Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review: draft-ietf-ltru-initial-04.txt

From: Elwyn Davies <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2005 20:34:10 +0100

Background for those on the CC list, who may be unaware of GenART:
GenART is the Area Review Team for the General Area of the IETF.  We
advise the General Area Director (i.e. the IETF/IESG chair) by providing
more in depth reviews than he could do himself of documents that come up
for final decision in IESG telechat.  I was selected as the GenART
member to review this document.  Below is my review, which was written
specifically with an eye to the GenART process, but since I believe that
it will be useful to have these comments more widely distributed, others
outside the GenART group are being copied.

Document: draft-ietf-ltru-initial-04.txt
Intended Status: Informational
Shepherding AD: Scott Hollenbeck
PROTO Shepherd: Randy Presuhn
Review Trigger: IETF Last Call, ends 6 September 2005

Review:
The document is a companion to draft-ietf-ltru-registry-12.txt. This document is 
generally in good shape and well written. It is essentially
ready for publication, subject to the caveat that I have not made any attempt to 
verify the actual proposed record contents.

One minor point that might be addressed if the draft is recycled for any other 
reason is that several of the rules in Section 2 are actually copied from the 
companion document.  In other circumstances this might be undesirable (double 
maintenance etc.) but given that this draft is essentially a 'one shot' it 
doesn't much matter as long as they have beeen copied correctly - which appears 
to be the case.  If the document is recycled it might be worth cross-referencing 
the original rules in ltru-registry.
Items 3,4,5 map to s2.2.4 of ltru-registry
Items 7-11 map to s3.2 and s3.3 (Item 12).

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