Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-term-13.txt

From: "Vijay K. Gurbani" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 13 Jul 2007 15:39:51 -0500

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-term-13.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date:  Jul 13, 2007
IETF LC End Date: 2007-Jul-19
IESG Telechat date: 2007-Jul-19

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational.

Comments:

- Section 1 (S1): s/of the DUT and the/of the DUT, and the/
- S3.1: DUT is expanded here; if it should be expanded anywhere,
  it should be in S1.  In any case, I would assume that DUT is
  a well known acronym in the bmwg to simply assume that anyone
  reading a bmwg draft should know what it expands to.

Thanks,

- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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