Subject: Re: [Detnet] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07

From: Alissa Cooper <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 5 Dec 2018 16:38:28 -0500

Matthew, thanks for your review. Pascal, thanks for your response. I entered an ABSTAIN ballot position, which does not block publication of the document.

Alissa

> On Oct 26, 2018, at 9:47 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> Many thanks, Matthew.
> 
> This will be fixed in the next update of the draft, already fixed in bitbucket.
> 
> Take care,
> 
> Pascal
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Matthew Miller <[email-masked]>
>> Sent: jeudi 25 octobre 2018 20:02
>> To: [email-masked]
>> Cc: [email-masked]; [email-masked]; draft-ietf-detnet-problem-
>> [email-masked]
>> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07
>> 
>> Reviewer: Matthew Miller
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
>> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
>> comments.
>> 
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> 
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Document:
>> Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
>> Review Date: 2018-10-25
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03
>> IESG Telechat date: N/A
>> 
>> Summary:
>> 
>> Ready to publish as an Informational Draft, though there are nits that ought to
>> be addressed before publication.
>> 
>> Major issues:  NONE
>> 
>> Minor issues:  NONE
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> * In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "an"
>> should be "an" in the phrase "a tunnel between and ingress and an egress
>> router".
>> 
>> * In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "of"
>> should be "or" in the phrase "... the path is end-to-end of a tunnel.".
>> 
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