Subject: [Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt

From: Jari Arkko <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 05 Apr 2007 16:34:11 +0300

I added RFC Editor notes to correct the issues that you listed.
Thanks again for your review.

The 11i reference is not missing, but it is merged incorrectly
in the previous paragraph (1q reference).

Jari

Gonzalo Camarillo kirjoitti:
>
> Hi,
>
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
> posting a new version of the draft.
>
>
> Draft: draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
> Review Date: 27 March 2007
>
>
> Summary:
>
> This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.
>
>
> Comments:
>
> Abstracts should not contain references.
>
> Reference [IEEE802.11i] is missing.
>
> draft-ietf-msec-gsakmp-sec seems to have already been published as RFC
> 4535.
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gonzalo
>
>

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