inclusive" into a=
 range of lesser values. In other words, the other side cannot expect that =
a "lesser" value of a parameter can work.

Your proposed structure is just to elaborate and out of scope. As such, I w=
ould ask you to consider the example of RFC 8450 (where the use-case and pu=
rpose matches that of our draft). For example: Why do we need to state anyt=
hing specific on "Modifying the Session"? Isn't this layed out by SDP on ho=
w to modify a session? There's nothing specific to be put in our draft (we =
do not want to prevent, not suggest this functionality).

I hope you can understand our difficulty with your remarks and comments. Ou=
r proposal as such is to keep the text about SDP very short and simple. The=
 RTP Payload draft can be used with SDP, but it's certainly not the only wa=
y.

I will be preparing an updated draft which tries to be very minimal on the =
SDP specifics. Unless anything is technically wrong, I really hope you can =
agree to it and move forward with the publication process.

Best regards,
Tim.


-----Original Message-----
From: avt <avt-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
Sent: Wednesday 26 May 2021 18:43
To: Thomas Richter <thomas.richter@iis.fraunhofer.de>; avt@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpe=
gxs-13

This is a structure that is typically used for SDP offer/answer procedures:

X.  SDP Offer/Answer Procedures
     X.1.  Generic SDP Considerations
	<Here you can describe things which apply to both offers and answers>
     X.2.  Generating the Initial SDP Offer
	<Here you describe how the initial SDP offer for the session is generated>
     X.3.  Generating the SDP Answer
	<Here you describe how the answerer generates the SDP answer, including wh=
ether parameters/parameter values need to be a subset of the parameters/par=
ameter values in the offer etc>
     X.4.  Offerer Processing of the SDP Answer
     7.5.  Modifying the Session
	<Here you describe constraints related to modification of the session, inc=
luding whether there are certain parameters/parameter values that you canno=
t modify etc>

Regards,

Christer

-----Original Message-----
From: avt <avt-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpe=
gxs-13

Hi,

>> Unfortunately I don't think what you explain above is very clear in=20
>> the text.
>>=20
>> Consider the following.
>>=20
>> The offerer sends an offer. The offerer specifies the characteristics=20
>> that the offerer wants to receive. Similarly, the answer specifies=20
>> the characteristics that the answerer wants to receive - the answerer=20
>> does NOT specify what it is going to send. which I think the text is=20
>> currently describing.
>
> Sorry to sound confused, but maybe you could explain a bit better. To my =
understanding, it is the offerer that describes what it offers to send, and=
 not the other way around?=20
> Maybe I misunderstand something very fundamental? Sorry to ask these elem=
entary questions, but this is important for the text.

In SDP Offer/Answer, the default is to indicate what you are willing to REC=
EIVE :)

Typically your receiving capabilities also implicitly indicate what you are=
 able to send. For example, if I am indicating that I am willing to receive=
 codec X it normally means that I am also able to send codec X.

 But, there are cases where that is not true, especially when it comes to v=
ideo codes where you typically have more parameters associated with the cod=
ec, and one needs to explicitly indicate sending capabilities.=20

---

>> "The receiver SHALL ignore any unrecognized parameter or invalid=20
>> parameter value."
>>=20
>> First, In my opinion invalid parameters values shall trigger an error.
>>=20
>> Second, what is an unrecognized parameter?
>
> I wonder why we need to specify this, i.e. what a receive does about=20
> parameters it does not recognize? Essentially, this is a problem of=20
> "foreward compatibility". Wouldn't it be a matter of implementation wheth=
er the receiver accepts an offer (note well, the receiver), and attempts to=
 decode a stream on a "best effort" basis, keeping in mind that the stream =
itself includes additional means to identify required capabilities necessar=
y for a successful decode.
>
> If that is not an option, we would/could need means to identify the=20
> type of parameters in a foreward compatible way. I.e., conventions by whi=
ch we would identify in the future parameters a receiver can safely ignore =
and attempt to decode, and parameters a receiver cannot safely ignore.

I think it is fine to say that unrecognized parameters shall be ignored. It=
 is then up to future specifications to worry about backward compatibility,=
 rather than this specification worrying about forward compatibility.

>> Also, the text does not say what restrictions (if any) there are when=20
>> it comes to modify the stream during a session. Is it allowed to=20
>> modify any/all characteristics?
>
> My understanding is that you cannot modify characteristics during a=20
> session. If you need to modify, you need to setup a new session and=20
> cancel the current one. For JPEG XS stream decoders, one cannot expect th=
at an instanciated decoder can decode from modified parameters in mid-strea=
m level. That is, if you start decoding in full-HD, and then stream paramet=
ers become 8K, the decoder will have to abort.

These kind of things need to be specified. I don't think it needs to be for=
bidden to try to modify something, because there could be text that strongl=
y recommends against doing it.

Regards,

Christer

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-13
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Hi,

First, regarding RFC 8450, that specification was probably never reviewed b=
y the SDP directorate, so I can't really comment on that. But, I see that t=
he RFC e.g., says nothing about whether the SDP indicates sending or receiv=
ing capabilities.

Second, nobody mandates you to use SDP, and most part of the spec is protoc=
ol independent. But, the "SDP Offer/Answer" section describes the SDP offer=
/answer procedures, *IF* you choose to use that mechanism for negotiating t=
he session.

Third, I don't think you need very much text. The important thing is to say=
 what is placed in offers and answers, whether there are constraints when g=
enerating the answer, and whether there are constraints when it comes to mo=
difying the session. And, you do NOT  need to specify HOW to modify a sessi=
on, but whether there are payload-specific constraints when doing.

Regards,

Christer

-----Original Message-----
From: Tim Bruylants <TBR@intopix.com>=20
Sent: perjantai 28. toukokuuta 2021 9.49
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>; Thomas Richter <tho=
mas.richter@iis.fraunhofer.de>; avt@ietf.org
Cc: Jean-Baptiste Lorent <jb.lorent@intopix.com>
Subject: RE: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpe=
gxs-13

Hi Christer,

I'm a little bit stuck in how to resolve and address your comments. On one =
hand I understand that we want the text to be clear, but on the other hand =
we do not want to repeat SDP specifics too much. SDP is just one way to neg=
otiate a session, and in the case of XS it is not the most commonly used on=
e. XS is not really intended for the classical video-call case, but rather =
to stream high-quality video content in a professional environment. It can =
be used for video conferencing, but better suited codecs exist for that use=
-case.

However, what is important to lay out correctly is the mapping of the media=
 parameters into the a=3Dfmtp field of SDP, because this is actually used b=
y many other protocols (so, just the media description part of SDP is used)=
.

Originally, we based our draft text on RFC 8450 (VC-2 HQ RTP Payload). In t=
hat respect, what is written there kind of fits exactly what we want with X=
S. Given that this is a published RFC, we are puzzeled a bit as to why our =
draft would need to elaborate so extensively on SDP. For sure, we'd like to=
 allow SDP offer/answer negotiation with XS. But this is very simple: each =
side tells the other side what it supports, and that's it. In XS the parame=
ters are declarative, meaning (at least that's what we want to express) tha=
t each parameter is represents an exact value and is not "inclusive" into a=
 range of lesser values. In other words, the other side cannot expect that =
a "lesser" value of a parameter can work.

Your proposed structure is just to elaborate and out of scope. As such, I w=
ould ask you to consider the example of RFC 8450 (where the use-case and pu=
rpose matches that of our draft). For example: Why do we need to state anyt=
hing specific on "Modifying the Session"? Isn't this layed out by SDP on ho=
w to modify a session? There's nothing specific to be put in our draft (we =
do not want to prevent, not suggest this functionality).

I hope you can understand our difficulty with your remarks and comments. Ou=
r proposal as such is to keep the text about SDP very short and simple. The=
 RTP Payload draft can be used with SDP, but it's certainly not the only wa=
y.

I will be preparing an updated draft which tries to be very minimal on the =
SDP specifics. Unless anything is technically wrong, I really hope you can =
agree to it and move forward with the publication process.

Best regards,
Tim.


-----Original Message-----
From: avt <avt-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
Sent: Wednesday 26 May 2021 18:43
To: Thomas Richter <thomas.richter@iis.fraunhofer.de>; avt@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] SDP directorate review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpe=
gxs-13

This is a structure that is typically used for SDP offer/answer procedures:

X.  SDP Offer/Answer Procedures
     X.1.  Generic SDP Considerations
	<Here you can describe things which apply to both offers and answers>
     X.2.  Generating the Initial SDP Offer
	<Here you describe how the initial SDP offer for the session is generated>
     X.3.  Generating the SDP Answer
	<Here you describe how the answerer generates the SDP answer, including wh=
ether parameters/parameter values need to be a subset of the parameters/par=
ameter values in the offer etc>
     X.4.  Offerer Processing of the SDP Answer
     7.5.  Modifying the Session
	<Here you describe constraints related to modification of the session, inc=
luding whether there are certain parameters/parameter values that you canno=
t modify etc>

Regards,

Christer

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Hi,

>> Unfortunately I don't think what you explain above is very clear in=20
>> the text.
>>=20
>> Consider the following.
>>=20
>> The offerer sends an offer. The offerer specifies the characteristics=20
>> that the offerer wants to receive. Similarly, the answer specifies=20
>> the characteristics that the answerer wants to receive - the answerer=20
>> does NOT specify what it is going to send. which I think the text is=20
>> currently describing.
>
> Sorry to sound confused, but maybe you could explain a bit better. To my =
understanding, it is the offerer that describes what it offers to send, and=
 not the other way around?=20
> Maybe I misunderstand something very fundamental? Sorry to ask these elem=
entary questions, but this is important for the text.

In SDP Offer/Answer, the default is to indicate what you are willing to REC=
EIVE :)

Typically your receiving capabilities also implicitly indicate what you are=
 able to send. For example, if I am indicating that I am willing to receive=
 codec X it normally means that I am also able to send codec X.

 But, there are cases where that is not true, especially when it comes to v=
ideo codes where you typically have more parameters associated with the cod=
ec, and one needs to explicitly indicate sending capabilities.=20

---

>> "The receiver SHALL ignore any unrecognized parameter or invalid=20
>> parameter value."
>>=20
>> First, In my opinion invalid parameters values shall trigger an error.
>>=20
>> Second, what is an unrecognized parameter?
>
> I wonder why we need to specify this, i.e. what a receive does about=20
> parameters it does not recognize? Essentially, this is a problem of=20
> "foreward compatibility". Wouldn't it be a matter of implementation wheth=
er the receiver accepts an offer (note well, the receiver), and attempts to=
 decode a stream on a "best effort" basis, keeping in mind that the stream =
itself includes additional means to identify required capabilities necessar=
y for a successful decode.
>
> If that is not an option, we would/could need means to identify the=20
> type of parameters in a foreward compatible way. I.e., conventions by whi=
ch we would identify in the future parameters a receiver can safely ignore =
and attempt to decode, and parameters a receiver cannot safely ignore.

I think it is fine to say that unrecognized parameters shall be ignored. It=
 is then up to future specifications to worry about backward compatibility,=
 rather than this specification worrying about forward compatibility.

>> Also, the text does not say what restrictions (if any) there are when=20
>> it comes to modify the stream during a session. Is it allowed to=20
>> modify any/all characteristics?
>
> My understanding is that you cannot modify characteristics during a=20
> session. If you need to modify, you need to setup a new session and=20
> cancel the current one. For JPEG XS stream decoders, one cannot expect th=
at an instanciated decoder can decode from modified parameters in mid-strea=
m level. That is, if you start decoding in full-HD, and then stream paramet=
ers become 8K, the decoder will have to abort.

These kind of things need to be specified. I don't think it needs to be for=
bidden to try to modify something, because there could be text that strongl=
y recommends against doing it.

Regards,

Christer

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Thank you for the work put into this document.

I have only one minor comment about section 4.1: please expand "VP9 pyld hdr" somewhere in the text.

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
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        Title           : RTP Payload Format for ISO/IEC 21122 (JPEG XS)
        Authors         : Sébastien Lugan
                          Antonin Descampe
                          Corentin Damman
                          Thomas Richter
                          Tim Bruylants
	Filename        : draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-15.txt
	Pages           : 31
	Date            : 2021-05-31

Abstract:
   This document specifies a Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) payload
   format to be used for transporting JPEG XS (ISO/IEC 21122) encoded
   video.  JPEG XS is a low-latency, lightweight image coding system.
   Compared to an uncompressed video use case, it allows higher
   resolutions and frame rates, while offering visually lossless
   quality, reduced power consumption, and end-to-end latency confined
   to a fraction of a frame.


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