Subject: [Crisp] Last Call Comments: iris-dchk

From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 14 Oct 2005 09:06:44 -0400

Looks pretty good, with only a few minor things that might need
attention:

The XML and XML Schema specs referenced in the document aren't current.
Is that intentional, or should the most recent W3C specs be referenced
instead?

Section 5.1 could be clearer about what's being registered.  Are both a
namespace and schema being registered, or is just one or the other being
registered?

(I'm going to be repeating these comments for the other documents as
appropriate, but I'm separating them into separate threads for
discussion purposes.)

-Scott-

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