Subject: Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-dnsext-wcard-clarify-07.txt

From: Kevin Darcy <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2005 18:23:33 -0400

A couple of minor proof-reading-type edits:

>2.2.3 Yet Another Definition of Existence
>
>    RFC1034's wording is fixed by the following paragraph:
>
>    The domain name space is a tree structure.  Nodes in the tree
>    either own at least one RRSet and/or have descendants that
>    collectively own at least on RRSet.
                               ^^ should be "one"

> 2.3 When does a Wild Card Domain Name is not Special

Improper grammar. Should probably be "When Is a Wild Card Domain Name Not Special?" or "When Does a Wild Card Domain Name Not Invoke [or "Incur"?] Special Processing?"

								- Kevin

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