Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-trill-adj-06

From: Pete McCann <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 24 Apr 2011 00:25:03 -0500

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Document: draft-ietf-trill-adj-06
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2011-04-23
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-04-28

Summary: Ready.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3.4:
   The special A0 event can transitions
SHOULD BE:
   The special A0 event transitions

Section 7.1:
   octets is processed normally
SHOULD BE:
   octets is processed normally.

   reasonably promptly  Delays
SHOULD BE:
   reasonably promptly.  Delays